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I DON'T OWN INUYASHA

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"Heaven Sent"

Chapter 15

And With Thorns, Comes Hesitance


"Wow, Who's the pretty girl?" Hiten asked cockily, as if it was the first time he saw Kagome.

She could have died at the spot, seriously. Just a few hours earlier she was with Bankotsu being all snuggly wugguhly and now her mate is here. 'I'm such a slut'

Drowning in her own dismay, Kagome kept silent, beet red, and of course, horny; hook line and sinker. 'UGH! Even his presence makes me so- so..'

Knocking her out of her thoughts, an arm was suddenly slung around her shoulders, she looked up and saw Hiten's oh so sexy smirk, his red eyes shinning with desire. If there wasn't anyone around, she would have jumped him without a care in the world.

"Hey there, gorgeous" Hiten said, leaning closer to the miko and inhaled her scent.

' Heh-she wants me, I can smell it,' He thought to himself.

Bankotsu wanted to beat the crap out of this guy, steam was basically coming out from his ears.

'Who does this fucker thinks he is, no body touches Kagome, no one but me.' He glanced evilly at the demon, his eyes widened a bit, 'WHATS UP WITH THE HAIR!?'

There was an unwritten rule on the Shichinintai household, that if anyone touches Kagome, there would be hell to pay And hell was to be tolled out by Bankotsu himself.

"Uh- It's Kagome," the miko introduced herself. Hiten blinked, he didn't get it.

"Uh yeah, how could I forget, your m-" Kagome kicked his leg. He caught on immediately, sparing a brief glance at the other people watching them, he said awkwardly. "How can I forget a girl with uh,. ( Thinking about his favorite part of Kagome's anatomy) m-Massive breasts!"

Kagome could seriously die now, 'It's all over!! the sky is falling!'

"Hey, Hands off" Bankotsu threatened, gripping Hiten's muscular arm. Sensing a threat, Hiten let go of Kagome and very gently set Kagome aside.

Noticing the familiarity between the two, Bankotsu's jealousy rose to an entirely new level.

Glaring menacingly at the demon before him, he tightened his grip, but it didn't seem to bother the demon who was about, two and a half inches taller than him.

The two men had a stand off, glaring at each other.

Kagome just watched, they were both so hot, who was she to have such god-like men chase after her. She was in a daze, almost drooling in fact. She compared the two, Hiten was 19 (at least that was what he told her, if you calculate his age to human years, he was about 250 years old, give or take) had lighter skin, and was taller, had red eyes, and just let a few strands of his hair loose from his braid to serve as bangs. While Bankotsu who was 17, on the other hand, was smaller, tanned, had sapphire hued eyes and had a full set of bangs. They were like opposites.

Still drooling, the back of her head screamed at her to keep it together, no matter how incredibly sexy this men were do not give in! Ever!

Suikotsu observed his surroundings, Sango and Jakotsu were ignoring each other, back to back, and not looking at the other, at least trying to not look obvious when stealing glances at each other. His brother and the new comer, who wanted in in the Shichinintai were, trying to kill each other with glares, waiting on who will drop first, they had lightning zapping as they exchanged looks. He looked at the secluded corner in the room and Kagome was there drooling like crazy. He approached her.

Using his finger to flick some of the saliva away, he brought the girl back to reality.

"It's time to check on that neck of yours"The doctor explained, trying to catch a glimpse of the said neck. Kagome gulped, she thought she had already lured him off this topic, then she sighed, it was okay now she guessed, Hiten is here now and he should be responsible for her.

'wow that sounds so husband like' Come to think of it, Hiten would make a great husband, and father. She smiled warmly, her feelings for the demon brewing more confusion for her.

She nodded and followed the doctor to the other room.

Hiten stretched his hand towards Bankotsu, he knew this kid was the leader of the band, he wanted to be in it, for Kagome; even though that meant befriending his rival.

"Hiten, of the Thunder Demon Clan, I -apologize for earlier"

Bankotsu eyed the hand suspiciously but shook it anyway. "Bankotsu, leader of the Shichinintai"

Jakotsu choked at his brother's boastfulness. Sango eyed him and smiled.

"As if it isn't obvious" Sango joked, both snickered widely, trying to keep it down to the minimum.

Sango was the first to face him, he did the same, Sango offered him pocky, he accepted; with this they watched the show.

"What do you want of me?" Bankotsu queried.

Grabbing Raigekijin, his powerful thunder blade, he swung the weapon on his shoulder and said. "I want to join the Shichinintai"

Bankotsu almost gagged, but listened anyway.

