Originally, I wanted to write in third person... I realize that if I do this in Christina's perspective, I will continue the story.
Chapter 2 consists of Christina's fear (darkness, I made it up; not real), her fight against Drew (seventh jumper v four last jumper), and her fright (the chasm with Eric).
Yes I'm changing the story around; just to get on my comfort zone... Lol.
Chapter 2: Fear. Fight. Fright.
"Alright listen up! This is Dauntless: We're not your parents so expect us to walk you throughout the phases. In order to become an official member, you must pass the initiation: First jumping off the train whilst it's moving. Here's your second task; Leap of Faith." Max chuckles as many of the newbies has reveal there first fear. I tried to hide it; jumping off of a train wasn't bad. But this -a dark hole without any light- may take me to hell. A cold shiver went below my spine as a tall guy shouts, "Who's first?". Peter -Thanks a lot fucktard - gladly points at Tris, "She wants to jump." She was stunned but I wasn't. "Well, whatcha waiting for? Do you need a shove, Stiff?"
"Haha, that's a cool-" In an instant blink, for the first time, Peter was jostled and slammed against the brick wall, blood began to trickle on the side of his ear. "Listen here, initiate. Nothing's cool when you're life's at stake. For those who don't know me: I'm Eric. When I'm giving an advice, do NOT interfere. I'm not as nice as Max, and Stiff, ya better jump or become Factionless." He releases Peter but didn't help him up. Bastard. This is Eric? I passed out earlier and have not seen him... grey blue orbs, tall and solid (according to my eyes, 6'2), bold, strong. Brave. Fearless. Undaunted.
An actual dauntless member.
I don't like him at all.
"Okay, I'll jump." I turned faster than the other's, my mouth in agape by Tris. "Are you-" I tried to say but my mouth was covered and I was held back. "What did I said?" Eric's voice slithers among my caramel skin. "What faction?"
"Candor."
"I figured you guys are the most voluble group. You just lost some points." He then place his hand on my mouth. "Don't try anything stupid, Candor." I gave a 'I-wouldn't-dare' look as we watch Tris stands at the ledge. I swallowed hard. Not because of Tris; Eric. I couldn't understand what's poking my back or why is he still holding onto me. Whenever I wiggle, his grip tightens. I felt like a prisoner ensnared in shackles as he would struggle from his restrain movements. I was distracted that sixth jumper has leaped into the black hole. Tris? What happened to her? My eyes searched for her frantically, only to find out that I'm being carried by the strong man. So much for being small. "Wait! Where's Tris?!" I cried. He looked at me coldly. "Dead. And you're next." Fuck no. I elbowed his shoulder blades and slapped him angrily. When he looked up, I knew I was in big trouble. "N-no. I'm scared of the darkness." I whimper in defeat. Eric suddenly grins and I catch a glimpse of Max's face: Horror. "Does it look like I give a fuck?" Eric responded harshly, before shoving me at the ledge of the building. "Cowardice: Something we do not accept. In order to vanquish fear, one must face it with bravery. It does not include sitting on your pretty ass and look good for it. Lived with it. Embrace it. You don't have to feel afraid; just understand it." He spoke softly to me, and I fell for it.
His words were inspiring. I attempted to thank Eric, but he shoves me into the hole. "You are so fuucking dea-fuuuccckk!" I shriek aloud, my voice echoes, hoping that he heard this inane threat. I rolled slowly - partially of how fast I'm going - the tremulous winds blew roughly as I cover my face, so that others can recognize me at the funeral. My body bounced once. Then again. And again until I heard a godly voice calling my name. "Christina! You did it!" Tris hugs me tightly. I notice the other five jumpers were also alive."Congratulations. What is your name?" A man asked. He must be a leader also. "Christina."
"Four."
"No. Seven."
"My name is Four."
