Tenshi Amaya: so chapter 3 is up. anyway petrol disclaimer please.

Petrol: Disclaimer: Tenshi doesn't own One Piece or any One Piece characters (as much as she would like to) she does however own her OC Crescent Rain. (P.S. i am awesome)

Chapter 3

"A food place! I finally found one! Now I can eat! I'm starving! Old guy! Food! Food! Food! On the double!" the kid with the straw hat said.

"uhh, you should probably run away while you can…" the owner said.

"How come?"

"You just sent a marine flying into the wall just now." I answered.

"huh? Who sent someone flying?" straw hat said.

"You did" I said.

"I did? Who went flying? So what's with all these holes? What a weird shop! Is this your hobby, old guy?" straw hat asked.

"You're the one who did it." Everyone said simultaneously.

"You're strange. I like you." I said laughing.

"I like you too do you want to join my crew?" straw hat asked.

"Sure." I said.

Suddenly Ace came out of the hole only to be pushed to the ground by the marine.

"Straw hat!" he said "I've been looking for you, straw hat! So you did come to Alabasta!" the boy just stared at him eating food. "Quit eating!" straw hat just kept eating. Then suddenly he spat out the food he was eating.

"You're that smoky guy! What're you doing here?!" Straw hat said.

"Hold it." then he stuffed all the food in his mouth and said. "Thank you for the meal!" and took off running. I then left and ran after straw hat.

"So you're a pirate, pretty cool if you ask me. You should take a left here, oh and I never got your name. I'm Rain." I said to the straw hatted boy.

"I'm Monkey D. Luffy and I'm going to be king of the pirates." Luffy said.

Suddenly a girl came charging at luffy taking out her sword but luffy just ran up the building. Smoker then turned into smoke and started chasing after luffy. i just kept running below luffy and smoker and then luffy fell just beside me into a pile of crates and whatnot.

"You ok luffy." I asked concerned.

"Yeah come on." Luffy said as he started dragging me with him as the marines chased after us.

"Heya Zoro! Oh! Is that where you guys are?!" luffy said and ran off.

"You idiot! Go get rid of them first!" one of them said.

"What're you doing?! Let's get back!" luffy said still dragging me.

"Yikes! Yikes! Here he comes!" luffy said.

"He's such a pain." I said as smoker went to attack luffy. Then suddenly out of know were someone said "Heat Haze!" and fire engulfed the area stopping smoker's attack and when the fire died down it revealed…Ace.

"You, huh?" smoker said.

"Give it up." Ace said. "You may be smoke, but I'm fire. A fight between your power and mine would never end."

"Ace?!" luffy said.

"You haven't changed a bit, luffy." Ace said.

"Ace?! Is that you, Ace?! You ate a Devil Fruit?!" luffy said.

"Yep! The Flare-Flare Fruit!"

"Just to clarify things for myself what's a Devil Fruit?" i asked.

"Devil Fruits are mystical fruits that can give the eater many different kinds of strange and interesting abilities, depending on the type of fruit. There are three different classes of devil fruits Paramecia, Zoan and Logia. The most common of the three classes, users of Paramecia class Devil Fruits gain superhuman physical abilities or traits. The users of Zoan class Devil Fruits gain the ability to transform into an animal. The rarest of the three Devil Fruit classes, users of Logia class Devil Fruits gain the ability to transform themselves into an element." Ace explained. "Anyways, we can't chat like this! I'll catch up! You guys run! I'll hold these guys off! Go!"

"Let's go!" luffy said.

"But, luffy! Who is that guy?!" luffy's crew asked.

"He's my brother!" luffy said.

"Brother?!" everyone exclaimed.

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AN: this chapter was edited.