A/N: First time trying to write from the point of view of a racist and an idiot. How stupid is too stupid ?

Chapter 11: Judy's Compassion and Quickpaw's Mission


I'm watching over an unconscious wolf. I don't know how long it has been. He has woken up a few times then tried to eat me. I shock him until he's unconscious again. I don't think I can keep this up much longer just then someone knocks on the door. I open the door. A rabbit greets me, "The Prime has returned, he's ready to see you now."

A sudden burst of adrenaline gives me energy. I say, "Take me to him."

"Where is your mate?"

"He is not my mate. He's unconscious since he tried to eat me multiple times."

"Very well, come along, we'll take care of it."

I am led to the cavern again. The rabbit tells the guards about the wolf. They go to the house. We arrive inside the cavern. I note there's four ways out. The rabbit leaves. The tiger says, "Greetings, I'm sorry that our meeting earlier got interrupted."

"What do we have to talk about?"

"Right to the point. You are free to leave once you undergo the rite to become one of us. This should only be done with a predator that you love and trust completely. Speaking of which, why is there only one of you, where is your mate?"

I think I'm about to collapse from exhaustion. I respond with, "Terrified of him, can't sleep."

"It seems I have made an error—." My eyelids are closing. It's taking every ounce of energy not to outright collapse. I'm sure he's saying something but I don't register any of it. "Ascend can leave." I surrender to sleep and let it take me. Collapsing on the floor.


That bunny actually shocked me! Judy only survives because Lightbringer allows it for some reason. I was the one given the task of teaching her how to drive a sheet of ice. It's so easy and she just had to screw It up and now we're stuck here captured by cultists. She doesn't even let me hunt. She keeps shocking me after I wake up and try to eat her. Why, why won't she let me eat? I was simply going to hunt other animals but she had to shock me! It seems like I've been moved since the last time I lost consciousness. Now, I'm here facing the tiger from before. The tiger speaks, "Finally awake, are you? You and Judy are not mates, is that correct?"

I see that I'm in a small room with blue crystals around it all. That tiger blocks the only way out of this room. I reply, "Why would I ever be mated to prey? Absurd, they're a source of food nothing more. That said, where is she?"

"She is getting some well needed rest after I returned and called for her. I was surprised she fell asleep during our meeting. I learned that she was terrified of sleeping because of you and forced herself to be stay conscious because she was unwilling to kill you. I've also learned that she shocked you unconscious several times after you woke up and tried to eat her again."

"So, when do I get food? She wouldn't let me eat at all. I wasn't going to eat her until she prevented me from eating other animals."

"I realize you need prey to live. You however could eat vegetables and be fine for a few meals. This should have been your first and you couldn't even do that! It seems I have a made a lapse in judgment by bringing you here. You are just a savage after all." Who does this tiger think he is? calling me a savage. The nerve!

"Great, seeing as you lost interest in me can you simply let me go?"

"No, only members can leave this place. That said aside from you two, all of the animals came here by choice. You are here because of my act of kindness to save you two else you would have surely died."

"Can I become a member alone?"

"You do not know what being a member of our order means. The first step is that you must find true love with prey, anyone of them will do."

"Why would I ever be in love with prey? They are food nothing more."

"Let me be clear. I don't care if you live or die. The only way for you to survive is to undergo the rite to become one of us. You must find a prey that loves you enough willing to undergo the rite with you. We do not serve prey here only vegetables. Rise above your nature or die because of it."

"This is absurd. You are a predator, you eat prey just like me."

"It's your choice. You can't survive on vegetables forever. I believe we are done here." The tiger calls to animals outside. "Muzzle him, put protective gloves on his paws and release him back into the sanctum. Have an enforcer supervise him at all times."

With that I was guided back to the sanctum. There's no opportunity for me to explore other paths out of the cavern.

I don't even see anyone following me. This muzzle shouldn't be too hard to remove. The protective gloves are easy for me to take off too. I guess I might as well go into the house and see where Judy is. It's time to get some revenge. It's because of her that I was in this mess in the first place. Who would walk on to the ice and wish to go home? It's ludicrous.

I open the door and the house is empty. Judy isn't even here. I see no one's around. I guess I can take off the muzzle and protective gloves and go hunt something. I try to take off the muzzle. My collar apparently activates and I'm shocked. Ouch. I look to see if I could find who's doing it. I don't see anyone. The windows show no one and no one is in the house. I guess that's a fluke. I'll try removing the gloves this time. My collar activates again.

I guess I can't remove them myself. I'll just ask the local food to help me remove this. I walk to the rabbits I visited with Judy. I say to the parents, "Help me remove this thing."

The father says, "We shouldn't get involved. Your mate will remove it when she sees fit." Unhelpful rabbit. I guess I can take my frustrations out on one of the kits. Surely, that will convince them to help me.

I leave the farm. I go out of their sight then come back. I spy one of the kits in the field. I prepare to pounce. My collar activates again. I still can't see anyone. Who is shocking me? Frustrating. I guess I will see if other types of food are more sympathetic to my cause. I walk around the village. I see a herd of sheep. I demand, "Remove this for me."

I hear one of the sheep say, "You are not maaarked. You must have done something baaad. Where is your mate?"

"I don't have one, that's why I need you to remove this for me. You are just food after all. You should obey your betters."

