Chapter 6.
A surprise and an answer for Eddie.
A little while back when Eveline told Loren, Mel and Ian to pack there things because they were moving in to a new place. Eveline walked in the room of Loren and Mel. They were bizzy with their make-up.
Mel: oh hi Eveline.
Eveline: hi Loren and Mel.
Loren: hi, is something wrong?
Eveline: no nothing is wrong. There are only a few changes that are going to happen and you two need to know.
Mel: okay well can you tell us what it is?
Eveline: well you guys are going to move in to a new home.
Loren: what! Why?
Eveline: well there are coming new people and we don't have enough places here. And you guys are doing great so I thought that it was a great idea to put you two and Ian in to a normal house. I thought it was a good idea because you three are so close friends and I didn't want to pull you guys apart.
Mel: okay I can understand that.
Eveline: so you guys need to pack. You will leave in 30 minutes. Ian is already packing. So I will see you two when you done.
Loren: okay. But what about Eddie can I see goodbye to him?
Eveline: he is already on his way home. I told him that you guys are moving.
Loren: (really sad) okay.
Eveline walked out of the room. She was glad that her fake story worked. Mel and Loren started to pack there things. They were wondering where they were going to stay next. They really hoped that the new place was great.
Back to the time Eddie was on his way to his dad at MK. Loren, Mel and Ian had arrived at the new home that they were going to stay. They got out of the car and looked around. They were surprised that they were back in Hollywood. There walked a lady out of the house. She looked over to them and started to walk over to them.
Lady: hi I'm Tracey. I'm the one that is keeping an eye on you guys while you are staying here.
Loren: hi Tracey nice to meet you. Don't worry we are the good kids. (Loren told while smiling at her)
Tracey: you must be Loren.
Loren: yes that's me and that's Mel and Ian.
Mel/ Ian: hi Tracey.
Tracey: well nice to meet you to. Now do you guys want to come in?
They all walked in together. Tracey showed them around the house. Before she was planning on walking upstairs she first got them to sit down and have something to eat and to drink. After they were done Tracey told them she will take them upstairs to their room so they can start to unpack there things.
Max was sitting in Loren's new room. He was waiting for Loren to walk in. he really wanted to know how Loren will react when she sees her new room that he made for her. He was really hoping that Loren would love this room and that it would gave her the feeling like she was a little home. Loren was standing for her door she was looking at the nametag on the door. When she was ready she opened the door to walk inside. She was so shocked at who she saw when she walked in.
Max: hi Loren and how do you like you're new room?
Loren: (looking at Max) I love it! Did you do this?
Max: yes of course. Why did you think I needed that picture of your own room at home?
Loren: I can't believe you did this for me Max.
Max: I did this for you because you are such a sweet girl and you don't belong in a mental hospital.
Loren: wait you don't know why I was there. But you are the reason why Mel, Ian and I are here? They told us that there were coming new people and that we needed to move because there was no room anymore. But that wasn't the truth wasn't it?
Max: yup you're correct. Hope you don't mind that I did all of that?
Loren: I don't mind at all. I really love what you did for me.
Max: great. Okay but I need to go now. You can get started with unpacking you're things.
Loren: okay. Bye Max.
Max: bye Loren.
Max walked out of Loren's room. Loren was still looking surprised around in her room. Everything was the same as her room at her own home. When she looked at the wall above her bed she saw that even the poster of Eddie was hanging there. Now she was wondering how Eddie was doing, did he know she was staying in Hollywood now. She was thinking to herself.
Eddie finally got to MK. He walked in looking for his dad. He didn't find him at the bar so he walked upstairs to his dad's apartment. He knocked at the door waiting for his dad to say to come in. when he heard someone walking up the stairs behind him he looked around and saw his dad coming upstairs. Max opens the door to his apartment and walked in with Eddie right behind him.
Max: hi son you're finally here.
Eddie: yes I am. So what is going on that you needed me to come home for?
Max: I needed you to come home because I have a big surprise for you.
Eddie: so I only did come home because you have a surprise for me. Dad because of that I didn't get a change to say goodbye to Loren and the rest.
Max: okay I get that. But when you see the surprise I have for you, you will love it. And you will not be mad at me anymore that I did let you come home for that.
Eddie: okay than show me. And dad I'm not mad about it. I'm only sad I didn't get to say goodbye to Loren.
