Tenshi Amaya: " please review because it fills my heart with rainbows. Anywho luffy disclaimer please."

Luffy: "Thinky, thinky. what's the disclaimer."

Tenshi: "It's in the script i gave you."

Luffy: "oh. hmm... I don't understand this."

Tenshi: "luffy you're holding it upside down." *turns script around*

Luffy: "oh, ok. Disclaimer: Tenshi doesn't own One Piece or any One Piece characters only her OC Crescent Rain. of course she doesn't own the One Piece because it's going to be mine."

Tenshi: "thank you luffy. and we all know you will be the pirate King. and now you can read."

Chapter 5

"I guess he'll be okay! Ace is strong!" luffy said.

"He's strong?" chopper asked.

"Yeah! He hadn't eaten the Flame-Flame Fruit a long time ago, but I still never beat him in a single fight! He's real strong!" luffy said.

"There's a flesh-and-blood person you could never beat?!" Nami said.

"I guess the big brother of a monster is an even bigger monster…" Usopp said.

"That's right! I lost all the time! But I'd win now if we tried!" luffy said.

"Who… can win what now?!" ace said as he jumped up onto the railing of the ship.

"Oh! Ace! This is the crew I was talking about!" luffy said.

"Oh! Thank you all for talking care of my little brother!" ace said.

"Eh? Oh, not at all." Everyone but I said.

"Well no need to thank me because I just joined." I said.

"Oh rain I didn't know you were here." Luffy said just noticing me.

"Hi luffy" I replied while waving at luffy.

"So why are you here, Ace?" luffy asked.

"Huh? Didn't you get my message in Drum?" ace asked. "Ah, never mind. No biggie." He said as luffy shook his head. "Anyways I'm glad I saw you. I'm here for a silly little task. I figured I'd try to meet up with you. Luffy… will you come join the Whitebeard Pirate Crew? With your friends, too, of course."

"NO WAY." Luffy said.

"Ahahaha… just thought I'd ask." Ace said. "Whitebeard is the greatest pirate I've ever known. I want to make him the Pirate King… not you, luffy…!"

"That's okay! I'll just fight him!" luffy said.

"Why don't you come inside if you want to talk? I'll make same tea." Sanji said.

"Oh no, don't worry about me. This'll only take a minute." Ace said. Then ace told us that he through the marines of course with his Devil Fruit. Then he gave luffy something and said that having a brother like luffy makes him worry and asked them to take care of luffy. Then Ace said that he was here chasing down a pirate named 'Blackbeard' who used to be a part of the Whitebeard pirates but committed the worst crime on a pirate ship which was killing a crewmate. And because he was Ace's subordinate Ace has to kill him.

"The next time we meet… will be at the Pirates' Summit." Ace said to luffy as he took off.

"See you later!" luffy said. The others started asking what Ace gave luffy and luffy said that it was a scrap of paper and that Ace told him to hold on to it. Then Nami sowed it to the back of the ribbon on his hat. Then Vivi told us to wear coats because it was so hot in the desert that you will get sunburned. Then sanji got depressed because we had to put on the coats. Are next destination was Yuba.

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AN: this chapter was edited.