Spyro meets Spyro

Please read this before you continue!

My brother was hit by a bus and he will be in the hospital for a month. He was the one who was writing the story so far.
He's asked me, his sister, to continue the story while he recovers. He's going to tell me what to write, so I can only update while I'm in the hospital with him. Luckily, I'm also a Spyro fan so I'll actually know what I'm writing. Please wish me and my Bro luck.

The Avalar Rescue


Flame and A. Hunter had just reached the valley of Avalar. "Wow," said A. Hunter. "This place looks nothing like the Avalar back home."

"Come on, Hunter. We need to find those captured dragons."

"Right, sorry." A. Hunter looked around and saw a small tribe of cheetahs. "Hey, Flame, maybe those guys might know where the dragons might be." They walked up to the tribe and met Cheif Prowlus.

"Who are you?" he demanded.

"Umm, my name's Flame and this guy is uhh.... just call him 'Art'." A. Hunter kept his mouth shut, knowing what Flame was doing: The cheetahs wouldn't beleive he was another Hunter. "We were wondering if there were any other dragons here."

Prowlus thought for a moment and said, "Yes, I beleive a large group of them were having a gathering down that way." He pointed in the direction and then said, "But I haven't seen them in a few hours."

"Thank you. We'll be on our way." Flame turned around and left with A. Hunter right behind him.

One hour later...

"Hey, Flame, I think I see something!" A. Hunter had been getting impatient with the search. They came to a clearing with many dragon statues, all of which were shaking violently trying to break free.

"Alright, it's about time!" As Flame got closer to the statues, several gnorcs appeared from the tree and attacked. "Hunter, Look out!"

A large gnorc had appeared behind A. Hunter and lifted him up with ease. "Hey! Let me down!" The gnorc started tightening it's grip, making A. Hunter scream in pain. "You no good bastard!" He drove his teeth into the gnorc's arm, causing it roar and drop him into the river. "HELP! I CAN'T SWIM!!!"

"Hunter!" Flame tried to help but the gnorcs surrounded him. He fought them off with his fire breath. He continuously breathed fire at them, but the waves kept coming. "Hunter, hang on!" After five minutes Flame defeated the gnorcs and ran towards A. Hunter, who was slowly drifting down the river. He wasn't calling for help anymore. His body was limp. Flame jumped into the river and, after a brief struggle, grabbed him and took him back to the plain. "Hunter! Hunter, wake up, man!" He tried slapping him awake and biting him but it didn't work. He then started jumping on his stomach. "HUNTER! WAKE! UP!"

Finally A. Hunter coughed up the water in his throat. "Oh my God! Flame, thank you! You saved me."

"That was a close one, Hunter. Come on let's free these dragons and go back to the temple." And with that, Flame stepped on all the pedestals for the statues. The dragons gave their thanks and Flame left with A. Hunter to the dragon temple.