"I used to be the half of the duo called the Thunder Brothers, with my brother, Manten. We were very powerful, but Inuyasha (Adding a little venom when he said it) destroyed my brother, so I was left alone,"

The mercenary sat on the floor, having Jakotsu have Sango pour his sake, he drank.

Sango grumbled, Jakotsu noticed this. "What?" He asked, almost friendlily.

"Am I gonna be you maid?" Sango sulked and pouted.

Jakotsu bashed her on the head. "Naw! Aniki just wants to look powerful in front of the new comer, he can't have me pouring sake now could he?"

"More like a bossy ass" Jakotsu laughed at this. Sango looked at him laughing, she observed him, only one question rose in her mind.

'Is he gay or not?' For Jakotsu's laugh right now sounded anything but squeamish.

"But he's alive now, he works for the Lord of the western lands" Hiten finished, not the least bit nervous at all, he was confident that he would get a position in this group, he knew that they had an open slot, Shichinintai meant band of seven.

He counted the members in his mind.

'Bankotsu, the ass, Jakotsu, the gay dude, Suikotsu, the weird doctor, Kagome, my mate, Sango, the cute boomerang chick, that's five, plus me, six'

"Hmm....I've heard of the Thunder Brothers, I have also heard that they are not equal, in terms of power, one of them is the leader, he who is stronger than the other, and much more (He looked Hiten from head to toe) presentable"

Hiten, a little offended, crossed his arms on his chest, shifted his weight to only one leg then gave him a look that said. 'Your point?"

"How can I be sure that you are not the weakling?" Bankotsu said all bitch like, he really didn't like this guy, but he could be good for the band, and that always came first, even first than Kagome, she would understand of course, right?

"And the way you look, makes me think that you are the, lesser brother"

Ticked and ready to explode, Hiten's eyebrow started twitching like could see little thunderbolts dancing above his head.

'What is with this guy!? I'm seriously gonna fry this lowly human, he thinks he's king! Once I'm in this fucking band he shall be dethroned! And what is wrong with the way I look!? If Kagome says I'm hot, then I'm hot! Deal with it! My woman doesn't lie!'

"Test my strength if you must, I don't mind"Hiten suggested, a grim look on his face, he wanted Bankotsu to fight him, so that he could prove to that ass that he was much stronger. Much, Much more.

Bankotsu nodded, liking the suggestion whipped his head at Jakotsu's direction.

Jakotsu understood, standing up, he flexed his arm to Sango. Sango popped a brow, but then caught on. She jumped to her feet and went for the snake sword Jakotsu loved so much. She handed it to him.

The two and a half men walked outside and Sango headed for Kagome's room.

She knocked, "Uh, Kagome, It's me, Sango, open the door please"

Soon enough the door swung open to reveal Kagome and Suikotsu, Sango gave him the look and proceeded into the room wearily.

"They are testing Hiten's strength, care to watch?" Sango informed, pointing at the window with her thumb.

All of the sudden Kagome was worried, she couldn't stand it if Hiten was hurt, she squabbled to her feet and dashed for the window, she had a good view of what was happening outside. She clutched her heart, she didn't want anything bad to happen to either of them, a little biased on Hiten, but still.

The once sunny weather molded into a cloudy one, Thanks to Hiten, of course. Jakotsu readied his stance and waited for his brother's signal to attack the new comer.

Hiten tapped the ground impatiently with Raigekijin's base, hungry for a good fight.

"Jakotsu!" Bankotsu called.

'Wow' Kagome thought, Bankotsu seemed more mature when it comes to these things, where was the childish idiot she liked so much?

"Yes Aniki?"

"If you loose, you know whats gonna happen" Bankotsu leaned against a tree and nodded his head, signaling the start of the fight.

'I can't loose! I just became second in command, I can't let Bankotsu's long lost smexi twin brother take it away from me!'

Jakotsu charged, letting loose Jakotsutou, the gallant snake sword, towards Hiten.

Hiten's eyes widened, he had to admit, he was somewhat surprised, he heard that the leader had a kick ass sword, I guess they forgot to mention 'so did his comrades' .

"Oh Hiten, Please be careful" Kagome whispered, no one heard it but her and Sango, The Taijia gave her a questing look, when Kagome didn't respond, she let it go. For now.

Graceful as ever, Hiten flew out of the way, equally shocking the audience as he was shocked with Jakotsu's sword.

