Review Responses
Darka-Chan: Oh, m'kay. The problem about that is I don't think any of my friends would like this kind of stuff. There very…how do you say…Innocent? Homo-phobic. Well not really because I am bi but back to the subject. I would need someone who wouldn't go "EW," and my friends don't really fall under that category.
moroitsubasa: I like you! Lol. Constriction eh? I like bondage…yes…bondage…(sounds like a dirty old man). I think I will make a story with bondage ne? lol. I'll add in those quote "I'm-so-bored-I'm-gonna-eat-my-face-off-stuff," un quote scenes. A puppet show would be funny but I don't think I will put that in, sorry. This is the most likely going to be the last chapter before the epilogue.
KittyMojo: YAY! Hee hee I am glad you like it, I write to please.
Zaidee: I thought it would be better if I had all four of them in the story. It's my first story if you can believe.
Assjuice: Well here's my update, hope you like .
Mira: (Glomps) I love you!! That was so long and interesting, I had fun reading! There were people who looked like anime characters? O.O I want to go to that camp!! He fears pain because in the last chapter if he kissed anyone other then Satoshi his head hurt lol.
Dark-Angel09: I am so happy you read it fast, that means I am a good writer . The rain has stopped but only for a short period, most of the streets are flooded. I know they could fly away but it's like being in the eye of the storm if you know what I mean. Yes, it is fun to toy with Daisuke, lol. Have fun with this chapter.: ).
tyco622: You're funny, I am happy you enjoyed my story so far.
MoonlightPrincess: Quote "So, pulls off the sweater, is it hot in here or what?" unquote. LMAO, I was hoping for that effect : P.
Kasumi Hikaru: (Eats the cookie) I really do love cookies. (Beams) I hope I don't disappoint, I want more cookies : P.
Weinerdog of Death and Doom: LMFAO Yournameissofunny!! Lol now try and read that!! I am glad that you were so excited about my fic. Hope you haven't lost faith in me!!
Silva: All good fan fics have a sex scene ne? lol but anyway this is MY sex scene so I hope it reaches expectations.
Rune Alchemist Kaori: It makes you happy to read, that makes me uber happy!!
Zafiro Okami: No need to consider my feelings : P
Agent-Krimsin: ROTFL (dances with her) yup, there was defiantly no sleep.
sailormulti01: (Pats her on the back) we all are aren't we? Ya I know, when I put the Seme Uke stuff I kinnda messed it up. I am dumb .
Rambie: Isn't it though? lol
Ok…No one's against the sex? Then on with the show!!
To Touch Me
Chapter 6
Smell
Story cap'What am I doing,' thought Satoshi. 'What am I doing…' his thoughts were cut off as the older boy slipped his hand under Satoshi's shirt, massaging the pale skin around his belly. Satoshi cringed. He turned his face to the wall, refusing to look into the 'Devil's' eyes.
Krad took his hand out from under his shirt, he slowly snaked his hand up, cupping Satoshi's face. Satoshi opened his eyes to be met with a fierce gaze of gold. He stifled a whimper.
Krad liked his teeth, grinning like a cat ready to rip apart its pray. "So then Satoshi, you're giving yourself to me hm?" Krad looked at Satoshi, with a god like essence surrounding him.
Satoshi felt like spitting in his face, "Yes Krad, I am, but not without a fight," he sneered. Krad looked into the storm that was the boy's eyes.
He could see swarms of emotion, a sea of endless conflicting emotion, and in its most purest form, rage. He could sense the heat emanating from him in a wave.
"Well then Satoshi, you're becoming a man tonight…"
The gray sky whirled in a fiery storm, signaling that it would not let the residence in the eye of the storm be. Oh no, it would smash at their windows and crack the few trees that it could reach, although…two people didn't really care at that moment.
Krad had finally done it, he had gotten the stonewall that is Satoshi to slowly break down and fall apart. To give in to any desire, rage, love, that he had locked up in his fortress. The fortress he had taken years to accumulate.
