Fang:Chapter 16!
Iggy:Almost to the end.
Me:WOOP WOOP.
DisayClaimayEray:I'm James Patterson.0.0 jk I'm not but I wish I was.
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Wingedfreak:Yeah it's evolving into the next story which is a Twi-Ride Xover.
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FORTHWARD and ONWARD and oh you get the idea.
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The ghost form of Ari.
Fang POV:
I sturggled to keep up my facade, but it was truely hard.
Max was clenching and unclenching her hands nervously.
She kept looking behind her, but it was the like the Erasers just stopped.
Max...
"Ari?"She asked.
The Ari ghost thing smiled. Yes it's me, and I missed you.
"Your...a...human..ghost thing.."She stuttered.
He nodded.Not Eraser-fied anymore.I'm eight yeah Imma ghost.
Suddenly, we heard feet pounding through the halls. But they were human.
Hermione,Ron, and Harry came rushing up to us,gasping for breath.
"We....finally...found....you...guys."Harry said between gasps.
Ron was the first to completely catch his breath and said, "We've got to go.I wanna get out of here, this place gives me the creeps."
You have noooooo idea. They gasped and whirled to Ari.
"G-g-g-g-g-ghoooooost!"Ron yelled.
"Shut up, don't you know what kind of a place this is?!We need to get out of here now,without a sound!" Max whisper-yelled slapping a hand over his mouth.
They all nodded scared of her forcefulness. I smirked, my way of laughing.
This way...
Ari ghost thing led us down the hall. More walking. I sighed.
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Max POV:
After many many turns we finally made it to some big metal doors.
Fortunately they were the doors out into the open.
Unfortunately, the only 'open' is 'the feild'.
That's where they put us to train with the Erasers.
More or less a battlefield.
I guess that's what it's going to be today.
Alright Max, this is your stop. I nodded as Ari turned into swirly mist then went under the crack of the door.
I took a deep breath and put my hand on the door.
I tugged. It swung open easily but what I saw outside, was not going to be easy.
A million or so Erasers.
All in fighting form.
I took one more deep breath.
"Are you ready for this guys?"
I turned my head to the flock who all nodded solemnly.
"What's the plan Max?"Asked Iggy.
"Fight as hard as you can and as many as you soon as you have a good chance, fly away."
Remie smiled evilly. "Then let's beat the crap outta these mutts."
I nodded with a slight smile and we plundged into the battle.
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I know it's really short I just really wanted to put it up.
I know I said I'd have it up in three days but I have writers block and summer break just came so I've been hanging with my friends.
I know that's no excuse but I have been thinking of what to put next.
Since it's almost over I think I'll do the battle in 17.
Them coming back in time for the Yule Ball in 18.
The epilouge in the 19.
And a sneak preivew to the sequel-Maximum Ride-Off to Sporks!In 20
If you read the chapter titles in the end it'll make a quote which will be used in chapter 18 or 19.
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