A/N: (start 15/09/09) Just to see how long I take. (18:41)

Now I'm sure people have figured it out. But the mystery fighter is of course. Sai, but he isn't the same emotionless, funny yet strange person we all know. This Sai, who will we shall have as his name. Has emotion and will be like any normal genin. This is an au Sai who actually lived a normal life as a child.

Also anyone who post to ask me a question. If I don't get it before I finish the chapter and post it on dv first. You'll have to wait to see if I'll answer next time round. And I shall answer them at the end of my chapters.

And to begin!

Chapter 23

"This match is a tie..." Hayate called as Sakura and Ino lay flat on their backs from a double knockout.

"Man... I hate to sound rude. But that took forever to finish." Naruto muttered. "They really didn't put any effort into their fight till the end."

"Still, Sakura-chan and Ino-san put up a great fight." Lee stated.

"Hm... They did show what they could do by the end... Least they didn't tie and not give their all..."

"I guess..." Naruto muttered as Ino and Sakura were rested by the wall by their sensei's. The screen beeped.

Garra

Vs.

Kabuto Yakushi.

"Hayata-san!" Kabuto called out. "I'll forfeit this match."

Naruto gave a small glance to the older male. 'Well he does have into on Garra... Guess he knows he's got no chance.'

"Weakling... I should kill you right now for running away..." Garra spoke out in a monotone voice.

"Garra... Please remain calm..." Garra's jonin sensei spoke. 'We don't want you going out of control.'

"Very well..." Hayate spoke before coughing. "Next match."

Kabuto gave a small glance to the sound jonin before walking off. The sound jonin smiled at Kabuto.

'It would be pointless for you to get involved now... We have what we want to continue the task at hand... Shame for Sasuke-kun... But it seems there are unique brats everywhere...'

The matches then rolled out as followed.

Shikamaru faced off with Kin. The sound ninja lost after not watching the teens shadows well enough.

Following was Temari Vs. Ten-ten. The weapon's user failed to get passed the powerful wind the sand ninja used. Naruto was hoping to fight her in the finals. A chance to see who was the better win user.

Lee, Mina, Neji and his teammate. Kabuto's teammate and the sound ninja left. 3 round's to finish up the rounds.

The screen beeped.

Mina Mikon

Vs.

Yoroi Akado

Mina gulped as the older male smirked.

'This will be easy...' He then jumped down.

"M-maybe I should back down... I don't think I'll get through this one..."

"Nonsense Mina..." Kurenai spoke. She put her hand on Mina's head. "You're strong Mina."

"She's right Mina." Shino spoke. "And both me and Kiba know you're no push over. Don't be afraid to fight will all you've got."

"B-but I'm more medical..."

"Trust me... You'll do fine. Make Kiba happy that his teammates got to the finals."

Mina gulped. "O-okay..." She then made her way down and stood facing Yoroi.

"Go Mina!" Hinata called out.

"Yeah go for it!" Naruto and Lee cheered. If Hinata was going to cheer. The hell they were as well.

"Heh... I'll make this quick." Yoroi stated with a smirk behind his mask.

"Begin!" Hayate called as Yoroi formed his seals. His palm's glowed and he rushed forward.

'He's fast!' Mina threw a set of shuriken and Yoroi jumped to the side and jumped forward. He missed Mina by a margin and the girl skidded back.

'What...' Mina rubbed her wrist. 'His hands... They suck chakra...'

"Seems you noticed... Then you know you're chances are slim." Yoroi rushed forward and Mina quickly dodged his attack.

This was one thing she was good at. She could evade her foe no matter how quickly they moved. She was skilled enough to evade their attacks.

"Are you just going to keep running?" Yoroi asked as Mina skidded back after evading another attack. "One of us will run out sooner or later..."

'Oh god... he's right.' Mina thought a little panicked. 'He's far more aggressive in his attacks, sooner or later one I'll make a mistake and he'll be on top of me.'

Mina was nervous about it, but she knew what had to be done, she had to fight, and at close range.
While she was trained to do so, and was skilled, her very disposition towards close combat gave her opponents the upper hand every time.
Mina quickly drew a kunai and held it ready for combat, steadying herself as best she could, ready for Yoroi's hit, deep down, she wasn't ready, but as always, prepared to do her best.

Yoroi smirked and dodged her strikes and grasped her by the right arm. "To easy..." Mina grunted and swung her left at Yoroi's side, but he gripped that as well.

