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Both konoka and Ivan nod "that all we can do" Ivan said

"yes but what are we going yo do with them?" negi asked pointing to kaname zero and Kim

"they can come with i don't truth them being here alone." Ivan said

"you guys do know Asuna find out that we were spying on her the she will kill you guys right?"ichiru said as he get his shoes on.

"us don't you mean she will kill all of us. She will be mad at you too you know." konoka said

"no she don't care if i spy on her she said it herself." he said as he took his sweater.

"what when did she say that?" negi asked

"not that long ago she said that if there is a time that there is a guy that she goes out with and i don't truth him and if i know there is something bad happens the i can spy on her." he said

"ya she lets you spy on her but she kills me when i do it." Ivan said

"will you are her bother." Ichuri whisper to konoka

"what were come on i want to get this over with." Ivan said

"come on you 3 you have to come with." konoka said as they left kaname zero and Kim followed them.

with Yuki and her date

"i just love the flowers thank you Seiya" Yuki said as she smiled the flowers

"you really like them that good. You look great did you get all dress up form me?" he asked

"no i did it for the stray cats." Yuki said as she laugh a littler. He did too.

"come on then" he said as he took Yuki's hand they both walked to the fair as they walk Yuki tolled him what was going on.

"that sucks so thoughts people are going to come to your school next year and you have to go there for a week."

"ya it dose suck. I be there all day with out anything to do" Yuki said

"you know i have an aunt that has a smile farm there and she needs some help around there and if you want i can get you a job there." he said

"relay you mean that?" Yuki asked as she looked at him he nod

"that would be great thank you!" she said as she hugged him

"ya no prov " he said as he hugged her back

"come on lets get going Yuki said as he took his hand and they both ran the rest of the way of the fair not nothing that there was someone following them.

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