Well, here's chapter 12 of my story, sorry if I haven't update but I was ideas-less and very lazy too, so now I have ideas (nobody and anything will take out this lazy that's inside me XD)
Well, here's the next chapter hopes you like it!!
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"I don't know girls" Flaky say "I like how I look but…" "but what" Eloise asked "is just that I'm too nervous of what does the people will think about me" "naaaa, don't worry Flaky" Eloise say cheerful "I bet that a lot of people think that I'm too agressive, that I can be kinda freak and other things but I don't care I just say: that's me, deal with it!!" Flaky giggle nervous, she wished she could be so secure like Eloise
"ok, so what about to go to a walk girls?" Petunia asked and all the girls nodded yes
The four girls were walking on the town when a gas station explode, inmediately Flaky, Petunia and Giggles turn to see Eloise, they hardly know her and she was a militar, what if she had the same problem as Flippy?!?
Eloise just stay there and say "what?" when she say that the three girls sigh in reliefe but then a car that get launched by the explosion hit Gliggles killing her inmediately and her blood cover Petunia, Flaky and Eloise
Petunia look at herself and start running while she was shouting "I'M DIRTY!! I'M DIRTY!!"
Flaky look at herself too then she look at Eloise who was cleaning her uniform very calm with a piece of paper, Flaky get stunned and asked her "how can you be so calm?!? Our friend had just die!!" Eloise clean her dogstags and say "on war, I used to see people die and kill, I even kill many times, on any other place I would provably be very sad but here death is not permanet, so I won't cry here, besides I promise myself that death will never see me cry again"
Flaky get confused and say "what a strange promise, why you did it?" Eloise sigh and say "I…I just don't feel like…tell it to someone right now…if you want to know it, please ask Russell, he know what happened" Flaky put a blank expression and say "why he know it?" "because I told it to him, but I don't want to tell it ever again" Eloise say while she was walking "why?" Flaky asked, she wanted to know, Eloise continue walking and say "for keep everyone safe" Flaky didn't get why she said that but she noticed that Eloise didn't wanted to talk about it, so she walked next to her in silence
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now they were walking in the park and Eloise sighed, she looks at Flaky and say "I'm sorry, I didn't meat to be so...hard" Flaky look at her and say "no problem, and so what if you don't want to talk about it, its ok"
Eloise start singing the song "so what" by pink, and Flaky just listen to her, but then Eloise start singing even more and more loud until she was shouting the lyrics, Flaky look aruond and say "Eloise, not so loud, everyone is looking at us" Eloise stop singing and say still shouting "so what? I don't care if they look at me!!" Flaky say "yeah, but I care if they look at me with my new image" Eloise shout even harder "so? I change your image to make the world notice it!! Comn Flaky sing with me!!" Flaky giggle shyly and start singing too, but very low, then she start singing a bit louder then the song ended and Eloise look at the purcoupine and say "very good Flaky!! Now lets sing another song!!" Flaky was about to say something when a disco ball fall from nowhere, the two girls look at it and they say "oh no"
Disco Bear approvach them dancing and say "hey there pretty chicks, who want to dance?"
Eloise and Flaky sighed and start walking away from the bear, but he approvach Flaky, put his arm aruond her shoulder and say "hey beauty, I hadn't see you before, where had you been all my life?" Flaky look at him and say "well for you just crossing the street" Disco Bear get stunned and asked "FLAKY?!?"
Eloise try not to laugh too hard at Disco Bear's reaction and she just waited for see Flaky's answer
Flaky just stay there, without saying nothing, with a sad expresion, when Eloise noticed that, she look at the bear and say "of course she's Flaky!! Can't you recognize Flaky when you see her? Huh? Answer me!!" Disco Bear look at her, he let go Flaky and say "hey, I know you, you are the girl that it me in the maket, aren't you?" "yeah, so?" Eloise answer
"you didn't gave me your name" Disco Bear say. Eloise sighed and say "Eloise" Disco Bear smiled and aprovach more to her "well, Eloise, I like aggressive girls, what about a kiss?" he say while he aprovach his mouth to Eloise's face, Eloise try to leave but he hold her by the hips, he was about to kiss her when someone say "yar, better leave her lass"
Disco Bear turn around and see Russell stand there, not too far from them "don't you see that I'm busy?" Disco Bear said "no, I just see that you're trying to kiss Flippy's sister" Russell say trying to stay calmed, he didn't wanted to look so obious that he was mad
Disco Bear let go Eloise and say "she's Flippy's sister?!" and he look at Eloise who nodded yes, then he look at Russell that say "yarr, of course, don't you see her outfit? She's a militar too" Disco Bear turn to see Eloise again and the sea otter continue talking "I don't know what you think, but I wouldn't like to make Flippy mad if he see me flirting with his little sis" Then Flaky get the point of what Russell was trying to do and say "o-or maybe he won't get mad, he just always keep an eye on you" "and for that he must be really near" Eloise say understanding her friend's plan
"ok, I get it, I'm going now, but is not going to end like this baby" Disco Bear say to Eloise and he leave
Eloise look at Russell and when Disco Bear was far away enough, she hug Russell while she say "thank you so much!! I'm so glad you did that!!" she kiss him on the cheek and then she hugged him again; Flaky giggled at the scene, Eloise was hugging a really blushed Russell
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well, there's chapter 12, as I had just said, sorry for taking too much, but I needed inspiration hahaha!! And I does find it in a beautiful song!! Is called "yo quisiera" by Reik. sorry, but is in spanish, is about a guy that is in love with his best female friend, but he's too shy to tell her the true (guess why I get inspired with that song)
P.D. All the characters (with the esception of Eloise) belongs to Mondo Media
P.D.D. please review
P.D.D.D. I'm hungry X3