Bankotsu smirked, he never had a comrade that could actually fly, 'good, good'

From the air, Hiten dodged all of Jakotsu's attacks as he glided closer and closer to the mercenary, rendering all Jakotsu's attacks fruitless.

When he was close enough, Hiten attacked Jakotsu with his lightning infused spear, causing the ground beneath Jakotsu to burst out, it didn't hit Jakotsu, he was able to dodge on time. "As expected from the Shichinintai's second in command.

"Seems someone did his homework" Suikotsu commented. The two girls in front of him nodded in approval.

Agitated, Jakotsu attacked again, and again and again. Hiten just laughed at the Jakotsu's attempts to damage him, which, by the way, he found futile.

"You better take this seriously!" Jakotsu was getting pissed, this bastard was just too fast for him.

"Why? Can you beat Inuyasha? Jakotsu" Hiten asked between clashes.

"No" Jakotsu's teeth clenched together, his jaw hardening.

"Inuyasha could not have beaten me if he someone (Smirking at Kagome) didn't break my wheels! What makes you think you can beat me?"

"Cocky fuck!" Jakotsu slashed at Hiten, with the new found knowledge, he had a new target, the wheels.

"Hiten hasn't unleashed his thunder yet and Jakotsu is already having a hell of a hard time" Sango stated what she observed.

Kagome was blushing furiously, no longer worried about Hiten's welfare, she was sure he'd get through this without a scratch. All she could think of now is. 'Hurry up and finish this battle Hiten so I can have my way with you' Yup you guessed it, she was still horny as hell.

'Kagome that isn't like you! Bad girl!' Her inner mind scolded her.

'Who could blame her? He's smokin' hot!' Her inner heart countered.

'And that smirk! (Faints)' That was Kagome.

Seeing Jakotsu's reckless charge, Hiten decided that it was time to finish this battle, he could feel what Kagome was feeling, and it wasn't easy to control his desire, neither was hers.

He sent a small bolt of lighting to pierce Jakotsu's unguarded foot making Jakotsu fall to the ground. He then summoned an even bigger lighting blot, letting it charge first above his hand before letting it out to finish Jakotsu.

Bankotsu's relax expression turned into a worried one, his brother was loosing, and that lighting ball was huge! He was about ready to leap into Jakotsu's defense when Hiten unleashed his attack.

There was a loud boom, like the sound thunder made when it was storming.

All they could see was smoke.

"Jakotsu!" Bankotsu called through the think layer of smoke, worried about his brother now more than ever.

Then came an ear piercing cry of pain. Bankotsu took Banryuu and swooshed it to clear the smoke, he could barely control his laughter at what he saw.

Jakotsu was running around in circles, flapping his arms like crazy , his ass was on fire. He screamed. "Hiten! you sick, fucking bastard!"

Hiten rolled around on the air, clutching his stomach, and pounding the clouds. He gasped for air, as he flicked his finger to send another bolt of lighting to Jakotsu's ass.

"AHHH!!"

This went on for a good ten minutes, Bankotsu had the same hysterical laughing fit that Hiten was having.

"ANIKI!" Jakotsu screeched in despair. "The world has gone mad!" He added, with a louder, more scattered voice.

Twitching on the window sill, was Sango, Kagome, and Suikotsu. They couldn't believe it, they were worried sick, and now the so called men were acting like children who were playing with fire.

Kagome, pushed herself away from the window and fell to the bed,

"Hiten you rascal" Kagome huffed and started giggling.

Sango went to sit beside her, so did Suikotsu.

"Those idiots." Sango sighed, also relieved that no one was hurt, namely Jakotsu.

"Another fully credited moron has joined the band, I'm all alone" Suikotsu joked, true enough, he was the only mature person in the band.

"It's three against one" They all laughed.

After Bankotsu recovered from his laughing fit, he got a bucket of water and poured it on Jakotsu.

"You OK?" Bankotsu asked, the laughter not yet leaving his voice completely.

"Yeah" Jakotsu pouted.

Soon, Hiten joined them on the ground.

Bankotsu extended his hand to Hiten's shoulder, "Second in command"

Hiten punched him playfully on the shoulder, "Aniki is it?"

The shorter of the two punched back, a little stronger than necessary. "Hiten is it" That was more of a mock statement than a question.

Hiten punched harder. "What of it?"

Bankotsu punched even harder, without saying anything, Hiten punched back, again , and again.

"ERR!" Bankotsu jumped him and started sparing all too early.

