Hey, this is tsukihime-chan! i'm fixing this story because I've made soooo much mistakes that i should go to jail. Basically i'm just fixing the grammer and changing some parts throughout the story. Hope you guys think this version is better. Now, on to revised chapter 1.
Chapter 1
Angels. They were something I never believed in. They're said to be pure and a sign of hope. Something I knew that could never exist...but on that one faithful day, I knew I was wrong, because no one could be as heavenly as her.
It all started as a mission. Pein was sick of failing to capture the Kyuubi so he decided the whole Akatsuki invade the leaf village. The plan was to enter the village head on so we could lure Naruto our way there we encountered a ANBU squad. By the feel of their chakra, I could tell they were elite, but still gave us the signal to attack, but before we could, a bright red light went off. "What the hell was that?" said coming from the north was large amounts of chakra, including the Kyuubi.
Kisame smirked. "Looks like we got lucky today."
Thirteen ninjas joined the ANBU squad making it a total of eighteen.
"Give up and surrender now. You are completely out numbered." said the Fifth Hokage.
That's when all hell broke loose. That retard Sasuke flew at me like a bat out of hell. For hours it was nonstop fighting until something unexpected happened. The sky and world around us disappeared and then there was a explosion. When it was over, there was a bright light.
"OMG we're dead!" shouted Naruto.
Throughout the darkness, there came a giggle. Who the fuck would giggle at a time like this.
"Same old Naruto." a voice had gasped. "Sakura." Indeed it was her. The reason that everyone was surprised because Haruno Sakura had went M.I.A. 3 years ago without a trace. Everyone presumed she was dead, so it was a surprise to see her floating above us looking all holy.
"Sakura chan, what happened to you?" asked Naruto. Sakura smiled. "All will be explained in due time, but for now enjoy your journey."She then opened her arms and a huge black hole appeared. I then heard her whisper to me. "Think with your heart, not with your mind because your choices will alter the she finished , the black hole started to suck us all in. We couldn't escape, so we fell deeper and deeper.
That's when I heard it..
I try so hard and got so far
In the end it doesn't even matter
I had to fall to lose it all
In the end it doesn't even matter
(A/N That's his alarm clock)
My first thought was 'What the hell' but that was five minutes ago. So here I am now wondering what happen and how I arrived in this room.
"Itachi kun, time for breakfast."My eyes narrowed. That sounds like my mother who suppose to be dead. Don't get me wrong, I'm not unhappy, just surprised. Either way I was hungry and curious so I just went where the voice was.
I noticed the large stairs and the expensive looking hallway. It definitely was a mansion so these people were rich.
When I finally got downstairs and found the kitchen I saw the impossible. Sitting at a crystal glass table was my father, mother, and Sasuke. They were laughing and acting like a family.
"Itachi kun don't just stand there, come eat." said my 'mother'. I then took a seat and stared at it. This could be a trap, but it didn't feel like it to me.
"My gosh, dear look at the clock. It's time for you to go to work. Don't worry the cars already here." said then kissed his wife. "Bye Itachi and Sasuke. Have a great day at school." said Fugaku. He then made his exit.
I blinked. I can't believe he just said that. Where am I? In a parallel universe?
Wait what? I smacked my forehead. I couldn't believe it. Damn I got shocked stupid. I now know what happen. Sakura transported me to a different universe. I wonder if Sasuke knows.
"Sasuke where's the Kyuubi?" Sasuke stared at me. "Where's the what?"
"Never mind." So obviously he didn't know what I was talking about. Maybe his memory got messed with. I'll check into it later.
"Okay you two it's time to get ready for school." said Mikoto.
I have to go to school? Great.
I walked up the stairs and to what was supposed to be my room. I had to admit it did suite me. The walls were dark blue and I had midnight blue blankets with black pillows. There were other things I liked, but I didn't know what they were. After observing my room, I went to my closet and looked for a suitable outfit. I settle for a pair of black tee with a skull on it and black jeans with a chain hanging from the belt loop. Then I took a quick shower, put my clothes on, and went down stairs.
My mother handed me some keys and gave me a hug. "Have a nice day at school." I nodded at her and left.
End of chapter 1
Until next time. Ja ne!
