Chapter 5.
Max idea!
Okay guys I'm really sorry I don't update as much. But I'm really trying between my two jobs. I also hope that you guys like my story so far. I will also say that I keep on updating when it's possible. Every night when I'm home and in bed I'm bizzy writing a piece of the chapter. So I have chapter 5 ready so here it go's I hope you guys like it.
It was silence on the phone. Max was really shocked to hear that name. He always liked Loren. She was a really sweet girl. Why she is in a mental hospital was he thinking. What was happened in that year they didn't hear anything from her. Max thoughts were interrupted by Eddie.
Eddie: dad are you still there?
Max: yes I am still here. It's just a really big shock to hear her name again. I never thought I would hear it again.
Eddie: it was for me to a big shock. It was not a shock to see her again but it was a shock to see her here in a mental hospital.
Max: I can understand that but why is she there?
Eddie: I don't know I haven't asked her that.
Max: well I know that we have to get her out of there. She is a really sweet girl she doesn't belong in there.
Eddie: I know dad but what do we have to do to get her out of here. I don't have any ideas.
Max: leave that to me. When I know what to do about it I will call you. So I will talk to you later I have to get that girl out of there. Love you son. Bye.
Eddie: okay. Love you to dad. I hope it will work to get her out of there. Bye talk to you soon.
With that Eddie hung up the phone. He was wondering with what kind of plan his dad was coming to get Loren out of the mental hospital. Max already knew what he was going to do to get Loren out of there. But she needed to wait till everything was ready and settled.
The next day.
Loren was laying on her bed. She really didn't want to get out of it. Mel was looking at Loren. She was wondering why she didn't get up and started to get ready so they could get some breakfast. Loren felt Mel staring at her. She looked over to her and said something.
Loren: Mel what are you looking at?
Mel: I'm looking at you. I was thinking why you don't start to get ready so we can go eat some breakfast.
Loren: I don't feel like getting out of bed. That's why I don't start to get ready.
Mel: okay than I will get you something to eat when I get back.
Loren: thanks. Don't you need to go Ian is probably waiting for you?
Mel: (laughing) well I look like someone wants me gone.
Loren: no that's not it. I just don't want you to let Ian wait any longer.
Mel: okay I will see you when I get back.
Loren: okay have fun.
With that Mel walked out of the room leaving Loren all alone. Loren loved it to be alone. She missed her own room. There she could always be alone whenever she wants to be. While Mel was walking to the room where breakfast was ready she was wondering why Loren didn't want to come out bed. Was something wrong? Did something happen? She was thinking to herself. When she walked in the room she saw Ian sitting and waiting for her. Mel smiled and got something to eat and went sitting next to Ian and gave him a kiss on the cheek.
Eddie got out of the shower and started to get dresses. He was thinking of Loren while getting dressed. When he was ready he went to the room were Mel and Ian were sitting. He looked around and was wondering were Loren was. He walked over to Ian and Mel. Mel saw that Eddie was looking were Loren was.
Eddie: hi guys.
Ian/ Mel: hi Eddie.
Eddie: Mel do you know where Loren is?
Mel: yeah she is in our room. She didn't feel like getting out of bed this morning.
Eddie: okay I will go get something to eat over there.
Ian: okay mate.
Eddie walked away to get something to eat. He was wondering why Loren didn't feel like getting out of bed. Was something wrong? He took some food and walked back over to Mel and Ian.
Eddie: I think when I'm done eating I will go check on Loren and how she is doing.
Mel: sure. Maybe you get take something to eat with you for her.
Ian: yeah she really needs something to eat.
Eddie: sure I will do that. Mel do you think something is wrong with Loren?
Mel: sorry Eddie I don't know.
Ian: maybe you can find out if something is wrong with her. Maybe she will tell you.
Eddie: I will do that. I want to know if something is wrong or bothering her.
