Well, here's chapter 11, wow!! I would never thouth that I could reach this much!!! Thanks a lot to everybody that had review on my story!!
Please review!!!
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Flippy was still on the floor, he still feel the pain of the last hit Eloise give to his evil side, he get up slowly and he say to his evil side "don't try to fight againts her again!! I always get the conscecuences of your stupidity!!" his evil side answer "don't blame me!! How could I know that she would fight so unfair if I don't know her?!?"
Flippy sighted and sit on the coach, he finally had someone to talk with and his evil side try to kill her!!!
"well, I think my destiny is to be along for ever" he said to himself while look a picture that was on a table, it was a picture of all the ones that were on his last birthday party, Flippy feels terrible, Flaky had made him a party and he screw it up
Flippy looks at Flaky, he felt strange everytime he was near to her, maybe it was…love?, Flippy think on asking her out, what will she say? Would she accept? What if not? What if yes? He was every confussed, he needed help, maybe, but from who?
He couldn't think on somebody, until someone reached his head, Eloise!! Yeah!! She was perfect!! She was a girl, maybe she know about that kind of things and maybe she would help him!!!
Flippy get up excited, he finally know someone that could help him…but then he sit down again, depressed, he think for himself "how can I think that there's a possibility Flaky can like me? I think I ever scare her, besides, maybe Eloise would never want to see me again" he was thinking this when his evil side said "we don't need anyone, specially that stupid purcoupine and that f*ckuing bear!!" "shut up" Flippy answer mad
Meanwhile, on Petunia's house:
"this is impossible!" Eloise complain, Petunia, Giggles and her had been trying to take out the dranduff from Flaky's quills for an hour and they couldn't take it out
"well, I-I think I must stay like this" say Flaky, a little bit sad, Eloise, that had taken the thing now like a challenge say "of course not!! I'm going to leave you without dranduff" she take a comb and try to brush the quills "maybe if I try here…ow!! stupid quill…maybe from here…ow! Lets try here…ow! I can't!!" she sit on the floor angry, she looks at her arms and hands, they had some blood because Flaky's quills injured her
Petunia noticing that Eloise was dirty, get scared, she took Eloise from the one of her arms and take her to the bathroom, there, she start washing Eloise's arm saying "your arm is dirty, I must clean it" Eloise, confused, asked "why you wash my arm? I can put some water on it, I don't need soap for some little injures" because she noticed that Petunia didn't answer she look at Giggles and put a face like saying "what's wrong with her?" Giggles answer her "she have an problem, she wants everything be clean"
Eloise look at Petunia washing her arm when she got an idea "I KNOW!!" she shouted eager, Petunia let her go saying "what did you get?" Eloise get a big cuvette and fill it with water, then she put shampoo on it and she mixed it, she aprovached Flaky and take her to the shower and she told her "close your eyes"
Flaky closed her eyes just like Eloise told her, then Eloise, Giggles and Petunia turned around the cuvette on Flaky, washing away all the dranduff, Flaky shouted, she didn't expected that, she opened her eyes, and look and Eloise asking her "why you did that?!?" Eloise didn't answer and Giggles aprovached Flaky with a mirror and she put it infront of her saying "what do you think Flaky?"
Flaky get stunned, she looked at herself on the mirror, she looked really diferent without her dranduff, she smiled and look at her friends saying "thank you"
The girs smiled and then Petunia say "now we must look for something that make you look more like a girl" Eloise look at her and say "what?!? We just need to put her some eyelashes and that's all!!, I wear a military uniform that's not very girlish and I don't look like a boy" Petunia look at her and say "yes, but you have hair and you pick it on a very girlish ponytail" Eloise didn't know what to answer and say "touché"
"well, is enough girls" say Giggles, she didn't like to see her friends argue "we just need to put Flaky some eyelashes" the three girls agree and take out some make-up and start making-up Flaky, meanwhile Giggles was working on Flaky, Petunia asked Eloise "why you think Handy was my boyfriend?" Eloise smiled and say "because he get very nervous when he's near to you" Giggles say "yeah, Petunia, you hadn't never noticed what he feels for you?" she giggled and continue talking "you know, you both make a good couple" Petunia blushed and then Eloise say "wait here!! I'm going to show you something" and she run to look for her backpack (A/N she didn't leave it on the hospital, she keep it with her) she get back with it and she take out of it the picture she founded on Handy's truck and she showed it to Petunia, who blushed deeper when she looked at the picture, she look at Eloise and say "where do you found it?" Eloise giggle and say "on Handy's truck" Petunia just stay stunned looking at the picture and she didn't say something
Giggles look at Eloise and asked "well Eloise, besides us, Handy, and Flippy, who else you had know?" Eloise think for a moment and she answer "hmmm, Cuddles, Nutty, Splendid… oh, and Russel, he had been so kind with me!!" Giggles, Petunia and Flaky looked at eachother smiling, Eloise say confused "what?" Giggles say "so, he had been kind with you?" and Eloise answer "yes, why?" then Petunia say "well, he had been kind in what way?" Eloise, even more confused asked "w-what do you mean?" Flaky answer smiling "they say if you don't think if is the posibility that he LIKES you" Eloise get stunned and she blushed a bit, she think for a moment and say "I-I don't know, m-maybe yes" the three girls giggle and Giggles answer "well, now the important thing is, you like him back?" Eloise look at the floor, she blushed a bit and say "w-well…y-yes…a bit" after hearing this, Petunia, Giggles and Flaky start singing "Eloise and Russel sitting in a tree, K-I-S-S-I-N-G!! first comes love, then comes marriage, then comes a baby in a baby carriage!" Eloise say sarcastic ".ha. it was sooo funny"
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well, that's all, hopes you like it, and sorry if it take time, I was ideas-less ^ ^
P.D. all the characters with the exception of Eloise belong to Mondo Media and bla, bla, bla, I'm too lazy for write everything -_-U
