So from what I have read of the reviews, it turns out that my earlier decision to make Sasuke a teacher wasn't all that good of a decision, but now that I have done it I will be rolling with it. If people would want to give me some advice I would appreciate it. The same goes for harsh reviews that tell me what I've done really really wrong. So with this said let's get on with the story, shall we?
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As Mizore, Tskune, and Moka sprinting to their destination Tskune couldn't help but wonder why Naruto would be fighting somebody, and who it could possibly be.
"Hey, Mizure do you have any idea why Naruto is fighting this guy?" Asked Tskune while they passed the entrance to the school and started heading towards the forest.
"I don't have any idea why they are fighting like they are" Spoke Mizore.
" A better question is why were you stalking him?" Asked Moka in a nervous voice. Mizore didn't respond to this as they had rounded a large tree and had finally spotted Naruto and his opponent. Said opponent looked exactly like Naruto. Right down to the orange and black jumpsuit clothing, blond hair, blue eyes, and the whisker marks on his cheeks. This didn't sit right with Moka and Tskune who had seen some pretty strange stuff in their life, but seeing what looked like to be a literal clone of somebody was something else entirely. Tskune Moka and Mizore couldn't help but stand there in awe at what they were witnessing. They had never seen a fight this fast-paced before. Tskune was having a hard time keeping up with what was going on with the fight. It was just so fast that it made anything that Gin could do even under the full moon look like childs play. He was used to watching fast fights from watching Inner Moka fight all the time last year, but this. This was a whole different story altogether.
Tskune noticed someone arrive just as one of the Narutos stop for a while and seemed like he was trying to catch his breath. The figure seemed familiar to Tskune although it was on the other side of the 'battlefield'. What little he could make out of the figure was that he was about average height and build but other than that nothing else could be discerned. Tskune thought that he should alert his friends of this new person, but before he could even speak one of the Narutos looked at the person and started walking over to the person. From Tskune's position, he thought he could hear an exchange of words between the two people. Before Tskune could think of anything else the other Naruto turned his head towards Tskune's direction and motioned him and his friends to come forward.
"Yo." was the Naruto's greeting
"Are you the real Naruto?" Asked an extremely confused Moka.
"No, I'm the boss's clone. I'm just here to provide some hand to hand combat practice for the original Naruto." Replied the Naruto clone.
"I hope you don't mind me asking but how are you a clone of Naruto? I mean how is it possible? I thought the process of cloning someone was not for the general public let alone allowed to be done on people." Asked Tskune.
"Well I don't know about the part of it not being allowed, but the boss created me by dividing his energy in half and a bunch of other stuff that's way too complicated to discuss right now," Stated the clone "but if you want I could just go let the boss know that you are curious about how he does it." finished the clone.
"I don't really know if I want to know that." replied Tskune.
"Awe! Why not?"
"Well, I'm not really one to fight. I've just never been one for such things."
"Well okay then."
"By the way Naruto who is that person that your original is talking to?"
"Uh that might be best if we let that be for now." said Naruto "Here let's go for a walk."
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"So what is it that you want Sasuke?" Asked Naruto.
"For one Naruto you've been getting really poor scores on your homework assignments." Replied Sasuke. Ririko Kagome
"What!? how did you know? I thought you weren't that bright." As Naruto said this Sasuke grew a tick mark on his head and gritted his teeth.
"Naruto do you really think all I did with Orochimaru was train my body? I'm not so stupid to not have a plan for after I killed Itachi. Unlike you who didn't study a day in your life until you came here." This took Naruto a bit to process.
"So what you are telling me is that you are a big old nerd huh," said Naruto in a slow teasing voice. This caused Sasuke to start fuming. It took all of Sasuke's will to resist punching Naruto in the gut.
"How about you stay after class with our own Lamia Ririko Kagome."
"Who?" Asked Naruto really not knowing who Sasuke was talking about.
"She like me is a math teacher."
"Why should I stay after school with some old hag?"
"Just do it Naruto or should I go tell Kokoa where you train." At this Naruto got a scared looked on his face.
"Okay I'll stay after school with her, just don't tell Kokoa please." Said Naruto getting on his knees and begging Sasuke.
"I promise I won't tell Kokoa as long as you do as I say." Said Sasuke with a very evil grin on his face. Taking pleasure in his victory of his loud mouth friend.
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SO this is where I will end the chapter. I'm not really sure how you guys are thinking of how my writing is at the moment, but I hope that I have gotten a lot better than when I uploaded my first chapter. Also if people don't like my choices on cirtain things just let me know and I might send you a pm explaining why I did what I did as long as it doesn't ruin the plot in future chapters.
If you guys want to give your thoughts on what you would like to see in the next chapter let me know and I'll think about using it (as long as it is within reason). If you saw something that I could do better let me know that as well (especially that cause I want to get better at what it is that I am writing.)
Thank you all for reading my story up to this point and I hope that I can keep you reading this as more chapters come out.