"No... Come on Mina!" Hinata yelled. Other's yelling from the side line.

"Don't give up!"

"Show him you're not a push over!"

Mina felt her energy getting lower. She stood no chance... The only way she could win now...

"Come on Mina!" Mina blinked and looked back. Kiba stood on the stair way. He'd recovered in from Kikan's paralysis.

"Don't give up! Show him you're not a push over!"

'K-kiba-kun...' Mina closed her eyes. "Agh!" She jumped up and kicked forward. Yoroi's eyes shot wide open and he released the girl who was panting on the floor. Yoroi was holding on to what Naruto would now snigger to as, crushed nuts.

"Go Mina! While he's stunned!" Kiba called. Mina took a breath and rushed forward. Putting what she knew from her fighting style to use.

She closed her eyes and punched Yoroi in the face. Dead on was the point. The older male flew back on his back with a thud. Now he was in three kinds of pain.

Private pain. A broken nose and a cracked skull from the fact he flew backwards too quickly.

A low groan echoed out as Hayate stood over the male. Seeing no response come from the genin. Mina was given the win.

The screen beeped and Naruto blinked and glanced to Lee who gulped.

Dosu

Vs.

Sai.

'Then that would mean...' Naruto and Hinata turned to where Lee was looking. 'Neji!'

"I'll pass where they've failed." Dosu muttered as he made his way down.

"Ok! This time! I'll take the win!"

"Easy up now Sai..." Naruto glanced to the jonin. The male looked like Kakashi in style. But had a black jonin jacket. He had loose red hair like Sai. And wore a mask. The male had silver eyes. He wore a long white scarf rapped round the neck with the two ends hanging down his back. And two katana's resting on his back! Naruto wondered if he's got time to teach him later.

"You'll need to be careful. If he's like his teammates. You will need to get passed his sound attacks."

"Yeah, yeah... Don't sorry Ryuunosuke sensei!" Sai spoke making his way down.

Naruto crossed his arms. 'Let's see what this Sai, is like?'

Sai stared at Dosu who returned his gaze. Hayate stood between them. "Begin!"

Sai jumped back some distance. 'I have to be careful... He's deadly when he's close... But I should be safer at a long distance. This will keep me from too much damage.' Sai reached for his blade on his back as his left went for his pouch. 'I need time to prepare... Let's see what you've got Dosu.'

"Don't think that you'll stay out of my range for too long." Dosu stated.

"So there is a distance." 'He's bluffing... Sound has no distance. Don't fool me.'

'My bluff seems to have failed... No matter.' Dosu rushed forward and Sai drew his blade and threw it as he pulled a scroll out.

Dosu blinked and deflected the blade with his arm. Sai rolled the scroll out and he pushed a seal. He looked at Dosu and the male swung. Sai smirked as he became an illusion. The fist swinging right through him.

'What?' Dosu's right ear twitched at a faint noise and jumped to the side as Sai attacked with his blade. "Too..." Dosu spoke as he swung his left fist. "Slow!" Sai jumped back.

'Damn... He's got good hearing. I was hoping the quickly illusion would work longer.'

'Damn...' Ryuunosuke mused. 'He got everything right... The sword and scroll I made as a quick means to fool a foe. The second Sai pressed the seal. His body would be summoned at the sword. And an illusion would appear. Guess he'll need to use another tactic...'

Sai crouched as he felt the sound wave's affect. 'I was stupid to attack so close. I didn't move fast enough.'

'Now to get him while he's down.' Dosu rushed forward. His left fist back. Sai tried to stand but found his body was unfocused with his surroundings. Sai looked up. "Take, that!" Dosu yelled as he punched Sai. His punch hit thin air as the blade clattered to the floor. "What?"

'Who said that he couldn't make a return trip?' Ryuunosuke smirked as Sai rolled his scroll up and pulled out another as Dosu quickly turned to the body.

'Come on...' Sai rolled out another and pulled a brush out from a compartment in the scroll. Dosu attacked.

'Come on...' Sai drew a snake. 'Now! Ninpo:' Sai formed a seal as Dosu flew air born at him.

"Got you!"

"Choujuu Giga!" Instantly the drawing glowed and shot up into the air. It's rapped round Dosu before the male had time register the attack. 'Got him...'