Krad pinned Satoshi down tightly, barely letting the boy move at all. Satoshi clenched his teeth and tightened his muscles to a point where they started to ache. Krad started to undress the boy, ripping Satoshi's shirt down the side to reveal pale soft skin, Krad liked his side, nipping at the skin near his stomach. The bluenette stared at the ceiling, pretending he didn't know what was happening.
Krad hastily undid the belt around Satoshi's waste and slipped of his pants to reveal a pair of blue boxers. He quirked an eyebrow at the large bulge in boxers, letting a grin slip onto his mischievous features.
"I don't have an erection."
"I would never dream of that Satoshi."
"Stop lying."
Krad put his palm on the bulge and moved his hands in small circles. Satoshi gave a soft growl that slowly vibrated through his body. Krad licked his lips and slowly kissed the boys jaw line, lapping his tongue in a slow sensual movement.
"Stop teasing…"Moaned Satoshi. His eyes shot open and he clasped his hand around his mouth trying to wipe what he just said from existence. Krad started to chuckle "okay," his eyes glinted and he ripped off Satoshi's underwear, smiling all the while. He started to stroke Satoshi's member. Satoshi moaned and arched his back, doing all these things involuntarily of course. It was just his body reacting with out his consent.
Krad got up and walked out of the room, leaving Satoshi dumbstruck, only to have Krad return with a tube of lube. "Where the hell did you get that?" inquired Satoshi, his eyes narrowing. 'He must keep some in his pocket' he mused. Krad stripped down and stood at the end of the bed. The boy looked him up and down and blushed the most reddest color of crimson.
"Lets just say the Niwa's have a strange fetish…" he said in response. He sat the lube on the table and slid back on top of Satoshi. "Don't we need that…" Satoshi said, he quirked an eyebrow. Krad slipped down to face Satoshi's member and slipped it into his mouth, sucking on it. Satoshi freaked, he started to buck and arched his back. His body screaming at him desperately trying to get the information of what was happening to the brain.
Krad slipped Satoshi's length out of his mouth and licked his lips, looking at the small beads off sweat that slipped off of the smaller boy beneath him. "That was shortly lived," gasped Satoshi, his voice cracking and airy.
"I am not done yet," exclaimed Krad, waving a finger in the air. He took the lube from the nightstand, squeezed out a large amount of liquid and rubbed it on the end of his member.
"So now the big performance…" and with one swift motion, he shoved his cock into Satoshi.
Satoshi woke up, his eyes sticking together and his body aching. He slowly peeled himself out of the groping sleep that desperately grasped for his attention, only to awake to Krad's tight muscular embrace. Sunbeams streamed in from the large window behind the bed and played across the "Devils" fine features. He sighed, no, he wasn't a Devil…he was just a creepy guy who had no human contact or love for so many years. 'But' thought Satoshi, 'he's still creepy…'
Satoshi let his eyes wander over the surprisingly toned man. His skin was pale and his hair seemed to glow in the yellow light of the…
Satoshi blinked, light? He slowly pried himself from the older males grip and looked out the window. There was a ton of water but it seemed that the rain had stopped. 'Sun,' thought Satoshi, a genuine smile creeping onto his lips.
He grabbed a pair of pants and a random white tight shirt he found in the closet. He took one look at Krad and headed for the bathroom, trying not to wake the older male. He reached the bathroom and closed the door.
"The Storm that has been ragging for the past few days has now ended and is reported to stay that way. In other news…"
Satoshi sat on the couch, yawning softly as he took every bit of information he could comprehend at 8:00 in the morning. He slowly lifted his tired aching body off the couch and walked to the small Kitchen. He set some coffee in the machine and started it up.
