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Wow, I had 8 reviews in 24hours after publishing the last chapter!
And 11 more added me to their story alert.
That's mental for me!
Tell me, did I publish it at a good time or are you all just into that whole bondage thing?
Or the rape thing?
Tell me what you're into
I could fit it into the story…if it isn't already.
By the way…I don't know what the hell I have done. I'm making this up as I go along people! And now I've got to make something up about the notorious kyuubi! I don't even know how you spell it! So I'm warning you that this story will start to suck! I'm at a blank! I need help with this now, anyone want to offer their assistance? Leave ideas in ur comments please
Warnings for this chapter: cheating
Truth or Dare?
Holiday: Two: Sasuke's day out: part one
Naruto stepped into the shower the following morning turning up the cold water in an attempt to get rid of the great heat suffocating him. What the hell had happened? As he closed his eyes he saw flashes of his beloved in pain. It hurt him so and even more when he recalled that it was him who had caused the pain. He sank onto the floor of the shower, tears mixing with the shower water as he cried. Something was wrong with him. This wasn't a normal reaction to what he had witnessed. Anyone else would have just had a normal wet dream about the one that they loved after seeing them touch themselves. Having passionate sex with them, not raping them and leaving them with a vibrator up their arse.
He had to avoid Sasuke.
He couldn't guarantee his safety at the moment. And that was something he had to do. He loved Sasuke and didn't want any harm coming to him.
They didn't have any plans for that day. They only planned on sleeping next to each other and then seeing what the next day would bring. But now, Sasuke had gone, Naruto had found him and when he was sure that he was safe and fine, he returned home. He could only guess that if he didn't go to Sasuke, then Sasuke would come to him. But Naruto didn't want that. He didn't want Sasuke to come anywhere near him at the moment. Who knew what would happen!
Kyuubi had been fine before. Dormant, like a volcano. Sleeping. He hadn't messed with Naruto's life. Sure, he provided a steady flow of chakra and a level boost when against tough opponents on missions when needed and Naruto still healed at a faster rate than any other human but, he had never shown himself in any form. What was happening? Why now, when he was happy, did something have to happen?
Naruto had to make sure that Sasuke stayed away. He wiped away his mingled tears and finished off his shower before getting out and drying himself off. He went to his room to change and when that was done, he picked up the phone by his bed and called Sasuke, a plan formulating in his mind.
"hello?"
"h-hey –cough-"
"n-naruto? Are you alright?"
"no, I'm not, I -cough- I must have got a cold, from yesterday-cough- would be best if you didn't come round today"
"oh, o-okay, if thats what you want?"
"yes, just, don't come round, I wouldn't want to pass anything onto you"
"well, get well soon"
"i-I'll try"
They both hung up the phone and Naruto fell back onto his bed.
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Sasuke put down the phone and lay back down snuggling under the warm covers of his huge bed. Naruto had told him not to visit him… that he was ill… but Sasuke was fine… and they had both been swimming in that lake. Maybe…maybe Naruto was having second thoughts about them being a couple and was just making up an excuse…
"No! Naruto wouldn't do that to me, he- he loves me… I'm sure of it. He probably is just a little ill, a cold, nothing serious." He convinced himself. But now that Naruto was ill, what was he supposed to do? He could train… but that's boring, he was already one of the strongest shinobi in Konoha… Maybe he'd just roam around the village, see if he bumps into his neglected friends, he hasn't seen much of them since him and Naruto have been spending all their time together, it would be nice to catch up with them.
Having come up with a plan, he got up and headed to the bathroom to wash and prepare for the day ahead. He showered and allowed the warm water to wash over him and rid the sweat and dried release from the night before and blushed slightly at the memory. He dressed and went down for some breakfast before grabbing a jacket and heading out of the huge mansion.
It was a sunny spring day and the air was welcoming and refreshing. Sasuke strolled down the path leading from his secluded mansion to the busy town where he waved, nodded and smiled to the friendly villagers that greeted him as they went along with their business. Along the way, he bumped into a man, slightly taller than him with broader shoulders than him, as Sasuke looked up, he was caught by pale eyes with no pupils. They stood there for a minute, just staring at each other before Sasuke spoke; "Hyuga"
"hn, Uchiha"
Sparks flew as they glared at each other, jumped away from each other in a fighting stance and ran at each other, as they neared each other, they both stopped dead in their tracks each holding a kunai to the others throat. They glared some more before laughing and putting their kunais away.
"long time no see Sasuke"
"yea sorry about that, I've just been really busy"
"yea with a certain Uzumaki I hear"
Sasuke blushed and looked down towards the ground.
"how'd you hear?
"everyone knows Sasuke, we were all just waiting for it to happen"
"what?"
"well after that 'kiss' all those years ago, it just seemed kind of obvious, everyone is drawn together by the hands of fate."
"er…Neji… you weren't even in our class…"
"so? I still heard about it! Small village, and even smaller school, there are no secrets"
"true"
"I could also see the true desire in your eyes during that truth or dare session a while back. You couldn't hide it and Uchiha's always get what they want eh? Haha, but anyway, so, Uzumaki finally managed to get away from your wondering hands for the day?"
"actually, I got away from his wondering hands haha, he's ill, didn't want me to catch anything"
"oh, that's a shame. Do you have any plans for today?"
"er… yea, I was planning on walking around the village, seeing if I could chat to some of the guys, find out what they've been doing…"
"you know that sounds really lame…right?"
