Im worried that some of the characters , mainly Geoff are 00C, please review to let me know
Knock knock "Dawn are you up yet?" Oscar Blaketon shouted impatiently he knocked on the door again "If you don't get a move on ill come in there" Geoff Younger moaned and begrudgingly opened his eyes. When he had gathered his bearings he realized he was not in his bedroom "what the…" He then felt Dawn stirring next to him, she seemed to be as confused as he was, they looked at each other "Geoff?" she asked. There was another knock on the door. "Im warning you Dawn" Oscar threatened. Dawn jumped out off bed shortly followed by Geoff "Buger" they said simultaneously. There was a mad rush of pulling pants and t-shirts on but they weren't quick enough the door opened and Oscar walked in "I warned you Dawn I said…" He stopped mid sentence only just realizing what he was seeing. Dawn was in a reveling night dress and Geoff was stood there with just his pants on. "Mr. Blaketon…" he started but he was interrupted. "Out!" Oscar shouted "Out!" Dawn started crying as Geoff shoved his shirt and shoes on "Oscar, please, its not..." but yet again Oscar was in no mood for explanations "I will speak to you when I get back" he shouted gesturing towards Dawn "but right now im going to see what Sergeant Miller thinks of all this" he grabbed Younger by the shoulder and dragged him down the stairs.
At the Police station
"Ow, ow, ow, ow" Geoff complained as Oscar dragged him to the main desk and hit the bell angrily. "Anyone but Don" Geoff thought to himself "anyone but Don". Joe Mason came to the desk and Geoff let out a sigh of relief. Joe opened his mouth to speak but Oscar got in there first "I would like to speak to Sergeant Miller please Mason" Joe looked from Geoff to Oscar with a look of confusion on his face "what's going ..." Oscars face grew a shade of red. Geoff half expected for steam to come out of his ears. "Mind your own business Mason, now is he in or not?" Joe hesitated, Miller was in, but he wasn't sure he should tell Oscar that "no" he lied "no he's not" Geoff gave him a slight smile, he knew Miller was in. Oscar let go of Younger and took at deep breathe and said as calmly as he could "Make sure he stays here, and ring me when miller gets back!" with that he left slamming the door behind him. "What was that about?" Joe asked. Geoff took a deep breathe and leaned against the desk "You don't want to Know!"