They have the audacity to laugh. They don't feel fear or scared of me at all. I long for the obedience that prey followed whenever it was my job to take them away and bring them back to Everlight for us to eat. These sheep don't even obey. I don't see anyone following me. It seems it's just this flock and me. I think brute force will coerce them. I prepare to inflict pain on one of the sheep. My collar activates again. I shout into the air, "who keeps doing that?" I am greeted with silence. The sheep seem to have left.

Whatever, certainly deer should be more sympathetic. The more prey in one location the higher the chances of one of them doing something I want. I walk around the village and try to find deer. I see a flock of deer. I approach them. "Remove this for me. I'm hungry and need to eat you." The group of deer take turns at kicking me. Why can't prey be obedient like the good old days? They've all had their turn and leave me alone once more.

If groups of animals won't help me, maybe individuals will. I go into the village and seek out more animals that can help me. None of them do, some of them even hit me before leaving. A few of them give me vegetables knowing that I can't eat then laugh and take it away. No one in this village is helpful. I guess I should return to the house and sleep. Maybe, Judy will help me.

I finally walk back to the house. I see Judy well rested. Judy sees me with bruises and torn clothing. She says, "What happened to you?"

I answer with, "Please take this off me." To my surprise, she removes the muzzle and I don't get shocked. "Thank you. I've been trying to get that off forever. You have no idea what it's like, prey won't follow my commands here. They won't let me eat them. I want to be back in Everlight." Why, why does she shock me? "What have I done wrong?"

I was unprepared for her fiery tirade. She says, "I'm stuck here because of your poor instructions. I even fell asleep during a meeting with the leader all because of YOU! I was told that I passed out. They put me in a bed; passing out in front of a dangerous leader is not what I want to give for first impressions. I might never see Nick again all because of you. This is all your fault."

"My fault? MY FAULT? If you didn't have bizarre wishes. We wouldn't be here in the first place!" She shocks me again. "This isn't really fair you know, why do you get to shock me just because you disagree?"

"You're right about that. I guess I have been abusing it a bit too much. You need to be considerate of others, this isn't Everlight. Prey matter here and I am one of them."

"It's against everything that I know."

"Well, if you don't change you might never see Everlight again." Prey carry food to our house. Lettuce, tomatoes and carrots. I guess they are somewhat useful.

Judy says, "Food is here, why won't you try some?" She eats her portion and motions that she wants me to eat.

I reply, "Vegetables are beneath me. I'd rather starve."

"Fine, be that way. Clearly, you're not good company. I am going over to the rabbits. Good night. At least, I don't need to watch over you anymore." With that she left the house and left me alone. My muzzle's still off. Time to hunt.

I approach the farm. I don't see anyone outside. I advance inside hoping for unsuspecting prey. I am just about to close my mouth around a kit's ears. Judy just happens to walk by and see me. My collar activates.


I see Quickpaw about to bite off a kit's ears. I shock him. I'm glad I was there, that could have been bad. That dense wolf, I thought the tiger had assigned animals to watch him. I was having a good time too chatting with them. He just had to show up and ruin everything.

I ask the parents if they want to help me carry this unconscious wolf to the cavern. They're eager to offer assistance. We carry him to the cavern. I see a sheep standing guard, "He has tried to eat someone." The sheep lets us through. We advance into the cavern. I find the tiger from before. The rabbits helping me drop the wolf in front of the tiger and leave. I say, "He has caused nothing but trouble and is rather disagreeable. He nearly ate the ears of a kit."

The tiger says, "Would you like me to kill him?"

"What? NO! I just don't want to have to worry about his actions anymore."

"Why do you show such compassion to someone who doesn't deserve any?"

"He's just like this due to lack of food."

"You are an oddity, you defend their actions while not being one of them. Why would the savages keep you alive? Hmm, wait. You're not from here are you? Yes, this makes far more sense. Looks like there's some truth to what we thought was a rumor. The savages did not suddenly evolve and seek enlightenment. Tell me, where are you from?"

"What is this rumor that you speak of?"

"A rabbit has been armed and seen fighting alongside the savages. We then attempted to see if the rumor was true, the results proved inconclusive. I now believe that rabbit is you. So, tell me where are you from and why would the savages keep you alive? let alone arm you."

Would it really be a good idea to tell him that I'm from Zootopia? Considering, their scouting attempt was sending one of them on a suicide mission. I respond with, "I am from a village within the chasm. I'm just lucky that one of them took pity on me and decided to spare me."

"I see you do not trust me yet. Very well, I guess this will take some time. You're free to return to the village. I'll take care of the wolf. I won't kill him. A peaceful existence is what we desire most. Feel free to talk to me again when you feel like telling the truth or if you run into any other problems. Your safety is guaranteed if you don't try to leave."

With that I sense the conversation was over. I left and returned to the sanctum. I go back towards the rabbit farm. I spend the rest of the night there. They were rather welcoming. Giving me new clothes and this place actually has running water so I took a shower. I chose a blue outfit since blue seems to be a favored color by cultists.

Captured, taken to an unfamiliar place but given freedom to live. I guess I'll try talking to others and see if I can learn more about this place tomorrow. The bed they give me is rather comfortable. I'm going to have a peaceful night's rest at last. No fear of being eaten. No arrogant wolf to watch over.


A/N: Will Quickpaw succeed? What's going to happen to Judy?