Well, I have had some reviews telling me to make the chapter longer, so I will add more detail to them, and MAYBE another POV. Ooh!.......guess what?.............I got to take my earring out today!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I recently got them pierced. I tell you, that was definitely the longest six weeks of my life.
Well, I'm not sure if I should continue this story, because I don't think I write that well for my age (age is on profile) so if you don't want me to discontinue it, please review saying you don't want me too. I don't want to discontinue it if you don't want me too.
Disclaimer: I don't own anything…….but hey, I girl can dream.
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Shane's POV (7 years later (Mitchie is 14, Shane is 15))
The music business is……fine……… I guess.
Okay, I lied. It sucks to not have Mitchie here.
When I was adopted by the grays, I met my best friends, Nate and Jason.
Two years later, we formed a band. The next year, we got a record label to sign us. And here we are now, the biggest pop band in the world.
I always told Mitchie that WE would form a band, and WE would get famous together. Mitchie was always talking about how she would make it big. BUT NO! I become famous, and I formed a band.
Ugh, where is my LATTE?!?!
Here comes the guy with my Latte now.
"It's about time you got here." I spat.
"Uh….sorry sir."
"AHH! YOU IDIOT, I WANTED A SOY NON-FAT VENTI CHIA!
NOT THIS WHATEVER-YOU-CALL-IT!!!!"
I threw the cup on the ground and stormed off to my trailer.
Stupid Messed up Latte guy; I thought when I reached my trailer.
You know what; I don't care if I'm mean. When we were young, I was never mean, cause Mitchie would freak out. But I no longer have a Mitchie, so who cares. Not me.
That's the whole reason I do have a bad attitude, because me and Mitch were split up. THE ONLY REASON!
Stupid no daughter wanting gray family.
I hate you!!!!!!!
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Mitchie's POV
Last year I heard about Shane becoming famous. Well at least he got his wish to become famous, while I'm stuck here in this rat hole.
I went downstairs to eat breakfast and watch hot tunes to see if Shane was on.
I reached for the remote controller, but couldn't find it.
I looked on the counter. Nope.
I looked on the floor. Nope.
I looked EVERYWHERE!
But then I realized I was sitting on it. Stupid me.
I turned on the TV and put it on hot tunes.
"Good morning America, I'm Lisa Chong, your reporter. Today where going live on the set of Connect 3's new music video, where the lead singer, Shane Gray, was reported to have flipped out when someone messed up his Latte.
We believe tha-"I turned it off not wanting to hear anymore of that.
Why is Shane so mean?? He was never mean when we were kids. Never.
Maybe he has changed?? No it can't be……can it?
I needed to think about this, so I went to our tree.
Why is he so mean?
I wonder if maybe if he wouldn't have been adopted, he wouldn't be mean.
Yeah, cause he is never mean around me.
But why did he have to be adopted in the first place?
Why? Why?? Why?!?!?!
It's not fair!! He gets a family and I don't!! Why? Why?? WHY???!?!?!?!
Why did they have to split us up?!?!?!?!?!?!?
Why??
I hate the gray family!! I hate them! I hate them! I hate them!!!!!!!
By now I was crying way too hard to stop.
I opened my eyes, and saw that it was dark.
Crap! I fell asleep!!
I ran as fast as I could to the orphanage, but when I got there, the door was looked.
Crap!!!
Well, at least it's warm out here.
I trudged back to our tree and laid down once more, and fell asleep.
When I woke up, the sun was shining.
I walked back toward the orphanage, and went inside to have breakfast.
"MITCHIE!! THERE YOU ARE! WHERE WERE YOU? WHERE YOU HURT? WHY DIDN'T YOU COME INSIDE LAST NIGHT? I WAS SO WORRIED!!"
"I fell asleep outside." I whispered into her ear.
"Well…okay…..just don't do it again. Okay?"
I nodded, and went to fix myself some breakfast.
I fixed myself some eggs, and sat down at the table and turned on hot tunes. Again.
"We have a confirmation from Shane Gray that the reason for his bad boy attitude is that when he was young, he was split up from his best friend."-I dropped my fork.-"there you have it America, he's mean cause he lost his friend."
I'm causing Shane's attitude?
Me?
He's
a jerk, cause he misses me?
He misses me??????
Well, duh. I miss him, so I guess he would miss me too.
But he should be enjoying life, shouldn't he??
I picked up my necklace, looked at it and said, "I miss you too Shane."
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It is a little longer, I think. Well? What do you think?????
Rocks or sucks?? Please review!!
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