This is an add on to the last chapter. I felt kinda bad leaving it there.
Thank you for all the reviews. Someone pointed out a mistake I made was that I used god instead of Valar. My apologies.
And my head hurts, throw books at me. Shakes fist at the heavens I can't help it that I like ending chapters with cliff-hangers.
As for making the chapter longer, I try I really do but I often run out of ideas. I will try my hardest. Enjoy.
Can't Be True
"He can't be, he just can't be." Said Aragorn as he rocked back and forth, Legolas still laid at his feet.
"Aragorn," said Boromir as he went to place a comforting hand on Aragorn's shoulder.
"No, he's not. He can't be." Said Aragorn as he went to Legolas' side once more.
Aragorn thumped on Legolas' chest, desperate to start his friends heart.
"Aragorn what are you doing?" asked Boromir as he tried to grab the ranger's arm.
"He can't leave me. I won't let him." The ranger replied as he continued his action.
"Aragorn he's gone." Said Gimli as he stepped closer to the man.
"No," Aragorn sobbed as he continued to thump Legolas' chest.
Thump
Thump
Thump
Legolas gasped as aid entered his starved lungs, but he did not wake. His breaths came in short gasps.
"Legolas," said Aragorn as he hugged his friend close.
Aragorn hurried through the forest, desperate to make it to Lorien. He knew that lady Galadriel would be Legolas' only hope.
"By the Valar, let him make it." Said Aragorn under his breath as he continued to run through the woods.
"HALDIR," he shouted at the top of his lungs.
He didn't have a chance to shout again as a muscular elf appeared before them.
"Your bring great evil here." Said the elf as he glared at Frodo.
"Haldir please, we need your help."
Haldir finally looked at Aragorn, his eyes widened with shock as he saw Legolas in the ranger's arms. Legolas' tunic was now dark with blood and face was pallid.
"Legolas," he said quietly as he rushed to his old friend's side.
"What happened?"
"He was hurt on the mountain but I did not think much of it. It's my fault. We were in the mines, there was a fight. He was wounded…"
"Saving me." Frodo finished.
Haldir placed a loving hand on Legolas' forehead.
"He's burning up." Pronounced Haldir as he took Legolas from Aragorn, much to the ranger's distaste.
"You stay here." He said, "You may go no further."
Haldir then turned and left, Legolas in his strong arms.
Aragorn watched after them. Hoping that this would not be the last time he saw his good friend.
"He's going to be ok." Said Gimli as he walked to Aragorn's side "He's a strong lad."
"I hope you're right Gimli. I hope you're right." Replied Aragorn.
"What happened?" said one of the healers as he looked at the prince's wounds.
"A fight in Moria. I fear the blade was poisoned." Replied Haldir.
"If it was then we can do nothing."
"Yes you can." Said Haldir "You can keep him alive till I bring Galadriel here."
"Yes sir." Replied the healer as he watched Haldir leave.
His attention then returned to the prince that lay before him.
"Please don't die on us my lord." Said the elf as he placed a cool cloth on the elf's burning skin.
There was a review that I received for the first chapter that worried me. Sorry if my righting lacks imagination.
Thanks for all the great reviews though. Greatly appreciated. Not so much of a cliffie this time XD. Please leave me a review and tell me what you think. hehehe