Max: yeah I'm sorry about that. Okay come with me so I can show it to you.
Eddie: okay let's go.
Eddie followed Max. Eddie was wondering why his dad walked him out of MK. What kind of surprise does he have for me Eddie was wondering? Eddie looked at his dad when he stopped for a big house next to MK. he was wondering what they were doing here. Max opens the door with a key. Wait did he let me come all the way home for to show me that he bought a new home Eddie was thinking now. Eddie followed his dad inside the house and walked upstairs right behind him they stopped at a door. Eddie looked up and saw Loren's name on it.
Eddie: dad why is Loren's name on it?
Max: you wanted her out of the mental hospital like it did do this is what I did.
Eddie: yes okay that is what I really want. I don't like it that she is staying at a mental hospital. But dad what has this to do with that?
Max: I wanted to show you something.
Eddie: yes I know dad so what is it?
Eddie started to get impatient.
Max: you will now and see when you go inside of the room.
Eddie: why inside of the room?
Max: just open the door.
Eddie: okay.
Eddie turned back to the door. He was looking at Loren's name on it. He was wondering why his dad was so happy about this. His thoughts were interrupted by his dad saying he needed to open the door. So to keep his dad happy he did like his dad commanded him. When he walked inside he was shocked at what he saw but he was also happy with what he saw.
Mel and Ian were sitting in Mel's room. They were really happy that they were out of the hospital. But they were looking at each other confused. Why were they here in this beautiful house? Mel wanted to say something to Ian but stopped when she heard a knock on the door. Mel told the person at the door to come inside. Mel was shocked at who she saw walking in the room.
Max: hi Ian. And you must be Mel.
Mel: yes the one and only.
Ian: hi max. What are you doing here?
Max: well it's my house. So I wanted to come over and check on Loren and see how she was doing.
Mel: wait your house? So what are we doing here in your house?
Max: well I wanted Loren out of that hospital and you two are her best friends so I did this for her.
Ian: wow you really love that girl.
Max: yes she is like a daughter to me. I had to miss her for over a year. And that is not happening again to me.
Mel: Max does Eddie know that Loren is here?
Max: yes he is with her right now.
Mel: okay. Eddie must be really happy to have her close again. I only think that Loren needs to talk to him more.
Max thought that Mel was right about that. He knew how much Eddie has missed Loren. Max also remembered Eddie saying that he wanted to breakup with Chloe because he had feelings for Loren. But before Eddie could do anything Loren was gone and never said anything back to Eddie.
Eddie walked in to Loren's room he was still shocked to see her sitting on her bed. Loren looked over at Eddie and smiled to him. She was so glad to see him again. Eddie saw that Loren was smiling at him so he smiled back at her. He was so glad that his dad did this for Loren. Eddie walked over to Loren and went sitting next to her on the bed.
Loren: Eddie did you know that your dad did this for me and so if you knew why didn't you say anything?
Eddie: no I didn't know that he was planning this but I'm really glad he did.
Loren: why are you so glad about it?
Eddie: because if have you close again and you didn't belong in that hospital and I wanted to do this for a really long time.
Eddie leaned closer and kissed Loren. Loren pulled away.
Loren: Eddie you can't do this you have a girlfriend.
Eddie: yes I can do that. Chloe and I are over.
Loren: why? You loved her so much.
Eddie: no I didn't really love her that much. I got feelings for you before you left. I was planning on breaking up with Chloe for you. Before you left.
Loren: why did you never said anything to me? I stayed away from you because I have feelings for you.
Eddie: wait you have feelings for me? Or you had feelings for me?
Loren was shocked that she told Eddie that she still has feelings for him. Eddie was so happy that she said that. He was now only hoping that she really meant it. He really likes Loren. Before she left he thought he could spent his whole life with her. Okay what am I going to do about it? My feelings for him they are still there. Am I going to tell the truth to him? Loren was thinking to herself.
A week later.
Eddie and Loren still were only friends. Loren didn't tell Eddie the truth about her feelings for him. Eddie really wanted that Loren told him the truth about her feelings for him. He knew that she liked him because of the way she looked at him. You could see it in her eyes. Mel and Ian were telling Loren the whole week that she needed to tell Eddie the truth about her feelings for him.
Mel: come on lo, you need to tell Eddie how you feel about him.
Loren: I really want to, but when he told me he had feelings for me, he told it like it was in the past.
