If you noticed that there was never an authors note here before, it's because I'm adding it on July 27. I'm going through all the chapters one by one to fix little grammar mistakes... to impress my BFFFL. She's the Katie to me as Sadie... no joke, her name is actually Katie. Sorry Katharine. Couldn't help it. It's a TDI joke you would get better if you watched the show.


The First Eleven Campers

"Welcome to Total DRAMA ISLAND!" Chris called out to the camera. He stood on the edge of a metal dock. The island behind him had sandy beaches, beautiful scenery, and palm trees. "As, during the last season, we were almost sued for the living conditions, we have moved to a tropical island in the sunny Caribbean and are at Camp Wawanakwa 2." Chris pointed to a sign that was obviously taken from the first camp and had a sloppy '2' painted on it with red paint. "We're still on a budget, but it's a little better after last season's ratings."

"This season, once again, our teenage campers will be playing for time on television, cheesy tabloid fame, and an increased amount of money, $250,000. It might take them two weeks to blow all that cash. Now, I think I see our first camper approaching. Yes, I'd like you all to welcome Eddie."

A boat pulled up and a cute, yet small boy climbed out of the boat with several suitcases. His red hair was in a shag, horn-rimmed glasses covered his brown eyes, and several freckles dotted his face. His button-up shirt was lavender with the sleeves rolled up to his elbows and a loose blue tie was around his neck. As well, he wore tight blue jeans and black loafers. "Hello, World," Eddie said with a big smile. He turned to Chris. "And what a pleasure to meet you, Chris. You're such an inspiration."

"I am, aren't I?" He smiled his signature smile. "Tell us a little about yourself, Eddie."

"Well, I'm highly involved with theater at my school, and I star in most of the plays and musicals. My dream is to have my name in lights on Broadway someday…" a starry-eyed expression took over his face.

"Very interesting," Chris said in a voice that indicated he hadn't listened to a word Eddie had said. "Now, I'd like to welcome our next camper, Brooke."

The boat pulled up and a thin girl stepped off. She had light brown bangs, and long brown hair pulled into a low ponytail. Her eyes were blue and her skin was slightly tanned. She wore white sneakers, blue jeans, and a gray hoodie and held a novel in one arm. "Hello, Chris," she said. "It's good to be here at… Camp Wawanakwa 2?"

"Yep, that's where we are," Chris said. "Now, why don't you go join Eddie over there."

"Hi, I'm Eddie," Eddie introduced himself happily.

"Nice to meet you, Eddie, I'm Brooke."

Eddie leans in closer to Brooke. "Don't you think that Chris has a great ass?"

Brooke side-glanced at Eddie, thinking he was joking, but smiled and laughed as she noticed Eddie's eyes weren't leaving Chris's bottom.

"And I think I see our next camper approaching, yes, I do," Chris said. "I'd like to welcome Rufus to our lovely island." The boy on the boat looked more like a man. He stood tall, his shoulders broad, and his body showed he was in great shape. His dark blue eyes were dazzling and his hair was perfectly windblown. His black shoes shone, his black slacks looked to have been pressed, and his muscles bulged under his red Lacoste polo shirt. Rufus stood on the boat, not moving. "Uh, Rufus, you can step down from the boat now." Rufus turned his eyes on Chris and coughed. "Oh, right, I'm sorry. Welcome Rufus Whitherton to camp." Rufus coughed again. "The first."

"Thank you," Rufus said stepping down. "Um, grab my bag, will you, McClain." He waved at the camera, then flexed his muscles and nodded with a sexy smirk. He turned to the other two campers. He looked Brooke up and down, before smirking and raising his eyebrows.

Eddie stepped forward, hearts in his eyes, and held out his hand to Rufus. "I'm Eddie."

"Whatever, Freddy," Rufus said and stepped closer to Brooke. "And you would be?"

"Um... Brooke," Brooke said stepping away from him.

"I am going to love it here," Eddie whispered to Brooke and she giggled. Rufus's bags were thrown onto the dock, one rolling off into the water.