"Ink?" Dosu muttered as the snake tightened... 'Water is a weak form of attack... Even against sound.' Dosu tapped his arm against the floor and a ringing noise echoed over the snake and Dosu. The snake shuddered and exploded. Dosu stood and scowled. How he hated being hit by his own sound. 'I'll get the brat.'

But Sai was busy with his next attack. "Ninpo: Choujuu Giga!" Instantly large drawn tiger's rushed forward in front of Dosu. The boy was hidden behind the three.

'That, won't work!' Dosu swung his arm and the tigers exploded.

"Ha!" Sai roared as he appeared through his ink. His blade connected with Dosu's arm. "Shit..."

"To cocky body..." The sound ninja chuckled as he released a sound wave at the boy. "I can control my sound's direction... This next one should fuck with your balance..." Sai flinched and shuddered. He exploded in ink. "What..." Dosu froze a blade rested at his neck. Sai behind his right, Sai's blade was rested upside down in his left hand. The blade facing the neck.

"I win..." Dosu glanced to the blade. He moved a small bit and found himself held tight. A hiss echoed by his ear as the snake held his left side. Its fangs ready to bite.

"I told you..." Sai spoke with confidence. "I win..."

"Damn..." Dosu muttered.

Hayate nods to himself. Sai had Dosu at blade point. It was either death or forfeit. "I call the match here. Dosu is in danger of death and I call Sai the winner."

The snake let go and the blade lowered. Dosu rubbed his hand. "A clone in the blind spot... I should have been more careful..." Dosu muttered walking off.

Sai smirked as he sheathed his blade and walked over to his scroll. He then made his way up to the balcony.

"Man... He was difficult..." Sai stretched out.

"Good to see you're training has not been wasted Sai... Let's see how you do now Neji... Save the best for last and all..." Ryuunosuke said with a small chuckle as he patted Neji on the head.

"Neji's hand swatted the hand away. This man was the only one who did that to him. Not even threatening death if he did that to Neji. Seemed to stop him. Neji made his way down.

Naruto, who stood behind Hinata watched as Lee was about to burst. The boy was getting really worked up. The excitement might actually kill the taijutsu genin.

"Calm down Lee..." Naruto spoke up. "You're head will explode with all that blood there."

"But Naruto-kun! I finally get t prove myself against the best rookie of my year! I can't help but be excited!" Lee roared.

"That's the stuff Lee!" Gai spoke up. "Make this three for three for the win!" Lee salutes Gai.

"Yosh!" With that he jumped down.

'And so I finally get to prove myself...' Lee said with a smirk. 'Against the best. I wonder how much you've improved Neji.' (22:16/ 16/09/09 20:12)

Neji calmed and got into stance. "Rock Lee... No matter how much you've improved... You are fated to lose." Neji spoke out. Lee smirked more.

"I shall prove to you Neji-san... That hard work will overcome any gifted genius..."

Neji scoffed. "What false hopes."

Hayate glanced between the two. "Begin!"

Lee crouched and rushed forward. Neji smirked and leaned to the left of Lee's right fist. He then thrust a palm forward and a burst of chakra knocked Lee back. Lee skidded back and looked up with a smirk. 'He's as I want... No time wasting. Now, I can put my all in this...'

Neji watched as Lee vanished in a flicker of speed. The second he did Neji jumped up and flipped. His bloodline sparked to life and he scanned the battle field.

"Neji! Behind you baka!" Sai roared as Neji turned to see Lee behind him. His left fist back. Neji pulled forward as Lee punched over his head. But Lee quickly connected with his right knee and hit the Hyuuga in the chest. He then kicked up with his left, knocking Neji skyward as Lee dropped down. Neji grunted and flipped onto the ceiling. His chakra holding him in place.

'He's faster than I anticipated... No matter. I'll be prepared next time.' Lee smirked as Neji jumped down with a flip.

'Neji's not going to let that happen twice... Heh.' Lee Crouched. Neji tensed as Lee ran forward and jumped.

"Konoha... Senpuu!" Lee roared as he swung with a right kick. Neji jumped back out of range and then jumped forward with his right arm back. Lee deflected the palm out to the side and jabbed a right elbow into Neji's chest. Lee then backward kicked Neji in the chin and landed on his feet.

'How...' Neji mused as he stumbled back.

'Am I so fast to react to Neji's movements?' Lee asked himself. He could never read Neji's moves back when they were students... Had training with Naruto and Gai really made that much of a difference?

