Authors note: So, I noticed that the ratingsā¦and amount of people reading has been going down. Probably my fault, I haven't written in FOREVER! Sorry, anyways if your wondering what Max's dress looks like, it's on my profile. Just copy and paste the links. If you have better ideas, send them to me and I may just post them!!!
The Way You Make Me Feel
When I think of my first date I think of going to the movies, or maybe the mall or something.
I guess I never imagined FANG. Fang is so amazing, more romantic then you would expect to.
"Uh, hi." I said taking his hand.
"You look beautiful, Max." He smiled at me. His perfect teeth flashing.
We began walking, heading down the stairs (no elevator) and to the front door. The Concierge smiled at me winking. I smiled back.
Ohmygod, Max, don't freak, your okay. It's fine.
And maybe it was, for two seconds. The spinning door opened to the most romantic city I-or the world-has ever scene. But I wasn't looking at the city, or the lights, the bright starry sky, or the Eiffel tower high above us. But the gorgeous black stretch limo, gawking at me.
"Holy FEATHERS!" I said wide-eyed.
"Do you like it?" Fang asked joyful.
"Like it, I-I-I love it!"
He led me towards the side door, a man in a really cool-not kidding it was pretty cool-chauffer hat opened it for us. I slid inside.
* * *
I guess I shouldn't have betted on it being an early night. According to Fang we had three main stops to make.
The first time the limo stopped, and the door opened. We stood in front of a small restaurant called La Leffe. It was gorgeous, the perfect restaurant.
* * *
Fang didn't exactly have a second stop I guess. Instead we ended up walking on the long strip of land by the Eiffel tower; I can't remember what it's called. But it's pretty cool.
"C'mon!" Fang said pulling me by my arm.
"Fang, I wore the wrong shoes for this!" I said running behind him.
"Sorry Max, but we'll miss it!" He said pulling me towards the Eiffel. We charged inside, headed for the elevator.
A long line weaved its way around the "lobby" area.
"Max, I need to ask you a favor."
"Um, okay???"
"Take of your shoes."
I looked at him. Was he nuts?
"We have to take the stairs, and run."
I flung my shoes from my feat and began running up the flight of stairs. Luckily for us, we're able to run faster then humans-seriously humans are so, so, so slow!-and made it up there in the nick of time.
Fang was welcomed and we were brought over to the balcony on the other-side of gift shop area.
"Fang, what's going on?"
"Wait just look." He whispered, tilting my head towards the sky.
Suddenly a noise blew above us. A blimp past closely by. And there, imprinted on the side were the perfect three words. I-
A screech of noise caused me to jump. Erasers, flying-stupid-idiotic erasers.
"MAX!" Fang yelled. "It's MAX 2!" He pushed me to the ground prepared to fight for me. But the erasers had a different plan.
Suddenly a burst of flames exploded behind me.
Maybe dating should be left to the humans.
