This is my next chapter and I am so happy for all the reviews so far, I would like to know if you guys think I am putting enough of Luffy's thoughts in or if there needs to be more, or if anything else is missing so please review.
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They watched as the war was happening all around them; it was strange because people would suddenly run through them without warning. They could tell that even though it was a nightmare and that Luffy's body was way past his limits. They didn't know all the details about the war. They knew that it cut multiple years from Luffy's life so that he could continue to fight but, that had made them wonder what would have happened if Luffy had been at his best. They wondered what would have happened if they had been there to help their captain. Suddenly, they all saw a younger version of Zoro run through Sanji "What the hell, why is Zoro here?" They all said aloud.
That's when they noticed that in this dream they were all with Luffy. Meaning they had never been sent away by Kuma in his dream. They watched as they all fought together, alongside Luffy, following close behind him. Along with all the pirates that were already there. They heard Luffy's voice "I have to protect everyone, but I have to save Ace too."
They continued to watch as the battle continued on. They were winning, it was strange, but they wouldn't accept it; because it was a nightmare they weren't supposed to win. They got their hopes up because they were beating the marines. Then suddenly, things took a turn for the worse and Nami watched as her younger self turned to look at Luffy. A blade slid through her chest as Luffy screamed out "Noooooooo Nami" "I'm going to kill that marine."
Luffy was running towards the marine when Zoro ran past slicing the man to multiple pieces, he looked at Luffy "I understand, I'm going."
Luffy turned around and continued to run for the platform where Ace was, Robins hands took out the people in front of him. He continued to run, only looking back at Nami for a second. He saw Chopper checking her over. Zoro and Sanji were running right beside him.
The tide of the battle changed faster than expected and the Whitebeard pirates were beginning to lose hope. Even though the straw-hat pirates were still giving it their all, without their comrades it was a hard battle. They knew that 9 vs. so many was impossible; without the strength of their newly made friends. They continued to run, but it was too much. They were losing now. Luffy was still fighting with all of his might, but it was just too much. Chopper was killed while trying to save Nami; Usopp was next when he tried to get the two of them out of there. Robin was attacked and Zoro got killed trying to save her. Franky and Brook were killed next, then Sanji was surrounded and taken down. Luffy was all that was left; and as he got to the execution platform he screamed as he saw his brothers head drop on to the platform and the blood disappear the last thing he heard Ace say was "Luffy help me, please."
"Accccccccccccccccccccccccccc ccccceeeeeee, Nooooooooooooooooooooooooooo oooooo,"
Nami, Usopp, and Chopper all screamed as the blood went through their bodies. The dream was over as fast as it began, everyone was back in the original room once again, but this time there wasn't another door; it was just white walls. They all looked at each other in pain, Zoro looked to Nami and Robin who both looked really upset "Are you two okay?" he asked.
Robin nodded and Nami smiled "We're fine just shocked us that Luffy thought about things like that, I mean it was going so well until….until I got stabbed, then it all went downhill."
Sanji lit a smoke "Nami-swan~~~ It's not your fault."
Robin stepped forward from beside Nami "Exactly, this is just a nightmare and we knew from the beginning it would end in despair. That's why nightmares are there. They are for your deepest fears and it seems that captain-san's greatest fear is losing all of us."
Nami's smile brightened at the thought of how much Luffy cared for them all. She walked over to Sanji and grabbed his smoke "No smoking in Luffy's head." Then surprisingly, Nami kissed Sanji's cheek "Oh, and thanks for clearing me up."
Then they all heard a loud ding and a fancy pink door appeared. Nami looked at Zoro "We are going in, right?"
Zoro smiled "Yeah, It's not like there's much else that can top what we've seen up until now."
It's a little shorter but I hoped you enjoyed it and I can't wait to here everybody's thoughts so please please review.