"Your braid sucks!" Hiten spat.

Bankotsu punched Hiten square on the jaw, "Your eyes look like tomatoes!"

Hiten pulled Bankotsu's braid and punched him smack on the nose. "Kagome likes them, thank you very much!"

That hit a nerve. "Aw it's on now man!" They continued to 'spar'

"Funking morons" Jakotsu said, near tears when he saw the damage dealt on his new kimono.


Perched on a tree somewhere in Arashiyama, Was a blond haired man and a blue haired one.

"Do you know where she lives?" Jin asked, he was gay, but smexii at the same time.

"No, But that's the easy part, It's very easy to find her" Kyou said, his hair dancing with the gush of wind that passed by.

"Well you look for her, I'm staying here with Hikari" Jin pointed at the cage hidden in the darkness, within the cage was a tear stained face of a child, torture and hungry. poor girl

With out sparing a glance at the girl, Kyou took off, Searching for Kagome.

"If you'd ask me, he looks good with Sango-chan huh Hikari?" Jin asked the shattered girl.


"Naraku, why have you brought me back?" The man asked as he gazed on all his shards, in total they were ten.

"Ku ku ku , You are not alone, I brought the rest of your brothers here as well"

" And Bankotsu?"

"There was no need"


A FEW HOURS LATER

Suikotsu was busy examining Kagome's neck, as usual, Kagome didn't want Bankotsu in the room with her. Sango was there, glaring at Kagome, she knew what this mark was, it was a demon mating mark, Suikotsu seems clueless of this knowledge, Sango was contemplating if she should tell him.

'Kagome, what did you get yourself into' Sango thought to herself, worried for her friend.

"Well, there isn't any sign of struggle, perhaps you were asleep when this happened?" Suikotsu was looking Kagome dead in the eye, She was never a good liar, but heck, she would give it a try.

"I don't-" She was about to explain but Sango cut her off, now, fully knowing that Kagome did let whatever did this to her, do this. Kagome was mated, that she was sure of.

"Impossible, a wound that deep would wake you up, before it got half as deep."

Suikotsu nodded, it was true, a wound like this would cause severe pain.

"Another thing, it doesn't seem to get better, it's been weeks now and-" Suikotsu trailed off as he browsed through one of his books.

'Figures' Sango thought, disgusted, she couldn't understand it, demons are what Kagome, a priestess, should be against, but why is she mated to one?

Kagome knew the look on Sango's face, she just hoped that Sango would keep an open mind.

Tilting Kagome's jaw, Suikotsu compared the mark on her neck with the ones drawn on the book when the doors slid open.


Bankotsu had to admit, it was nice having another male around, not that Suikotsu was not man enough, it was just as a stuck up guy who was no fun. -save the killing. Hiten was alright, he was fun, noisy and cruel, just like him.

Not to mention, Childish.

"Pee eww! Jakotsu! You smell like burnt shit!" Bankotsu complained, half drunk, at least he pretended to be. They all burst into boisterous laughter.

Gulping down the rest of his sake Hiten got up and started to head down the hall.

"Hey! Where you going?" Jakotsu asked.

"uh- over there?" Hiten pointed at some random direction.

"Oh- okay.." Jakotsu said in between gulps.

'That was close' Hiten thought as he sniffed for Kagome's scent. He followed his nose and it led him to a door.

It was Kagome's room, he felt like he didn't need to knock, so he just slid the door open.

His eyes narrowed into two red slits at what he saw.

There was that stupid doctor playing medicine with his and Kagome's mating mark, not only that, Kagome had her kimono half off, just enough to cover those that were only for his eyes.

All eyes were on him. Suikotsu was about to ask him to leave because, from what he has seen, Kagome didn't like the presence of other men when she was being examined, but he was interrupted by Kagome herself.

Loosening up, Hiten greeted.

"Hi honey! I'm home!" saying this, he walked over to Kagome and sat beside her on the bed.

"Oh, Hi Hiten!" Kagome said, pulling up her kimono, her eyes trying to transmit an unidentified message. Hiten rolled his eyes, Kagome huffed at his cockiness and smacked him on the arm.

He looked at her. "What was that for?"

She just pouted.

"Cute" He said pinching her cheeks, but pulled his hands away when Kagome tried to bite him.

Suikotsu just looked at the couple, they seemed so comfortable together. He wondered why.

He watched as Kagome kept bashing him with her hands, but what caught his attention was when Hiten brought her hands to his mouth and pretended to bite them. He angled his head to see what his teeth were like, but he could not see it.

