Hanakuro: DISCLAIMER! We don't own MTNN, still, and we never will. Ever.

Akashia-chan: so true….why do we even have disclaimers? People are intelligent, I'm sure they'll figure out we don't own MTNN…

Hanakuro: yup! And we don't have a word of the day, sowwy!

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Akashia-chan: YAY! I LOVE DISNEYLAND!!

Hanakuro: me too! This is my first time out of Canada! Or out of the province for that matter!

Akashia-chan: Hanakuro, you need to get out more.

Coo-coo!

Shiori: I agree! You need to take risks, live life to the fullest!

Akashia-chan: exactly! What she said!

Yako: YES! CARNIVAL FOOD!

Shiori: Hey Akashia-chan! If they have one, or something similar, you and Sai should go on the Tunnel Of Love!

Akashia-chan: blushes madly Sh-Shiori!

Shiori: what?

Moo-cow!

Sai: Shiori, you're probably the least evil demon I've ever met.

Shiori: well, haven't you only met Neuro?

Sai: um…okay…let's go with that…

Ishigaki: this is an outrage!

Hanakuro: what is?

Ishigaki: so many souvenir stores and not a single action figure or manga book in sight!

Yako: hey Akashia-chan, want a mini-donut?

Hanakuro: NOOOOOOOO!

Akashia-chan: eats donut MWAHAHAHA!!

Hanakuro: crap…

Sasazuka: …shouldn't we, do reviews?

Hanakuro: yes! And during this trip, I am determined to get at least ONE smile out of you!

Sasazuka: …

Akashia-chan: YAY REVIEWS! First up, from mynameisedward!

I'm still sick D: COUGH COUGH

Hana-chan and Akashia-chan: Here's candeh! I would actually love to live up north. I love the cold and hate the heat and it's really hot here.

Sai: (gives hug that normally kills humans)

Yako: What's your favorite kind of pie? I like turtle, oreo, and chocolate.

Shiori: I don't hate you! I just don't like you torturing Neuro! Cuz...uh...I kinda like him...

Godai: If you cuss at me again, I'm going to shove your head in a bender and turn it on.

Ishigaki: I'm glad your looking for a cute girl.

Sasazuka: Can't you just smile a litte?

Neuro: You WILL take me or I'll let your sister torture you twice as much, I'll rip all of your hair out, I'll unleash rabid fangirls upon you, and I'll beat you till you covered in nothing but bruises and cuts.

Akashia-chan: yeah, heat is hot. I don't like heat, at all, I like cold, cold is good, ICE CREAM!

Hanakuro: she didn't even notice the candy, wow.

Akashia-chan: CANDY! Devours candy YAAAAAAAAAAAAAY!!

Sai: wow, my fangirls are freakishly strong…

Yako: OMG I love Pumpkin pie, and blueberry, and cherry, and apple, and wildberry, and chocolate, and meat, and rhubarb, and…

Shiori: y-you don't hate me? Yay! But you like my brother…what the HELL is with people thinking he's freakishly hot?

Go-die: beep you, mother beep! I beep beep beep and beep 'cause beep beep beep beeeeeeeeeeep! And you most certainly will NOT stick my head in a blender! Beep you!

Ishigaki: thanks!

Cock-a-doodle-doo!

Sasazuka: …

Hanakuro: SMILE DAMMIT!

Sasazuka: …no…

Neuro: No you will not pathetic human!

Akashia-chan: IIIIIIIIT'S, SUPERCALAFRAGILISTICEXPEALIDOCIOUS!

Yako: time for the next review! From TB!

How come cafeteria food is always made out to be horrible?? The cafeteria food in my school is AMAZINGLY DELICIOUS!!

And good luck to RG in the next chapter!! Go Random Guy!! I'm so proud, one of my very own characters is gonna be in his first chapter!

starts crying in the corner

Random Guy: She so weird...

huggles RG

Hanakuro: we don't have cafeteria food, so we just go by what we see on TV shows and stuff!

Akashia-chan: SLIME! CRAWLING AROUND ON YOUR TABLE! DEVOURING ALL IN ITS PATH! AND THEN SUDDENLY… EVERYTHING EXPLODES! BOOM!

Ishigaki: now can I introduce a review?

Sasazuka: no

Ishigaki: Senpai, you're so cruel…

Hanakuro: Next review, from TB again!