The water started to drip into the cup and he walked back to his place on the couch, only to find Daisuke sitting in the middle. He was feverishly flipping from one channel to the next. Satoshi surmised that he wasn't even comprehending what was on the TV, just randomly going from each channel. Satoshi scratched the back of his head and literally pushed Daisuke over then sat beside him. Stifling another yawn and resting back down knowing that he would have to get back up again.
Daisuke looked up at Satoshi when he sat down and smiled a tired smile. "So how ya doing Satoshi," Daisuke said slowly. He stared at Daisuke with a blank stare as if he didn't understand what was happening. He opened his mouth and then his eyes lit up in recognition.
"Uh…" Satoshi said oh so smartly, "I am tired…" he said. "Oh? Why's that?" exclaimed Daisuke. Satoshi just gave him a look that said are-you-really-that-stupid?
Daisuke obviously getting this realized why, and turned the color of a gummy bear. He turned back to the screen and started flipping the channels once more. "I…feel the same kind of tired," mumbled Daisuke, His face a still ever visible red. Satoshi chuckled at Daisuke's shyness. "It was a long night," Satoshi yawned and scratched his arm.
A soft smile played upon Daisuke's lips, "Yes it was," he said, a little louder this time.
A small beep sounded from the kitchen, signaling that the coffee was ready for anyway who cared to have some. Satoshi slowly got up from the couch and grimaced, "come on Daisuke, let's go get some Coffee." They both hobbled over to the kitchen like a couple of old men. Daisuke plopped down on the table and sighed, letting his head rest on the clean table top counter.
Satoshi picked up two cups from the cupboard, one had the label 'Daisuke' and the other said 'love' in Kanji. He reached for the pot and poured two cups. "Sugar, milk," inquired Satoshi, as he put two packs of sugar into his own cup and some milk.
"I'll drink it black," mumbled Daisuke.
Satoshi set the cups down and sat across from a fiery mop of hair. He poked Daisuke squarely in the head and the young boy gave a soft squeak in response. Daisuke then lowered his gaze to the cup and took a sip. Daisuke and Satoshi stared into there own individual cups, sitting there for quite a while, a comfortable silence surrounding them.
"Everything's going to change huh…"
"huh?" exclaimed Satoshi, shaken from his own very personal thoughts.
"I said…Everything's going to change," Daisuke said, a little quieter. "Ya, it's already changing Daisuke," said Satoshi softly. Daisuke looked up to meet blue orbs.
"Well there's nothing we can do about that…right?"
Rei's Corner
Rei: Wow, I hope this chapter was better then I thought. I'll be writing the Epilogue and hopefully that is done soon. This chapter was short and it took me forever to write…
Dark: That's because you're Lay-Z
Rei: I admit…I am.
Daisuke: We have had this discussion before!!
Dark, Krad, Sat, Rei: (All stare at Daisuke)
Daisuke: Sorry
Rei: Anyway I was listening to music to get me into the mood for writing the first part of this chapter, I recommend these songs: Crazy Bitch by Buck Cherry/Military Fashion Show by And One/Lying is the most fun a girl can have without taking off her cloths by Panic at the Disco/Come on closer by Jem/Fly Away from Eureka 7.
Satoshi: That's a lot of music Narrator Sama.
Rei: I am a music junky
Krad: That's for sure. Some stupid stuff to like The Emo song and I'm a gangster.
Rei: But there funny…
Krad: …and stupid
Rei: Whatever
Dark: Anyway, I hope everyone liked this installment-
Rei: You took my lines.
Dark: -and that you are even still-
Rei: he's not listening to me…
Dark: -reading this fan fiction.
Daisuke, Dark, Krad, Satoshi: Till the next chapter .
Rei: Ok, might as well tell you about this chapter. You can tell that I really seeped a lot of myself into this chapter, like my sick sense of humor… "A tube of lube" lol rhymes…anyway I had fun with all of the chapters and the reviews so if anyone has any requests for another Fan Fiction or even a Picture http://reiginsei. please tell me. I bid you Adieux
Sincerely Rei