Kagome started to feel lightheaded and nudged at Hiten to tell the others to leave.

"Uh- Aniki is calling for you two" He lied, gesturing at Sango and Suikotsu. Both gave him a questioning look but left anyway.

Hiten watched the doors close, but before he could turn to Kagome, he already got jumped and they fell on the bed, with Kagome clinging to him like she was hanging on for dear life.

"K-Kagome! Can't breathe!"

"Shut up, I'm not that strong, You can so breathe." Kagome said snidely and cuddled her head at the crook of his neck. She then unconsciously lifted her leg and place it on his thigh ans she snuggled deeper.

'oh god help me, she is making this hard' Which is hard? I'll leave that to your imagination.

He brought his hand up to stroke her hair.

"Hiten" Kagome said and looked up to face him.

"Hm? He answered, looking down at her, their noses were touching, but neither minded at all.

She didn't speak, she just stared at him, lost in his amber gaze.

He couldn't help it anymore, this was going to be their first kiss, the timing is perfect, and neither of them were lust driven by the mark, he wasn't unmarking her so she was in her right mind. He gently took hold of her chin, positioning her properly so that it would be perfect, he wanted everything to be perfect for her. He waited for any sign of resistance, when he found none, he leaned forward and sealed their lips together.

His hands were everywhere at once, while her traveled to the base of his neck, pulling him on top of her, (He thought this was too much for Kagome, but he didn't mind her making the first moves) she advanced again by wrapping her legs around his waist, bringing their bodies closer together.

"Nn" Kagome moaned, loving the attention she was getting in the southern region. Hiten broke the kiss and started nipping on her neck, sucking the soft, smooth skin of it.

He pulled the kimono down, revealing only half of her breasts. His lips traveled lower, and licked her cleavage.

"Ohh.." Kagome never felt this way before, she wasn't the type who would engage in this kind of activity, but Hiten just brought out the demon in her.

While Hiten was performing his um-duties, Kagome tried to clear her head of those very wanted clouds.

'Hiten feels so good! But how about Bankotsu?'

'Can't we just enjoy the now and worry about the later when it is the now?' The inner suggested.

'I did say that we would go with the flow'

"Ah!" Kagome inhaled sharply when Hiten pinched one of her nipples. 'oh god!'

"No one-" Hiten began as he completely removed Kagome's top. "gets to see this but me," he finished, eying his property hungrily.

Kagome just nodded, mouth gaping open, Hiten dived his tongue in her mouth, massaging her breast with his right hand while the other traveled down and rested on her hip.

He pulled away again. "Promise me you will never remove your clothing for other men, no matter what purpose when I'm not around"

"Only for your eyes" Kagome said this and traced her fingers on his face, it was so soft, like a baby's cheek.

Having said what he needed to say, he was about to stop this shenanigan but was rendered speechless when he caught a glance of his favorite part, his mouth watered, some saliva dripping on her chest.

She was a little embarrassed, but she did not cover up, she wouldn't hide anything from him.

"Now it's your turn to drool"

Hiten smirked, "Don't like it?"

Kagome shrugged, not sure on what to say to that.

"I'll clean up then" with that, he trailed his tongue along her bust and liked up all the drool, while adding more drool as well, but that really wasn't the point.

Kagome could feel him growing hard as she rocked her hips against his.

'He is so hard'

"Hiten-uhh" Kagome was in a bliss, she wanted it so bad right now.

"Want me to satisfy you? I can do that you know" Hiten suggested in a the husky voice he knew Kagome found sexy, grinding harder.

Kagome's legs which were locked on his hips, tightened as she arched her back, giving Hiten a full view of her breasts.

'perfect' Hiten thought.

He pushed her back to the bed and was about to continue his earlier ministrations but Kagome wouldn't have it. She flipped them over and sat on his abs.

He looked at her, confused, she was blushing furiously, like she was going to say something embarrassing .

"I-i-I want to satisfy y-you, I'm always the one who ends up satisfied, and you are left to deal with (turns around and points at tent on his pants) that alone"

Kagome couldn't look him in the eye, she was too embarrassed, first of all, he'll have to teach her how to do that, and what if he rejects her?

She never payed attention on any of her classes, even the most interesting one, 'Sex Ed' Therefor she had no clue on how to stimulate a man's, um, organ.

Hiten smiled at her and cupped her cheek.

Trying to be brave for him, she pushed.

"Well?"


CLIFFY!

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