"yes I do" he said enthusiastically
"how about you come to the hot springs with me, my treat"
"they're free Huyga"
"shhh…"
Sasuke rolled his eyes
"hn. Whatever, lead the way oh mighty Hyuga!"
They both laughed and Neji lead the way to the relaxing hot springs.
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After arriving at the springs, both boys removed of their clothes and entered the private springs disposing of the towel around their waist. They sunk into the water, both enjoying the hot water wrapping around every part of their body.
After a few minutes of silence, Neji spoke:
"so how far have you got with Uzumaki?"
Sasuke blushed, it was almost expected that at this age when you're in a relationship with someone that you have sex soon after you get together so it was embarrassing for Sasuke that the furthest they had got was making out.
"that's none of your business Neji"
"aww come on Sasuke, you can tell me"
Sasuke played with the water still blushing, uncertain on whether he should tell Neji or not.
"we- we haven't got very far"
"have you got off with him yet?"
'err…got off with him? What does that even mean?!'
"n-no?"
"what have you done then?"
Sasuke mumbled under his breath, his body sinking in the water so his mouth was basically under.
"what?"
"we have only kissed!"
"oh, was it on the cheek, lips or tongue"
Sasuke went bright red as he said "tongue"
"was it good?"
"neji!"
"what? I was just asking"
"well don't 'just ask'"
"so he wasn't then"
"Neji!!" Sasuke said warningly. Neji quickly made his way over to the other side of the spring to protect himself from the Uchiha.
Sasuke sighed as he allowed himself to sink back into the water and relax.
A little while later Neji wandered back over taking a place next to Sasuke and watch the raven with his eyes closed a with the smallest of frowns across his face. The frown seemed to soften as Neji watched and Sasuke's now peaceful face was stared at by nejis big white eyes.
Neji then started to look over Sasuke's body through the water, it was toned yet feminine and slender with curves in his hips and relatively small shoulders. Without really thinking Neji started to stroke Sasuke's face down to him collarbone. He heard a slight moan at his actions and carried on running his hands through the black locks. He brushed his hand over Sasuke's lips and soon after started placing kisses on the Uchiha. From his forehead down his slightly damp nose to his red thin lips. He ghosted kisses over the body in front of him and merely got mewls and moans as a response. He carried on and placed a firmer kiss on Sasuke's lips where Sasuke even kissed back with his eyes still closed. Neji lay on top of Sasuke as their bodies touched and they deepened the kiss even more. Neji licked Sasuke's bottom lip and Sasuke opened obediently letting him in.
Little did they know that by the entrance of the hot springs was Shikamaru, watching their every move. His eyes widened in shock as he turned and left the sight to tell Naruto what he felt he should know.
"how troublesome."
OMG I AM SOOO SORRY! I HAVNT UPDATED FOR SO LONG! I had a complete and utter writers block and had no idea what to do seeing as they had to actually NOT have any sex in this chapter.
Sorry if u wanted some :S
Erm, could I ask for 10 reviews for the next chapter? Seeing as that's how many the last one got lol, I think I'll do that from now on, ask for the amount of reviews I got for the last one. Lol
Thankyou's:
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REVIEWS:
Naruto-is-hot: well sorry, but yes indeed I am sick. Lol I know I'm sick. –coug cough- SEE?! Nah im just kidding.
Sailor Minerva: glad you liked the horrible abuse lol we all do
RandomFandom100: I love making the characters different and surprising, it makes the story more interesting XD
Kiandra Rays: thankyou for your review, I do believe I sent you a reply for your review already but I havnt got a reply from you, if you for some reason hant got it, I will just repeat myself. You said that some parts are weak and seem rushed and if it would be possible I would like you to point these part out to me to help me improve my story.
Bloody white rose786: thankyou for the review, you were indeed the last person that needed to review lol, but sorry I made everyone wait so long for this next one. I'm glad I started to scare you lol in a weird way because it meant that you got into the story and im happy about that
Justanotheryaoifangirl: im glad you enjoyed yea I was quite proud of that part D that, I would say is a very good way to describe their relationship. A rollercoaster indeed.
Minako momiji: god doesn't everyone need their cam at a time like that, I wish I could draw because that would be one totally hot picture. Ooo, if there are any artists out there have a go at drawing any scenes lol. Sorry you had to wait so long for this chap.
Bubblegumcrazed: sorry, I thought I should get the description in there lol, I will try to get more action in for future reference, maybe I'll need to do more research… I don't know why he needed so many toys, or why anyone would, it just seemed a really good idea at the time. --U do you mind if I use that idea? Not for this chapter obviously but maybe for later ones? I guess you'll have to read to find out ;D
UchihaTetsuya: I could have thought that Naruto was dominant lol that's partly the reason why I started writing this. Because my friend was convinced that Sasuke was dominant but I think differently. I just love it when the usually powerful one is made to quiver and their status is diminished. But I do love Sasuke lol. :O short chapters!? Lol sorry, I'll try to lengthen them. Quite frankly I thought that they were a good length. Lol obviously not for everyone lol.
Keep coming for your doses lol
Finally…
Kirei Gabrielle: I'm glad you found what you were looking for. I was looking for something like this but couldn't fins it so wrote one myself lols haha oh dear, sorry you probably overslept but glad it was worth it :D I am naturally a very romantic and tender girl but I have a hidden abusive side to me that only comes out in my fics lol.
Thanks for reading
Sending love
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