Mel: he kissed you Lo! That boy loves you!
Eddie had walked in the room without anyone knowing.
Loren: so he kissed me. That doesn't mean that he likes me. So what point does it make that I still have feelings for him. It means nothing Mel.
Eddie: Lo that does really means a lot.
Mel and Loren jumped at the voice of Eddie. Okay now he knows I have still feelings for him. CRAP! Loren thought.
Eddie: Lo why didn't you tell me that when we kissed?
Loren: well I was scared you didn't like me at all. You said that you liked me like it was in the past.
Eddie: I thought it was obvious that I like you when I kissed you?
Mel: see lo I told you he likes you.
Loren: I know. You and Ian have told me the whole week that it was so.
Eddie: wait, Ian does know to about your feelings for me? Why didn't he say anything to me about it?
Loren didn't know what to do or to say to Eddie. Eddie was glad he finally really knew what Loren did feel for him. Loren was wondering how Eddie feels about knowing how she feels about him. She was never planning on letting Eddie know on this way. She was really glad that she didn't need to keep it a secret anymore.
Max was wondering why Ian told Eddie to go over to Mel and Loren's room. He knew there was something going on between all of them. Max looked over at Ian. Ian knew why Max was looking at him. He also knew that he needed to tell Max what was going on. Ian looked over to Max and started talking.
Ian: let me guess you want to know why I did that??
Max: yeah so are you planning on telling me what is going on over here?
Ian: yes I will tell you. You have the right to know.
Max: okay. So go on tell me what it is.
Ian: well Mel and I are trying to let Lo tell Eddie how she feels about him. But she always says she don't want to do that. She thinks that Eddie doesn't feel anything for her. She is also scared to lose Eddie when she will tell him her feelings for him. So I sent Eddie over there because I know Mel is talking to Loren about telling Eddie what she feels for him. And when Eddie walk in the room and he will hear how Loren feels about him. Loren can't get out of it anymore. So that's why I sent Eddie over to their room.
Max: well I hope for you that it will work.
Ian: yeah I hope so too.
Max thought it was clever what Ian did for Eddie and Loren. He knew Eddie wanted to know how Loren really feels about him; because that's the only thing he could talk about the past week. Ian was hoping that his plan was working because it was about time that Eddie knew what Loren feels for him. And it was time that Loren told Eddie even if she is scared to do it.
Nora really wanted to talk to Loren. She hasn't heard from her for more than a week. So she decided to call the hospital. She needed to know how her little girl was doing.
Person: hello how can I help you?
Nora: well I'm looking for my daughter Loren.
Person: sorry if you want to talk to her you going to need to call this number.
The person told Nora the other number. Nora was wondering why she needed to call another number. All the time she calls that number she never needed to call this number what the person just gave her. Nora called the other number.
Tracey: hello with Tracey. How can I help you?
Nora: hello this is Nora. I'm calling for my daughter Loren.
Tracey: okay wait a minute and I will get her for you.
Nora: okay thanks.
Tracey walked over to Loren's room and knocked on the door.
Loren; come on in.
Tracey: hi Loren.
Loren: oh hi Tracey is something wrong?
Tracey: no there is nothing wrong there is only someone on the phone for you.
Loren: okay I will be there in a minute.
Tracey: okay.
Tracey walked out of the room. Loren turned over to Eddie.
Loren: Eddie I will be right back.
Eddie: it's okay. Go look who is calling you.
Loren: okay.
Loren walked out of the room. She saw that Tracey was sitting on the couch with the phone. She walked over to Tracey and got the phone.
Loren: hello.
Nora: hi honey. How is everything going?
Loren: hi mom. Everything is going just fine.
Nora: Lo do you know what is going on? When I called the hospital they told me to call this number. Before I never had to call this number to talk to you.
Loren: didn't they tell you?
Nora: they didn't tell me what?
Loren told her mom everything that has happened the past week. She only didn't tell her what was going on with her and Eddie. She didn't want her mom to worry about that too. Nora was really glad that her little girl was staying closer to home now. They talked for over a half an hour. Loren was glad that her mom was doing okay.
So this was chapter 6. I hope you guys liked it. Please let me know what you guys think about it or if you guys have some ideas for the story. I will be happy to put some of your ideas in to it. I know it have been a while since I updated but I've been very bizzy with my work... so I'm really sorry if it took a little too long.
-xoxox- Jessica
