I just fixed up Chapter one and hope you enjoy Chapter Two as a few more of the mane 6 come in. Same as Chapter. 1
Bold with "" is thought while just bold is their dream
Italic is a point of view change.
while Italic underlined is a book and chapter.
Btw any thoughts of a name change of the story? also forgot on Chapter one, I only own Jaytee, Equestria and all it's inhabitants/places are owned by Hasbro and were created by Lauren Faust. The 3DS is nintendo, Ipod is apple inc. and let's not forget Epic mickey two is nintendo and Disney.
Not That Scary
Jaytee's P.O.V
Jaytee waited for Fluttershy to return with her friend feeling so silly for acting like a child, though could you blame him? One second he was hit by a van in the morning street, the next he's in a forest when it had just turned night. Jaytee reached into his pockets to see if the items were damaged and to take inventory of what he had at the moment.
"Okay, Ipod with a crake, but still works, at least I can still listen to music. Cell phone, the sides to keep it open is broken, other then that it seems to work though no reception. And lastly, 3DS, hmm... the case seems to have been cracked, but everything under it is still good. Alright now I just need my bag and-" A low rumble reached his ears as he looked down, the last time he ate was lunch the day before.
"Huh, guess I should talk to Angel." He thought looking for the rabbit who struck him earlier. You would think being hit by a rabbit of Angel's size wouldn't hurt, but those feet have some power with that size.
"Hey Angel, you still in here?" He was answered quickly as said rabbit jumped onto the coffee table.
"Hey, umm... could me make me something to eat?" Jaytee felt crazy asking a rabbit to make him some food, though after seeing some of the dominant species of creatures sanity had left long ago. He looked behind him and saw Angel working in the kitchen.
"Well... Never judge a book by it's cover." Jaytee turned back as he found a quail, ink, and some paper.
"Retro." He said to himself as he took the quail in his right hand and began to draw. Drawing with a quail was harder for him to do then with a pencil though he was happy with the end result, starring up at him was a drawn Angel happily munching on a carrot. The sound of Angel hopping toward him brought a smile to his face as he picked up the picture and looked to the little guy. In his paws were to bowls, one was big filled with a salad of water nuts, green apple slices, sliced carrot and tomato's, the one next to it was a smaller bowl with just apple slices and water nuts in the green lettuce.
Jaytee reach for the bigger bowl only to get his hand slapped by a wooden spoon, Angel pointing a a toe of his front left paw at the small one.
"Oh, sorry." Angel pushed the smaller one towards Jaytee.
"Thank you Angel. Hey, I drew this for you as a token of appreciation." Angel took the picture and looked at it for a bit before he jumped up. Jaytee cringed as he felt Angel's front legs around his neck, it seemed Angel liked his picture and was thanking him.
"Your welcome little guy." Jaytee looked over to the window and thought the cool breeze would be a nice thing to have in the treehouse. Jaytee hopped over to the window and pulled it open, a cyan blur slamming into him harder then the van had. As Jaytee slide on the wood floor he cried out in pain, he looked up to see the blur was in fact another pegasus. It's fur was the light blue he saw zoom at him, thought he also noticed she had a wild rainbow mane and tail. She rubbed her head with her front hoof before opening her her rose red eyes, as they fell on Jaytee's form they soon held complete fear.
"AHH!What the heck are you?" She asked in a frightened voice. She looked around the room and stopped dead center at the blood spot on the couch. Jaytee followed her glance and saw she was looking at his blood.
"Oh crap" He thought looking to the pegasus who was now coming right at him. Within seconds he found himself on the floor of the living room looking up into her rose eyes.
"What have you done to Fluttershy?" She demanded looking at his form, while his left half of his body was in a lot of pain, his right was in tip top condition. Jaytee positioned his right hand somewhere he hoped wouldn't hurt the worried pegasus and pushed up, her face looked shocked as she went a few feet in the air. Jaytee rolled away (it wasn't his smartest idea but he needed to do it) and sat up on the other side of the room. He looked back at his rainbow maned attacker and saw she was not happy at all.
"Where is Fluttershy you monster!" she shouted glaring daggers at him.
"Im not a monster!" he cried out with tears in his eyes...
Twilight's P.O.V
The normally quite forest night was replaced with the thunders sound of the trio galloping to Fluttershy's home, Twilight's mind was split in half.