Unknown to Lee... Or maybe he did have some idea. Fighting with a high speed fighter like Naruto has given his sight more depth into reading attacks. He can see an attack far more clearly from is fighting with the blond than an Uchiha could match.

His eyes had been honed and it was only now, fighting someone like Neji who's hands were swift. That Lee could now see the fruits of his training.

Neji scowled. 'I've got no choice...' "You maybe be fast... But...'

Ryuunosuke watched with a calm look. 'He's going to use it... The move he came up with during the last year after he lost at the last exam...' He closed his eyes. 'Let's see the efforts of your training Neji...'

"Hyuugaryuu:" Neji spoke as he brought his right arm back and left arm down and front. Hinata gasped.

"What?" Naruto asked.

"Hakke Rokujuuyonshou... A head branch technique..."

Neji rushed forward. "Nishou!" Lee countered with his hands. Neji scowled. "Yonshou!" Lee's eyes flicked left and right as his own hands met Neji's.

"Hachishou! Juurokushou! Sanjuurokushou! Rokujuuyonshou!" Lee and Neji skidded back and Neji panted as he looked to his hands. Then to Lee.

Lee looked at his hands and could only blink. He never knew he could move so fast.

'Lee's got some hidden talent.' Naruto mussed with a smile. 'All that fighting has paid off. He can read near impossible movements. Lee then looked up and smiled as he got into stance again.

'I can see his moves... I can win this... Now!' Lee rushed forward. Neji scowled and rushed forward.

"Jyuuken!" Lee ducked down low, passed Neji's palm. 'No!'

"Argh!" Lee's fist dug in and Neji's eyes widen and he's thrown back by the force.

Neji impacted the wall with a thundering crash. Lee took three breaths as he straightened up. His stance ready for Neji's attack.

The smoke cleared showing Neji's leg first. Then the rest of Neji. Crumpled against the wall. Hayate watched for several moments before nodding.

"Neji Hyuuga is unconscious... The winner of this fight is Rock Lee."

"Yatta! Go Lee!" Naruto roared over the top. Gai gave Lee a thumb up as Lee celebrated in his own way.

Hinata watched slowly as Neji was carried off. She'd go see him soon. But now it was time for the selection.

Naruto semi listened to the 3rds speech. All he knew was that they had a month to prepare for their fights. Now it was time to decide who was fighting who.

Kikan Kazehana was 1, Sai was 2. They would be fighting first.

Next was Hinata Hyuuga with 3. Mina Mikon was 4.

Then it was Shikamaru at five, with Temari on six.

Shino was seven facing number eight, who was Kankuro.

These were in a separate block. Were the winner from their groups would go up to the person in the finals.

The other group. Was.

Naruto Uzumaki with nine. His foe was Lee with ten.

Whoever won would go right into the next fight with Garra at eleven. After that the winner would wait for rounds 7, 8 and 9 before they would fight the winner from that.

As the Hokage gave them his final words. The genin were shown out to the fencing. Naruto and Lee faced each other.

"See you in a month..." Both gave a quick hand shake and took off. Hinata sighed as she watches them leave. She then smiled to Mina who was in an upbeat mood from her fight.

"G-good luck Mina-san..."

"Good luck Hinata." Mina followed beside Kurenai. Hinata sighed and walked to her first point of call. Neji.

Kikan smirked as he was going to make it to the finals. Naruto would be there for sure. He was going to win all three fights! 'Here I come Uzumaki.'

Sai didn't really have any thoughts of how he would prepare. But it seemed he was going to be doing something as Ryuunosuke called him over.

As each genin left for their upcoming round. No one but few knew of what was to come at the chunin exam finals. (22:11/ 17/09/09 20:15)

Naruto sighed as he walked the streets. He had really no idea what to do? He really had no worries to his match coming up. He was going to love fighting hand to hand combat with Lee... This was a month to improve on his other skills.

"Uzumaki-san." Naruto stopped and looked up as Sai dropped down with a crouch. "Sorry for bothering you Naruto. But Ryuunosuke-sensei has requested you join him with me for training."

"Ugh... Not that's a nice thing for your sensei to offer... But we're in the final exam."

"True... But both Gai-sensei and Ryuunosuke-sensei agree that our chances of meeting at the end are slim. But Gai wants you to learn some moves from someone who taught me to use a sword. You can use three types correct?"

