Beginning Notes: if you don't know what they look like go to mine or Adriana the Dark Vixens profile and read….

Dante: *his the narrator* or story starts like another day….

Jennifer Firestone got a call from her friend Ebony the Dark Hedgehog to go bowling that night she said "Sure" and got ready. At 9 pm Ebony arrived at Jennifer's house and knocked. "Hi Ebony!", Jen said smiling at him. "Ready to go Jen?" he asked. "Yes" she said fallowing him.

Dante:*was standing beside the sidewalk* By the time the night is over this two teens are going to know why you hang out in bigger numbers at night…Because what they didn't know is they just entered The Killing Zone…

Jennifer and Ebony made it to the bowling alley just fine and start to bowl but the place was packed tonight, so it shouldn't have been any surprise to them when so people walked up to them and asked to play with them.

"I'm Bain the Wolf" Said a white wolf, "And I'm Adriana" a fox said. "Cool I'm Ebony and she Jennifer" Ebony pointed to him self then Jen. They all laughed and cheered as the night went on, but all good things must come to an end. "Oh my look at the time I need to get home" Jen said.

"I'll walk you home" Ebony said. "I'll walk with you two, you can't be too careful with that murder on the lose" said Bain. Jen shuddered she had read the reports about the murders that had been going on the past 2 weeks, they were gruesome body's to mutilated that they could tell who they were with out dental records.

"I hope we don't get attacked" Adriana said a little sacred sounding. Bain chuckled, "Ebony can I talk to you in private" Jen said dragging Ebony a good 40 feet away. "I don't trust this Bain guy, I think he might be the killer" Jen said with fear in her voice.

Ebony looked at her like she was crazy, "I doubt his the killer" Ebony said. "But Ebony…" Jen started, "No buts Jen His not the killer" he said walking away from her. When Ebony and Jen got back to were Bain and Adriana were at Bain was the only one there.

"Were is Adriana at?" Ebony asked Bain, "She said is was feeling sick so she ran into the woods" Bain answered his eyes show that of great joy. Bain started to walk towards the when a knife fall out of his pocket, it was stained red.

"See I told you he was the killer" Jen screamed. "Wait let….*Bang*" Bain was shot the bullet went straight thru him and he fall to the ground, when he fall Adriana was shown to be behide him.

She laughed as his body fall to the ground, then she pointed the gun at Ebony and Jen "Fools," she shoot Ebony in the leg, and she laughed some more. "You monster" Ebony said as he fall to his to the ground.

"Monster?" she shot his other leg and laughed some more. "You're next girly…*Bang*" She dropped down dead this time. Bain was standing with blood coming from his chest, and mouth. "You the good guy?", Jen said in shock.

"Yes…" Bain said weakly, and he walked over to Jen slowly, he lost balance and fall into her arms. "Oh my god Bain" Jen screamed. But little did she know Bain was smirking, behide her back. "JEN LOOK OUT" Ebony scream but it was to late Bain shot her in the stomach.

She walked backwards having released Bain, "You tricked me you bas…" she fall to the ground. Choking on her own blood, Bain throw back he's had and let out a demonically evil laugh of joy.

Ebony started to use his arms to drag him-self away, he got about 10 feet before Bain walked up behide him and stomped his foot down on the middle of his back, "Were do you think your going the fun has just begun" he chuckled.

"You fiend you wont get away with this" Ebony said, "Oh no? watch me" he said as he shoot Ebony in the head.

Dante

"So what did we learn today…not to judge a book by it's over…and sometimes you are right to not trust the creepy guy, and don't walk home with people you don't know…Until we meet again in The Killing Zone"

(I Know I know it wasn't that great the next one will be better…)