"This is amazing, a human, an actual human is in Fluttershy's house! I could write so many books about human's from just talking to him. But where did it come from? is it dangerous? How did it even get hurt." Twilight was brought back by a strange bouncing noise, she turned her head to see Pinkie Pie bouncing next to her keeping perfect pace.
"Hey Twilight! Where you going with Fluttershy and Lyra? are you guys going on an adventure? Oh OH, are you having a sleepover? Can I join, huh? Can I, CAN I?!" Twilight looked to the sugar addict and said.
"Fluttershy found a hurt creature in her house and told Lyra and I it was a human." Pinkie Pie let out a sqeel of glee as she bounced in front of Twilight looking at the unicorn while jumping backwards.
"A human! wow that's great, I mean I don't even know what a human is but it sounds super fun, I can't wait to throw it a welcome party! Wait, you said it was hurt. that's so sad, let's go help it out!" As they neared The shy pegasus's home shouting could be heard.
Voice 1: "That's right, you better run!"
Voice 2: "No! Will you just listen to me."
Voice 1: "I finally got- ARGH!"
at the scream the four equestrians franticly opened the door to... Rainbow Dash and the human sitting next to each other, their attention on a strange glowing rectangle.
"I told you Dash! you weren't a high enough level to beat him." The human said as he took the rectangle and closed it. Dash crossed her forelegs as she looked to it annoyed.
"Whatever Jaytee, I was close to beating the boss and you know it." Twilight cleared her throat to let the two know somepony was there, it got it's desired reaction as they looked to the group.
"Hey girls!, Fluttershy, I know you already know, but Twi, Pinkie, um... who are you," Rainbow paused looking to Lyra.
"Oh, Im Lyra Heartstrings. Nice to meet you." she replied shaking the pegasus hoof.
"Yeah whatever, anyways yeah this is Jaytee, I know he looks weird but he's some thing called a human and while he's kinda a wimp, he's also kinda cool." She finished hovering in the air next to apparently, him.
"Thanks Dash, I really appreciate that. Well, not the wimp comment, but everything else."
The Group stood in bewilderment, well, Twilight, Fluttershy and Lyra were bewildered, Pinkie just hopped over and started asking him questions.
"Hold on!" Twilight called, eyes falling on her,
"First of all, Jaytee on behalf of all Equestria, welcome to Ponyville. Secondly, Rainbow Dash what are you even doing here?" Dash smiled as she rubbed the back of her head.
"Well, after we all cleaned Ponyville I went home to sleep when I forgot to remind Fluttershy that next week I needed her help practicing for the best young flyers competition when I found Jaytee, I thought he did something to Flutters, especially when I saw the blood on the couch..."
Flash Back
Rainbow Dash noticed the tears in it's eyes and cocked her head to the side.
"Why are you crying?" She asked feeling a bit uncomfortable about all this.
"I'm hurt, you knocked my food on the floor, your calling me a monster, and to top it all off I have no idea how I even came here and whenever I'm extremely stressed I cry. Fluttershy said she was gonna get a friend of hers to help me out but..." Dash put her hooves to the ground and walked over to the crying mass before her.
"Okay I don't usually say this so listen close, I'm sorry I attacked you and called you a monster." It looked up at her with red puffy eyes making Dash feel worse. "Anyways, I'm Rainbow Dash, The fastest Flyer in Equestria. What's your name? I mean you have one right?" He took a few breaths to stop his crying and spoke,
"My names Jaytee, it's okay though. You thought your friend was hurt, I would have done the same." Dash looked at the coffee and let out a sigh, she then noticed the strange items and looked back at him. "
Hey Jaytee, what's all this stuff?" it smiled as it took each item and explained starting with the small dark green rectangle.
"This is a music player called an Ipod, I can store music on her from a thing called a computer and when I have head phones I can listen to any or all of them." He then put that down and picked up the lager of the rectangles, it had a picture of a mouse and rabbit with the words 'Epic Mickey 2 The Power of Two.'
"This is called a 3DS, what this dose is play games and lets me paint and take pictures." Dash took the item from him and asked.
"Yeah right, how can you play games with something so small?" Jaytee snatched it back then, to Dash's amazement opened it. He then pushed a button as the thing lit up with images.