Eddie was ready with his breakfast. He talked some more with Ian and Mel. When he really wanted to see Loren he said bye to them. Eddie was hoping that nothing was wrong or bothering Loren. Mel and Ian were looking over to Eddie while he was walking out of the room. Mel was hoping that Eddie could find out why Loren didn't want to come with her to get breakfast. Eddie walked over to Loren's room. He stopped for a second and thought that maybe Loren didn't want to see him and that that's the reason that she stayed in her room.
Max just bought a really big house next to the MK club. The house had a pool in the backyard. It had four bedrooms and four bathrooms. The living room was the biggest room in the house and it had a huge kitchen. Max needed a picture of Loren's bedroom at her house so he called Eddie to ask if he could get one.
Max: hi son.
Eddie: hi dad. What is going on?
Max: well I was wondering if you could get me a picture of Loren's bedroom if her room at home.
Eddie: why do you need that picture?
Max: no reason. Just look if you can get me that picture.
Eddie: okay sure. I'm on my way to Loren anyway. So I will ask her when I get there.
Max: okay I will hear from you when you get it.
Eddie: sure pops talk to you later. Bye.
Max: bye.
Max hung up the phone. He could get started on the other three rooms of the house. And the biggest bedroom needed to wait till he got the picture. Max went over to the store and got everything for three bedrooms and everything for the living room and the kitchen. He also went over to a store to get everything he needed for the backyard.
Eddie walked further to Loren's room. Now he had a reason to go to Loren. He only was thinking why his dad needed a picture of Loren's bedroom. When he came to Loren's room he stopped because he heard someone singing.
Loren singing:
Falling like the stars,
I'm falling fast and hard
For something out of reach
I could be there
But you wouldn't see me
Hover in the air,
Like I'm just a daydream
Oh
Why does is feels so far.
Close enough to touch
But, you're looking through me
In the same room a smile a away
Feels miles from where you are
Might as well be mars.
It was beautyful Eddie thought. When she stopped singing Eddie knocked on the door. Loren jumped on her bed when she heard a knock on the door. When she could breathe normally again she told the person to come in. Eddie walked in the room.
Loren: oh hi Eddie.
Eddie: hi Loren.
Loren: what are you doing here I thought you were here to see Ian but you are the most of the time here with me?
Eddie: I am. I had breakfast with Ian and Mel. But you weren't there. So I was wondering what was going on with you.
Loren: thanks Eddie but I'm just fine.
Eddie: okay. But that song you were singing did you write that?
Loren: ow did you hear that. Yes I wrote that.
Eddie: yes I heard that. I thought it was amazing.
Loren: thanks Eddie that means a lot coming from you.
Eddie: you're welcome. I have a question actually it's one of my dad's.
Loren: okay what is it?
Eddie: well my dad wants a picture of your room at home. But don't ask me why because o really doesn't know.
Loren: okay sure they are on my FB.
Loren wrote down the link of her FB and gave it to Eddie. When Eddie got it he texted it to his dad
Hi dad.
This is the link to Loren's FB.
The link.
Here on are the picture of her room.
Love Eddie.
Loren was wondering why Max needed a picture of her room. There is really no reason why he has to need it for anything.
Max got the text that Eddie had sent him. He walked over to his laptop and got to Loren's FB. When he found the photo's he sent a text back to Eddie.
Hi son.
I found it thanks.
You will soon find out why I needed it.
Love dad.
Max put his phone down and went back to his laptop and printed the pictures out. He walked down stairs over to Grace.
Grace hi Max.
Max: hi Grace. I have a question for you.
Grace: okay what will that be?
Max: well I have here some pictures and I was wondering if you could go to some stores to get everything what's on it?
Grace: sure. Give me the pictures and I will get started on it.
Max: thanks here they are.
Grace looked at the pictures and was wondering why Max needed everything for a teenage bedroom. She looked at Max and he only smiled at her. Max wrote down the address from the house next to MK and told Grace that everything needed to get over there.
Next day.
Aid was waiting for Cameron. She got a call from him and he said that he needed to talk with her and that is was important. Aid was wondering what was wrong with him. She knew that Loren is his girlfriend. Maybe because of that he needed to talk to her. There was a knock on the door. Aid went over and opens it to see Cameron standing there.