"Okay One-Two-Three Fours your name." I snorted, gaining a small laugh from everyone but the number man himself. "You better watch it." He warned but I wasn't afraid of him. I rolled my eyes and Tris pinched my side. "Ow! What the hell?" I snarled at the blonde. "Are you insane? Do you want more enemies?" She snapped. "We need him."
"Sounds like you want him." I tease at her. "N-n-no..." Her cheeks became rosy red and I felt my lips twitches in excitement. "Hey Four!" I called out to him while Tris try her hardest to run but I kept her near. As he accosts, I blurted out an apology, much to his surprise. "Tris, you need to apologize also."
"Wha-?"
"For not stopping my rude ass earlier." I bit my tongue and watched his expression went from moody to a slight lust. "Um... sorry." Her blush deepens and I caught him smiling at her.
Oh yeah.
They like each other. Gross.
Lunch was fine. Many of the members greeted us with drinks and hugs but some would grunt and groan; I couldn't give a shit about em. We sat with several dudes, one who seem to have an eye problem. "Uh... are you okay? Do you need help?" I said. "As long as it's from you." He replied, causing us to roar in laughter. "Corny ass motherfucker." I coughed. "I'm Will, Not C.A.M.F." He grins at me. "This is Albert."
"But you can call me Al." He spoke quietly, I barely heard him. "I'm Christina and this is Tris." I took a potato chip and popped it in my mouth. Will continues to stare, much to my chagrin. But I enjoyed being watched. "You're pretty." He mouths at me and I smiled. "Welcome to Dauntless, initiates!" Eric shouts, his arms folded, waiting for everyone's attention. "In fifteen minutes, we have our first training: combat. After eating, head out to your rooms and change; you won't be using those clothing anymore. One more thing: the room that you all are living in is a vast studio, which means no privacy." All of boys raised their cups and the girls whined. As we 'celebrate', I saw Eric staring at me. His eyes were on me and my body froze.
This asshole.
...
"Can we talk?" Will was leaning on his bed, thankfully wearing a towel that hung above his adonis belt. He had just gotten out of the shower a few minutes ago; brave enough to be watched by horny girls. "What do you think we're doing now?" I replied with a hint of sarcasm. I finally manage to put on the boot and tied it tightly. Somebody's getting hurt today, My conscience told. "I'm talking about relationship, wise chick." His lips curled as I almost choked on my saliva. "What? We just met!"
"I know bu-"
"Sorry Will. I- I can't... I have to go." I stood up and head to the training grounds. I didn't know where was I heading because I couldn't discern what he was talking about. "Candor!" I flinched and found myself pinned to the wall as the man continues to scowl at me. "Next time, look up to see where ya heading, unless you want to come to my office."
"Why would I?"
"This is the only path to my loft and office. The next time I see you here, don't think I'll go easy on you. Take it as a warning."
"Hmm. I've heard worse." What the fuck is wrong with me?! He's a leader, not an initiative! You already have one death wish, do you want another one?! "Christina. Look at me." I heard him clearly but refuse to oblige. "Fine then. See you at the training grounds, that is, if you know how to get there."
Fuck me.
...
Combat is more of my style. Honesty was just my personal. Becoming a brave, belligerent woman is what I always wanted to be. Tris leans on me, apparently exhausted from her first fight against Molly. Even though she lost, Tris first punch caused Molly to lose several of her teeth. We watched as Peter tackles an initiate and beats him to a pulp. "Match is over. Peter wins." Four carries the severely injured initiate off the ring as Peter passes me, I felt the urge to back away from, fearing that he may attack me from behind. "Woah woah! Hold your buttons... I'm not gonna hurt you... yet." He winks at me and I pretended to hurl in response. "Next up! Christina vs Drew!" Eric stared at me with a look I haven't seen before. Good luck? Determination?
This is going to end bad.
The second part to this chapter will be up tomorrow!
Grew tired of typing so yeah.
I have proof-read (sorta) this chapter.
Also some of the spacing may look odd because I'm on mobile as of now.
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