"While I don't mind the idea. I didn't expect Gai to say what I used three kinds of swords... It's not nice to have a sensei reveal things about his student."

"My apologies... But Gai-sensei and Ryunosuke-sensei were teammates... They often compare finer points about their students in competition with each other. Unlike how Gai acts to Kakashi-sensei."

Naruto sighed and nods. No point moaning... As long as he doesn't say about the truly important secrets. Naruto looked to Sai. "Let's go then." Sai nods and they take off.

They enter an open field. Ryuunosuke was standing there setting up attack targets. He glanced up to the pair. "Good to see your here... Now, shall we get started on what I'll be teaching you two?"

Elsewhere...

Hizuren sighed as he looked over the document before him. It took a few months, but they finally found out something.

"I see you've finally got what you wanted sensei..." Hiruzen looked up to see one of the only pupils left that still entered konoha.

"Jiraiya-kun... It's good to see you."

"Same to you old man... What's it say?" Jiraiya asked pointing at the sheet of paper.

"Well... A few months ago. Naruto Uzumaki and Rock Lee. Two second year genin almost. Defeated several chunin and captured Mizuki, who was taking the scroll of secrets.

"I thought I heard something like that? I thought it was just a break in communications."

"Seems even you do not trust your sources."

"This was heard on the fly. It wasn't fully checked into... But I guess it was true I see. But continue..."

"Well, we had the ninja integrated. They all connect to one man and one village. Orochimaru is the leader of the sound village."

"And you've only got this now?"

"Yes... If I knew, I may have gone more into the team's profiles."

"Why would he send a team anyway, if he knew his ninja were caught?"

"I'm not sure... He may not have known. Believing they took their live before they gave Intel on their village."

"What did you get out of them?"

"Sadly not much but that... There had been future plans that would be mentioned when they returned. Once they gathered Mizuki and the scroll. We're preparing with Orochimaru's strike on Uchiha Sasuke with the curse mark. He was also mentioned to have encountered Naruto. But the boy escaped and recovered."

"He was injured." Hiruzen nods.

"Just merely a snake bite... But he got away and recovered."

"I guess that's good. Anything you need me to do?"

"Care to offer me some sneak peeks into your latest novel."

"No..."

"Then could you look into your info and see what you can find about the movements of the hidden sound?"

"On it... Now, I need to know something. Where can I find the lad, Naruto Uzumaki."

"That you will have to deal with his sensei Gai Maito... Sadly the jonin has taken his student Lee off on a secret training session. You will have to find him yourself."

"You could have just said that... Instead of that long explanation."

"I'm just answering your future questions... Now I must get back to work..." Jiraiya nods and takes off out the window.

"I wonder..." Jiraiya mussed as he landed outside the building. "Where the 4th hokages legacy is?"

Naruto sneezed as he stood facing the training dummy.

Ryuunosuke was far better than he thought! Ryuunosuke was a master of both the Ittoryu and also a master of the Nitoryu! Gai really had a strong teammate!

Ryuunosuke was an anbu captain before he took on a team alongside Gai. And was teaching Sai the basic of the ittoryu style.

Naruto was told that the nitoryu will be used by both his wikizashi and kodachi. He would use his katana for the ittoryu.

This is why Naruto was stood facing the training stumps. His katana in hand.

This made Naruto excited. He only knew attack patterns. But techniques are a new thing for him.

If Naruto wanted to improve this month. He got it alright!

Naruto's seal for his Katana was sealed on his right shoulder. His Kodachi on his left waist and his Wikizashi on his right. Naruto had designed the seals to attach the sheath to his arm and seal it away on a whim. As not to slow his strike down. But now he needed the sheath for this technique.

"The Itto-Ryu Iai: Shishi Sonson. The one sword style draws and re-sheath technique: Lino song." Naruto tensed and grasped his blade with his left over his back and in an instant had passed the dummy and skidded to a stop. His blade was resting passed his sheath. The dummy shattered and Naruto sighed.

"That was impressive." Ryuunosuke spoke. "Gai was right about your skills... To get that so close on your first shot. Just need to slow down right now in sheathing that katana. You don't want to hurt yourself. Look at Sai..."

Naruto watched as Sai was performing slow slash set ups. Getting a fine slash and then sheathing his blade.

"You did basic slash, stab and quick draw practice right?" Naruto nods.