U are one of a kind Sai!! The only Huggable Serial Killer in the whole world. I'm a cereal killer too!! I kill cerealss!! HAHAHA

Yes, yes it is very cold up north in Canada... Especially in the winter... But snow is awesome!!

Have any of you ever gone snowboarding before!! It's really fun!! and painful!!

RG: Especially when I'm the snowboard...

Me: What are you talking about, you were never my snowboard! hahaha...

Oh man, Akashia-chan reminds me of my sis... She loves sugar cubes...

BLEACH! and detergent too!

le gaspeth. and a coconute keyboard to go with it!!

prettyfull, the greatest word in the history of goblins!!

3 hahaha, evil un-rabid fangirl!! Thst's me! hehehehe

OHH!! Random Beams!! That's how I met Random Guy!

RG: shivers I got a hairball stuck in my throught that day...

teehee

'Sh... I'm hunting wabbits! dahahahahaha!!'

Hana-chan, Aka-chan!! you can borrow RG whenever you want!! hehe BUT YES!! Shiori is right! He is copyrighted, just to let every1 know!! lol

Yay, TB and RG are going with you!! haha

ooh. I've never watched Fruits BAsket, I have no idea who Hana-chan is!! lolz SO Hana-chan is Hanakuro in my head!

Shiori!! RG says hi again!!

RG: I didn't- oh whats the use...

Le gaspeth!! Rg has caught on!! He understands how to react to my randomness now!!

Oh. My. God... The dreaded clean up song from pre-K... I wonder how many other millions of kids have that song imprinted in their memories...

It brings back memories...

Sorry for the extreme longness of this review. I hope you enjoy reading it! --

And I hope you understood at least something from it...

Sai: cool! I'm special!

Akashia-chan: I used to think a serial killer, was somebody who destroyed the serial numbers! Like the bar codes, y'know? GIANT CAMELS IN MALAYSIA!

Hanakuro: yes! Snow is good! But remember when it snowed like, six times last year, that was a little much…

Akashia-chan: I slipped in my driveway, and on my friends porch, and in my driveway! YOWZA!

Shiori: hoorah! I was correct! RG said hi again! Yay RG!

Hanakuro: that song will never EVER go away, grr! Starts humming Clean-up Song NOOOO!

Shiori: next review! It's from, drumroll please, drummroll Unknown D Flamerose!

Flamerose: "Ello. Sorry for not reviewing or letting Rikai review. I've been focusing on homework lately. Rakai wanted to review so she was tourmenting me too allow her on my account."

Rikai: Unamused... "It was nessecery sence you wouldn't give me the password."

Flamerose: "Even so , dropping ice cubes down the back of my shirt is realy affective; when I was trying to focus on my homework." wraped up in a warm pluffy black blanket due to Rikai s pestering. "I honestly can't blame her for tourtureing me; Sence I would be doing the same thing too her if the tables were turned."

Rikai: Smiles "So true. After all I'm the deamon of you."

Flamerose: "Well, half-demon, what do we have in store for this fanfiction?" Smiles

Rikai; "For now, something more simple, for the lower evolutionary human life-forms and thier pathetic single-cell crainiums to understand. The deamons would understand our simple request. Even thou, (Neuro's sister) Shiori, is very disappountingly pathetic..."

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Now Both Rikai's and Flamerose's

ReQuEsTs FoR ThiS HoRRiFiC FanFicT,

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All of you shall have to go by our nicknames for THREE WHOLE CHAPTERS! We have split the nine of you between us.

Rikai;Evil Blank Grin "I shall name Neuro, Shiori, Sasazuka, and Hanakuro."

Flamerose;Grins"I'm nameing Yako, Sai, Godai, and Akashia. Both me and Rikai given a perfict nickname for Ishigaki!"

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NoW ThE NaMeS We HaVe ChoSeN FoR EacH Of YoU:

Both; "Ishigaki is now 'Worthless-Hachi'! We could not resist XD!"

Rikai;

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"Neuro is -with no surprise- 'The SaDesTiC DeMoN HoTTie'" - "Sasazuka:'CopFuzz'."