Aid: hi Cam.
Cam: hi Aid. Thanks for letting me come over.
Aid: no problem you are a friend. Come on in.
Cam walked inside and went sitting on the couch.
Aid: so what is going on that you needed to talk to me about?
Cam: Loren broke up with me over the phone.
Aid: I think that she thinks it's better for you because she will be gone for a really long time.
Cam: yeah I know that she will be gone for a really long time. She told me that over the phone.
Aid: so what's the problem then?
Cam told Aid that he didn't want for Loren to break up with him. He would have waited for her till she was back home. Aid understood what Cam was saying but she also understood why Loren did break up with Cam. It can take years for her to come home. But it can also happen that she will never come home again.
Max was waiting for the stuff for Loren's room to arrive. That was the only thing that needed to be done in the house because the rest was already done. It was going so fast because he had people working in the house almost the whole day. There was a knock on the door. Max went over to open it.
Person: hello I'm looking for Max Duran.
Max: that's me.
Person: okay well I got a lot of stuff in the truck that was ordered.
Max: yes I was waiting for that.
Person: okay well if you will be so kind and sign these papers. We will get everything inside the house.
Max signed the papers while the guys took everything out of the truck and inside the house. When everything was in the house he thanked the guys and closes the door behind him. Max walked over to the people what were working in the house and started to talk to them.
Max: okay guys these things are for the last bedroom. I have here some pictures and I want that everything will look like it looks on the pictures. It needs to be the same way okay.
Person: okay. Give me the pictures and we will get started on that room.
Max: okay here they are.
The person took the pictures from Max and walked over to his people. He was talking to them. He was saying who needed to do what. Max really loved his idea. He has already called to the mental hospital and talked to the boss. They were okay with his idea. When the house is ready he will call them again and tell them that Mel, Ian and Loren could get starting packing and can get over to their new home. Max really hoped that Loren will love his surprise for her.
The next day.
At the mental hospital. The lady on the desk got a call and it was Max. He asked for the boss. The lady told him to wait and that she will get her for him. Max waited for the boss. He was so glad that everything was ready.
Person: hello this is Eveline the boss of this place.
Max: hi Eveline it's Max.
Eveline: oh hi Max what can I do for you?
Max: I'm calling to tell you that the house is done.
Eveline: okay I will get everyone ready to go over to their new house.
Max: okay thanks.
Eveline hung up the phone. One hour later she walked over to Eddie's room. He was still in de guestroom.
Eddie: oh hi.
Eveline: hi Eddie I'm Eveline.
Eddie: okay hi Eveline. What is going on?
Eveline: your dad called and said you needed to come home because something was going on there.
Eddie: okay. I will first go say goodbye to my friends. After that I will get on my way home.
Eveline: okay. Your car is already waiting for you.
Eddie: thanks.
Eddie walked over to Loren's and Mel's room but no one was there. He walked over to Ian's room he was also not in his room. The only place he knew where to look was the dining room. When he got there he saw them not sitting on a table and also he saw them not standing anywhere. He needed to ask Eveline if she knew where they were. Eddie walked over to where Eveline was standing.
Eddie: uhm... Eveline I can't find them do you know where they are?
Eveline: ow I forgot they are out swimming with their group.
Eddie: okay then I will call them when I get home.
Eveline: okay but you really need to go now. Your dad is waiting.
Eddie: okay I will go. Bye.
Eveline: bye.
Eddie got in the car. All his things were already packed and in the car. He hated it that he couldn't say goodbye to his friend. But he hated it the most that he couldn't say goodbye to Loren. Eddie was on his way home not knowing that there was a big surprise waiting on him.
How will Loren react when she sees what Max has done for her? How will Eddie react what his dad's plan was for to get Loren out of the mental hospital. So guys this was chapter 5. This was the longest chapter I wrote for now. Hope you guys liked it. Please review and let me know what you guys think. Or what kinds of idea's you guys have. Love Jessica