"Then follow that form of training again... Don't be so rushed to learn as fast as you can. Sword arts are a fine art. They can't be learned quickly like taijutsu. Swords require time and effort. They don't like to be just worked with no results... They work beside you and with you. Not just to be there when you need them. This is why the best fail to grasp a swords art. If you don't understand your blade. They'll work against you."

"Th-thank you..." 'Man... This guy's deep into his style... I don't think even Goku-oji-san. Would be this deep in anything but his fighting. I best take his words seriously.'

Naruto nods and gets back into practice. He then sheathed his blade and with a quick draw then sheath back.

This is how Naruto continued his day. And as the day's go, he was going to learn more in both one sword style and two sword style.

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Ok! Time set of finish that chapter is! (21:21) I did this to show an average time I get to work on my story.

This way I can show it doesn't even take me a day to get it done. Just the time I have is shit.

Now to explain something. This piece I got from research department when I questioned imagination department.

Lee's gifted speed strikes over Neji. It was stated that if someone like Lee, trained with a speed fighter like Naruto. It would be obvious that Lee would begin to see foes movements at an incredible speed.

That did make sense. Lee has been fighting with a dbz Naruto. So it was possible, Lee would gain his skill without realising it. And what's better is it's better than a sharingan. Lee's can see the movements clear as day. While Uchiha have to follow chakra to see anything.

Learning from two taijutsu users. Has given Lee a powerful gift.

Next Neji. With this new Neji. Background stated that with his fail at the last year's chunin exam. Neji would have accelerated where he didn't because he didn't to the exam. So to come up with the kaiten (Still not shown yet.) And hakke rokujuuyonshou. It's possible he would have done these ready for the next time he fights a strong foe.

Next to explain Mina. She is the oc from Mattmathews. The one who made the naruhina manga on deviant art. (Which is really good.) Mina is paired with Kiba. (Who she'll be paired with on here later on.)

I've been checking with Matt over these days up till now. To see how he thought Mina was on here. He even gave me some helpful insight where she's escaping Yoroi. Between when he yells at her for running around. Till She gets caught. He made the small bit for me. And I hope to make it useful reminder to look back on. Excuse me, just need to put that in. (21:31) Just adding the bit in. (21:33) There... I've just to improve on Mina.

Now... I'm not sure any of you know what Mina looks like at her current age? I doubt I've explained it and I know only me and a few who read matts work will. So I'll post a link to her flash back at her chunin exam on my fanfic page. And link in the box on my deviant chapter for people.

Let's see... What else have I missed out? Oh yeah!

Sai is the next thing I'll explain. Remember, I said he would be a more normal child. And I've gifted him a few skills by Ryuunosuke. The kenjutsu/ fuuinjutsu specialist.

No, he didn't do a Minato move. Just a simple process of illusions and seals. Minato's is far more advanced. Not even Ryuunosuke can match that.

Next I'll move onto Ryuunosuke.

The ittoryu and the nitoryu. If no one's truly figured that. It's taken from one piece. Zoro.

I thought... This would be a good idea. Naruto could use some specific sword techniques. And one pieces Zoro had it! That's all there.

I hope others liked how this has gone. I've enjoyed it. Now to other notes. If people review after I've finished a chapter. You will have to wait till next time for an answer.

Sammy-chan. At the current point. I have no true ideas for many of the pairings. But by the sequel. You can all start asking who you want with who. And I'll tell you if you can or not.

Now to one final notice. This is for people who ask me the question about ssj Lee?

No... Won't do... And cannot do... I have seen the future plans of the story from my planning team. They have no future for a super saiyan Lee. Everything important is set in mushy brain tissue. And that's that.

I will, however offer this. A what if series? This won't be done by me...

I will let you, if you wish. Do a scenario from chapters you've read at this current time. And make a branch from it. It can be as long as you want it. And if you wish, send it to me and it will go in the Naruto's path filler chapters under, what if.

It can go however you like it. Like say, Gato killed Naruto in his mind crushing move. Lee snapped and bam! Super saiyan.

You don't have to worry about spelling. Send it to me and I'll top it up. Please note, if someone does one better, I may or may not replace what's there.

That's all I can really say now. Now to finish with these final notes.

(Finished chapter: 21:48)

(Posted on deviant art 21:51)

(Fanfiction post 18/09/09 18:06)