"And here's the next boat with our next camper," Chris announced. "And will you all welcome Todd to the island."

"No, I will not demote myself," Rufus said.

"Nice to meet you too," Todd said jumping off the back of the boat and landing on the dock. He was not quite as tall as Rufus, but he still looked strong. He had sparkling brown eyes and short red hair. He wore a medium blue t-shirt over a white long-sleeved shirt, khaki pants, and sneakers. He had several golden teardrop earrings in each ear and a shark tooth hung across his chest from a black yarn around his neck.

"Hi there," Eddie said happily. "My name is Eddie."

"Nice to meet you," Brooke said shaking Todd's hand and smiling slightly. "I'm Brooke."

Todd motioned toward her book. "Do a lot of reading?"

She blushed a little and nodded. "Yeah, it's a hobby."

"So, you're like a Brookworm?" Todd asked.

Eddie giggled. "Wow, that's clever. I never would have thought of that."

"You don't mind if I call you that, right, Brookworm?" Todd asked.

"If you insist," Brooke said blushing a bit.

"Our next camper is Vanessa," Chris said as a curvy girl arrived on the next boat. She wore a dark denim miniskirt, a hot pink camisole with a bit of lace along the top. She had a white cashmere sweater tied around her waist. Her slightly wavy dark brown hair fell over her shoulders and she looked around with her caramel colored eyes. Chris reach out to help her off the boat as she stepped lightly in her hot pink wedges onto the dock.

"Actually, I prefer to go by Nessa," she said in a strong, yet girly voice.

"So, I hear you're a beauty pageant queen," Chris said. "And a model."

"Only part time," Nessa said.

"So, Nessa, is there anything you'd like to say to start off your Camp Wawanakwa 2 experience?" Chris asked.

Nessa frowned slightly. "My daddy paid you to give me extra time on the air, didn't he?"

"Just a little bit," Chris said.

Nessa rolled her eyes and stepped back to the other campers.

"Hey, sweet thing," Rufus said with a smirk and nodding at her.

"I would prefer if you didn't call me that."

"What would you like me to call you, then?" Rufus asked.

"Nessa works fine," she said. "I've dealt with your type in my business. You're not going to fool me with your charms."

"You can fool me with your charms," Eddie said to Rufus. Rufus just rolled his eyes and stepped away.

"And our next camper is in sight," Chris said as a boat approached quickly. When the boat arrived, a short, thin, pale boy with black hair and grey eyes climbed onto the dock. He wore jeans, a white long sleeved button-up top with a striped sweater over it. Once he grabbed all his bags, he turned to the other campers. "This is Zak," Chris said as Zak made his way to the dock.

"Hey, guys," Zak said. "Oh, this is awesome. I'm so excited. But, I need to get my bags to shore where they won't fall over the edge."

"Need some help with that?" Todd asked stepping forward, but Zak hefted his heavy bags and managed to find the shore and place his bags where his gadgets would be safe. He quickly opened his backpack and pulled out his computer. He frowned upon opening it.

"What's wrong?" Brooke asked.

"No internet access," Zak said closing his laptop and placing it back in his bag.

"Too bad," Chris said shaking his head slowly. "If only there was a way to contact the outside world, oh, wait, only I can." He smiled. "I believe that stream of water approaching is out next camper. Yep, everyone, here comes Erik!"

A jet ski was quickly approaching and a tall, athletic boy with a black fauxhawk and grey eyes approached. He pulled to a stop just short of the dock and smiled at everyone. "Hey, it's nice to be here with you all," he said. He wore a Toronto Raptors sweatshirt, basketball shorts, and Vans, and didn't seem to mind that he was dripping wet.

"Well, he's certainly a little better than some of the guys here," Nessa said to Brooke, who, she realized was not paying the least bit attention to her; instead Brooke was stealing a glance at Todd. Erik pushed the jet ski to the shore, his bags being on a raft that was attached to the ski.

