Ok, this is the first story that I am posting. I have a lot of ideas, but I'm waiting for the results on this story before I start posting them. I was reading the story Every Woman Has A Bad Boy Phase by thestagedplayer, and I got the balls to start writing something I can be proud of. If you are reading this, then I OBVIOUSLY didn't become lazy, or something else! Well, continue reading, then, REVIEW! Constructive criticism welcome –flames just piss me off.
Flames danced to the sky, accenting the midnight sky beautifully. That is, if the flames were that of a bonfire. A bonfire of wood, not that of her family, her home. But it was. The torrent of flames, that of which she felt the heat of from her spot in the middle of the road. Flames danced in front of her eyes, conviction in the depths of her heart.
She stood there, watching. It was as if it was a dream. She was faintly aware of Damien –her cousin, staying with her family for unknown reasons- screaming at her. His voice, usually strong and confidant, with a hint of mystery, was now grief struck, and panic-like. She heard Alex's cries for mom, and Kate's wails. Must feel like losing your family all over again, huh? She thought bitterly to her best friend. Not that she was telepathic. The wind whistled past her, blowing long strands of pin-straight copper hair into her eyes. Feeding the fire. She heard the great boom of the explosion of the propane tank in the back, blowing the house to the ground. Some pieces of the wreck gained enough momentum to fly in random directions, namely, hers. Of course, that brought her back. She motioned to cover her face, but Kate was faster. A branch from a tree flung out, growing incredibly fast. It wrapped around her waist, and yanked her back. Of course, in all her panic Kate forgot one thing. Stopping.
The last thing she thought, as she bled out, was something she would say repeatedly, to herself, to others –though, they never knew why she was apologizing, but she felt the need to do so, anyways. It was Im sorry! I didn't know! I'm sorry, so, so, sorry! Its all my fault, so, sorry...
And she drifted into unconsciousness, or rather consciousness. . .
That was it! I'm hoping to post another chapter today, but I don't know yet! Please review –as, if your here, you've already read! - But, I will try! Right now, I'm my own beta. I don't know if I want one yet... REVIEW! They make me happy! Oh, and if you have anything you want me to read, tell me in your review!
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-Leah
