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Next thing I know there is this kid I have never met in my life waking me up saying I was in his sleep. I stood up, wobbling a little. I squinted my eyes at the clock trying to make out the time. 12: 10. Great, lunch is almost over. Alice probably thinks I blew her off. Have I mentioned that I really hate today?
Now in the cafeteria I was making a bee line for Alice's table when Tanya – flanked by her cronies—cut me off.
"Swan, you ugly bitch. You're still showing your face around here? Do you have a death wish or are you just stupid! You can't just insult me and my Eddie and get away with it! Your life is going to be hell. And if you so much as look at me the wrong way I'll kick your ass all over this school!" I don't have time for this.
"Tanya why don't you grow up, get over yourself and leave me the hell alone. And for the love of god what did I say about calling the man Eddie, it is so annoying. Especially in that nasally thing you call a voice."
I soon realized our little exchange was being watched, by the whole cafeteria. I really need to get a better filter. I was pulled out of my internal reverie by a screech. Tanya's face was all red and splotchy, her cheeks all puffed up. She was pissed. But instead of being intimidating, she looked constipated. I couldn't help it I burst into fits of laughter. Everyone was looking at me as if they questioned my sanity.
There is yet another screech, but this one is followed by the loud smack of her hand making contact with my face. It stung like a bitch, but I didn't show that it affected me. I refuse to give her the satisfaction. I looked at her with a completely bored expression. I was beyond pissed and that smug-ass smirk she had wasn't helping her either.
Instinct took over. Before I could stop myself I snap back my fist and launch it right at her face. The moment of impact I hear a satisfying crunch. She looses her balance and falls to the floor. I heard a few people gasp. (They probably didn't think I even knew how to punch.) But other than that it was yet again silent. So I crouched right in front of her.
"If you ever lay another hand on me or anyone for that matter, you will have to see your doctor for a whole lot more than another nose job." My voice was deadly. She just sat there, tears streaming down her cheeks.
I straightened myself out and slowly walked over to Alice's table. Her whole family was following my every move with their eyes. They probably were waiting for me to attack someone. I turn to Alice; she surprises me yet again by having an even bigger smile than earlier
Sorry I didn't make it like I promised I fell asleep in Bio and no one woke me up. Not even my lab partner." I glanced pointedly at Edward when I said the last part. He seemed to still be in a state of shock from my previous actions. So he didn't notice the fact that everyone was waiting to say something.
He snapped back to reality soon after. He looked at his family, then me. That same weird energy connection was there. But this time I turned away. Saying.
"Cullen I know that we don't like each other that much but it would have been nice if you had woke me up."
"Sorry. You just looked so tired, I couldn't bring myself to wake you." that actually sounded like he was trying to be nice. That's different.
"Umm thank you……. I was tired."
"Well if we are going to have fun after our project is done your going to need lots of energy." Nice guy has officially left the building.
What ever Cullen I'll see you at my dorm when ever you get over your ego. Alice I really am sorry. I'll make it up to you I promise.
"I know you will!" she had that impish little grin. I don't even want to know what she is planning.
With that I left. I needed to talk to my calculus teacher and beg for my phone back. You show the guy up once bad all the sudden you're enemy number one. I was texting my best friend that lived back in forks, Jake. I'm mid text when he come and takes my phone right out of my hands. He was all 'no cell phones in class'. This is bullshit because in reality everyone else had their phones out too.
I walk into the room to see him alone, at his desk playing with a Rubicks cube. He has no life.
"Mr. Callahan can I have my phone back?" I'm not one to beat around the bush. He looks up at me with this board expression.
"no." then he goes back to tinkering with his Rubicks cube.
"What! Why not? Look I just need my phone ok! Give it back."
"Don't talk to me like that! I am your superior!" I was so pissed. I had a phone call that I really needed to make.
The warning bell rang; I needed to get to class. Besides if I don't leave soon something would most likely happen. Something they could expel me for.
"Whatever I'll just use someone else's" I didn't plan on using another person's phone I planned on using mine. But he didn't need to know that, or how I was going to get it.
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