"When will another girl arrive, McClain?" Rufus asked, trying to check his reflection in the water.

"Be careful what you wish for," Chris said, "because here comes Rebecca, or, as she likes to be called—"

"It's Bex," she stated jumping off the boat onto the dock. She wore a black tube top with a skull on it, jean short shorts, black skater shoes, and had skull earrings dangling from her ears. Her long black hair covered her left eye, but her right eye shone bright blue. She was slightly paler than normal, average height, relatively thin, and gorgeous.

"Where have you been all my life?" Todd said with a smirk.

"Skate park, probably," Bex said with a smirk right back.

"Aren't your shorts a little… too short?" Eddie asked. "They don't look like they can possibly be comfortable."

"Ignore the gay one," Rufus said.

"What makes you think that he's gay?" Zak asked, still standing back on the shore. He wasn't about to be on a dock that could possibly collapse.

"I am," Eddie admitted. "Any takers?"

"Oh, too bad you're into dicks," Bex said. "I think you're kind of cute."

"I get that a lot," Eddie said returning a smile.

"Excuse me," an angry voice called out from the far end of the dock. Everyone turned to see a Japanese girl in a plaid long sleeved shirt, jeans, and black sneakers. Her black hair fell all the way to the ground with bangs that covered her grey eyes for the most part.

"And it seems that Christie arrived on the same boat as Bex, without anyone realizing," Chris said. "Be careful, everyone, she's a little dangerous."

"Trained to kill," Christie said. Everyone cracked a smile and laughed lightly. "What?" Christie questioned. "That wasn't a joke."

"Where's your gun, Cousin It?" Todd asked.

"Here," Christie said lifting the pant leg to show a concealed gun on her ankle. She pulled a knife hidden in her shirt and twirled it. "I prefer use this though."

Everyone took a step back.

"And it seems our next camper has arrived," Chris said as another boat pulled up to the dock. "I'd like you all to meet Alexander."

"I'd rather not," Rufus said. "Can we get his whole summer over with and just give me the winnings already? We all know I'm going to win."

"I wouldn't be so sure of that," Alexander said jumping from the boat. He had a blue shirt with Music Lover written across the front, blue jeans, and blue sneakers. His skin was tanned as he was half Indian, half Caucasian, his dark brown hair was a bit long, and his eyes were hazel. He stood tall and nicely built. "And, please, feel free to call me Alex." He looked around. "Let's get this party rockin!"

"Enlighten us on your plan to get it 'rockin' please," Bex replied.

"We could use a little music," Nessa said.

"And get out of the sun," Brooke said fanning herself with her hand.

"Yeah, at least let's get off this metal dock," Erik said. "We're getting cooked alive right now."

"Oh, you guys are no fun," Chris called out. "And it seems our final contestant of the day has arrived. Everyone, welcome Ashlynn!"

Everyone looked to see as short, Hispanic girl, with brown hair pulled into a ponytail and hazel eyes was standing on the deck of the arriving boat. She threw her bags onto the dock, then jumped gracefully on the deck, landing with a smile.

"Nice landing," Erik said approaching to help her with her bags.

"Nice legs," Rufus said quietly so that only Eddie and Nessa could hear as he noticed her denim shorts. "Not to mention, nice ta-tas as well," he said in reference to her red tank top.

"Hey, Christie, may I borrow your gun for a moment?" Nessa asked.

"I'm sorry, but that's against my honor code," Christie replied.

"You're an assassin, and yet you live by an honor code?" Zak asked.

"Yes. Does that seem weird?"

"Just a bit, Christie," Chris said. He turned to the camera. "Stay tuned after the commercial break as we bring you tomorrow morning and the arrival of the next eleven campers."


Hey. If your character didn't show up, the next eleven campers are Pheobe, Manny, Walter, Vinson, Genevieve, Russell, Madison, Gail, Autumn, Jamie, and Paige. Thanks to those that supplied a character, and I'm sorry if you didn't make it, but better luck in other stories.