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"Hanakuro: Enjoy your reward for addmitting your liketation for Neuro;You know why?even thou you have high intellegents, you are on the same Evaltionary Level as every other human -including Godai and Akashia. I had an ''Name Hanakuro war tournament'' for my Goblin slaves. The winner, shall have their name used for your nickname. The winner was 'Freakkanakaquaw'."

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"Shiori: As I have stated before, you are disappountingly pathetic. What are you - Miss emo demon drama queen?- how revolting for any Demon female. You show more human emotions in a day, then all of mine in a year!! And YOU call yourself a full-blooded Demon!! I'm a half-demon who is more of a Demon than you. Shiori'Emotionally-Brocken Cinderella'."

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Flamerose; -

"Heres a more simple vresion on the nicknames!! Including mine with no explanation!!-Oh! And you may invite Rikai over in your fanfic whenever you want!! Just PM me when you want to invite her over!!"

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The SaDesTiC DeMoN HoTTie(Neuro):

Emotionally-Brocken Cinderella(Shiori):

CopFuzz(Sasazuka): no comment

Freak-kanaka-quaw(Hanakuro): Flamerose: "I added the prononciation. Here;" ... "Freak-ka-na-k-aqua...? Wow...Rikai's Goblins have bazzare names."

Worthless-Hachi(Ishigaki):crys in corner

Disposle Girl(Yako): . . .

X's N' O's(Sai): (pun it Hugg's N' Kiss's

Madd-Mutt(Godai): "WHAT THE BEEP IS WITH POEPLE CALLING ME A DOG!?" (Rikai: "Who cares? It's amusing.")

Clueless N Mindless(Akashia): ? ? ? "Eh?" she wasn't paying attention

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Rikai: - "You may end the review, Flamerose." - Flamerose: quickly responds "-What do you want." 0-

Rikai: Grins "Good choices on the nicknames! Also all of my most important insulting comments I've already said. So I'm quite pleased."

Flamerose: \-/ "Bye.-Oh! And Shiori, don't ask my opinon of you so far. After all, Rikai is the (some-what) Demon side of me." . . . \-/

Rikai: just watches...

Flamerose: \/w\/ "I DoN'T GiVe A BYE!!"

Rikai: :) "How entertaining." -watching the sleep deprivered Unknown D Flamerose

Flamerose: \/w\/ InedSlEP!!" falls flat on computer table

Freak-kanaka-quaw: what the hell is with my name?

BOO!

Mad-Mutt: I hate you, beep! I AM NOT A DAMN DOG!

X's N' O's: I'm a serial killer! What is with you people? Who would love a serial killer?

Clueless N Mindless: ME! Teeheehee! Text talk fest! Lolbbqwtfgtgomgbrblmaosrsly!

X's N' O's: that is true!

CopFuzz: …

Worthless Hachi: what's a 'hachi'?

Freak-kanaka-quaw: good question!

Emotionaly broken Cinderella: I-I'm a good demon…righ? RIGHT? WAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH!! Rikai hates me!!

The SaDesTiC DeMoN HoTTie: I think you're completely evil…

Emotionaly broken Cinderella: sniff at least someone believes in my demonic abilities… BUT IT'S MY BROTHER! WAAAAAAAH!!

Disposal girl: don't worry Shiori! We all think you're a good demon! Right everyone?

All: mumbling yeah, I guess, sure, whatever.

Meow!

Disposal girl: see? And why the beep is THAT my name?

Freak-kanaka-quaw: holy crap, Yako swore! And bad enough for a beep to appear! THAT'S a first! Anyhoo! Next review is from, irule505!

Go ATB! yay! hooray for singing Christmas songs early! SQUEEE!

Go-die: so...now you're emo...don't be emo, emos r BORING! u should be eccentric! like Haruhi Suzumiya!

Yako: sure you aren't dating...

Shiori: poor u! u need a boyfriend! but...everyone on set is taken... i give u the power to leave and go in search of a boyfriend!

Sai: hi! yay! u finally gave it to her! for that, i give u a brand new car! it's a porsche! yay!

Ishigaki: Okay! here's your Bleach box set! it's all the books since the anime isn't done yet... of course, i don't think the manga is either... oh well! anime has fillers! -hugs Ishigaki- yayz!

Sasazuka: pie is good! be happy when u get pie! smile about it! and be nice to Ishigaki once in a while! he's like a little kid! yay!

Akashia-chan: have a cookie! -gives cookie-

Hanakuro: u are such a mad scientist, so u need the right mad scientist outffit! -gives white lab coat, goggles, and gloves- taadaa!

well, ttfn! ta ta for now!

Mad-mutt: no…I REFUSE to be eccentric! Since it bugged you all, I shall go be emo again… goes to emo corner

Disposal girl: blushes um… heh heh heh…

Emotionally broken Cinderella: we're in Disneyland, right? I'll totally find somebody! Somewhere… Well, see ya! I'm gonna look for a guy while going on the Ferris wheel!

X's N' O's: whoa…that's a BIG present for me just putting a ring on someone…

Shinigami!

Worthless hachi: I got a hug! I'm loved! Thank you for the Bleach!

Copfuzz: …

Freak-kanaka-quaw: SMILE! Why won't you smile? I know! I'll get you some cotton candy! That'll do it!

Clueless N' Mindless: COOKIE! Eats cookie GLOOP! GIANT LOBSTERS ON THE EMPIRE STATE BUILDING! LE GASPETH! THAT'S TERRIBLE!

Freak-kanaka-quaw: thankies! Puts on outfit I feel evil! Oh so evil! I feel evil, and awesome and GAAAAY!

Clueless N' Mindless: THAT SONG ROCKS! SQUEEE! WHAT'S THAT LASSIE? TIMMY'S STUCK IN THE WELL? OH NO! SAVE HIIIIM!

X's N' O's: I shall introduce the last review! It is from… Kyra Nazumi!

Neuro: -death glares- I am of the same speicies as you, rodent. You shall me the respect a royal deserves!! -covers mouth- CRAP!! I sounded like my uncle...T-T

Godai: Aww, poor guy...Yako, I think I know what will make him snap out of it.

Yako: -whispers- -grins evilly- And yeah. He wouldn't move once the ride stopped!! OwO

Hanakuro: Well, he's tall with bright red hair and emerald eyes. He's handsome-- just to put it simply. He is FREAKISHLY hot. In more ways than one. OwO

Sai: -huggles-

Shiori: Sounds AWSOME! -high-fives-

Aka-chan: ...uh...yeah..? -sweatdrop-

Hana-chan: Hah!! Nana, Hana...or as Aka-chan would say; BANNANA! XD

The SaDesTiC DeMoN HoTTie: shrinks back slightly

Mad-mutt: nothing will…ever again…ever…my life is over, everything's dull…

Disposal girl: hahaha! That was hilarious!

Freak-kanaka-quaw: that sounds like an anime/manga character I know! From Yu Yu Hakusho, I don't watch it, but Akashia-chan does!

Clueless N' Mindless: go YYH!

Grizzly bear!

X's N' O's: more hugs!

Emotionally Broken Cinderella: I'm back, and my manhunt was unsuccessful, sigh and yay! Let's go get him after the show! Grabs random beam

Clueless N' Mindless: HI! BANANA! Banana's are an excellent source of vitamin shoe!

Freak-kanaka-quaw: well, I guess this is bye for now! See you next week!

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Akashia-chan: okay, I'm calm.

Hanakuro: that's a good thing! And by the way, since this isn't part of the chapter, we get to use our normal names! Yay!

Akashia-chan: oh, and we're making a new rule that reviews can't last longer than a chapter, 'cause it gets tiring, and a little tedious for us to write…

Hanakuro: so, we're making a deal, that for this dare, we'll continue it for the first quarter of the next chapter, and then we'll stop. Those names are HARD to type! And confusing…

Akashia-chan: yup! Hey, by the way everyone, how did you like Disneyland? I liked California Adventure the best!

Hanakuro: I liked the flume ride! Did you all have fun? We hope you did! And did you notice the random words appearing in between some of our dialogue?

Akashia-chan: let me think…nope!

Hanakuro: really?

Akashia-chan: No! of course I saw them! They were my friends!

Hanakuroo: uh…okay…bye everyone!

Akashia-chan: see ya next time! Bye for now!

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Hanakuro: One last thing, we're having Talk Bubble's best friend Random Guy and Flamerose's demon side, Rikai in the next chapter as guest characters. But since we already have many MANY characters in this fanfic, we're going to have to have RG and Rikai fight over the position of guest character! (If we get permission from Talk Bubble and Flamerose, of course.)