"WHOA!" she exclaimed as she took it back, she pushed on the bottom screen of the strange item as it suddenly went black for a few seconds, soon the words 'Hero's Scape' appeared on the top screen with the word start on the bottom. Jaytee guided her through the creature creation mode and discovered he was a guy of his species...
Flash Back End
"... and I've been playing ever since." Dash finished as snatched the 3DS from Jaytee. Dash soon found it and the other three items engulfed in golden energy as they floated to Lyra,
"This is so cool!" She mumbled as Twilight walked to Jaytee's other side.
"So Fluttershy, what do you need my help for, couldn't you have just wrapped him up yourself?" The Purple Unicorn asked the yellow pegasus as she walked back in with a first aid kit in her mouth.
"Well, yes. But I thought you might know a spell to heal his leg a bit, also I might need you to give him some vaccinations." The second the word was said Jaytee looked at the two.
"Wait, I have to get shots? No way, not happening!" Twilight quickly used magic to hold him as he was about to try and run away.
"Aw come on Jaytee, it's just a itty bitty witty needle. It's just a pinch and done." Pinkie said trying to comfort him.
"Actually Pinkie, I need to give him twenty-five shots so he doesn't get sick and die. Okay Jaytee, here comes the first one... I'm sorry but it might sting a little." Fluttershy said. Twilight looked to the human to find he had fainted, this causing a laughing fit from Rainbow Dash.
"Hahahaha... He fainted from having to get a few shots, that's priceless." Lyra and put the items down as she was now writing in a scroll.
"Human beings faint from having to get a shot. Interesting." Twilight let her magical grip on Jaytee go as she smirked. "Well, at least he can't be a threat to Equestria. Now, there is one healing spell I haven't tried yet." Twilight thought as her horn glew on his left leg, Lyra, Pinkie, and Rainbow fighting over that 3DS thing. Twilight felt sad for Jaytee seeing for herself just how much of his own blood stained his cloths.
"Poor thing. What did this to him, and how did he get here?" She thought as the healing spell started.
Jaytee's P.O.V
In Jaytee's dream he wasn't in his home this time, he was in a castle's viewing chamber with a strange dragon siting on top of a magnificent golden throne. The dragon thing had a deer antler on the right side of his head and a blue goat horn on the left side. His mouth had one long fang and his eyes had different-sized pupils, while on his chin was a goat beard that accompanied his white bushy eyebrows. His right arm looked like it belonged to a lion, while the left claw looked like an eagle's. It's right leg was that of a lizard, and the left leg was a goats matching it's beard and left horn. on his back was a bat's right wing, while a pegasus' wing was on the left. To finish off his strange appearence was a horse's mane and a dragons snake's tail with a white tail tuft.
"Send him in." The dragon said as what Jaytee saw next surprised him. Humans! three of them! two were dressed in armor while the third was in rags, his writs chained in front of him.
As he was thrown to his knees by the two, the chimaera like dragon began. "You human, are charged with killing a werewolf." Said human glared up to the dragon as he replied.
"It would have eaten four ponies if I didn't, I did what was right." The dragon let out an amused laugh as he crouched next to the human.
"A human? Doing something because it's the right thing to do? What is Equestria coming to? Lock this hero to the dungeon so he can serve as a reminder, Human's shouldn't play hero." The two humans pulled the third to his feet a took him away, he glanced around and found the pony Jaytee saw in his dream when he first came to Equestria and gave her a smug smile.
As Jaytee opened his eyes he blushed with the memories of what happened filled his mind.
"Man, I must look like a pussy to them, fainting over having to get twenty-five shots. Way to go you made the damn human race look bad, dumb ass." He thought as he tried to sit up. He was not only surprised his body stopped feeling like crap but he was also covered with a blanket laying on the couch. He soon saw Lyra and Twilight asleep on the ground while Pinkie Pie, Rainbow Dash and Fluttershy were no where to be seen, Jaytee closed his eyes as he laid back.
"I could get used to this place." He thought as he opened his eyes and found Pinkie's blue eyes peering down at him with a gleeful smile on her face. He quickly placed a hand over his mouth to stifle a scream then whispered.
"Pinkie Pie, you scared the hell out of me." she cocked her head then whispered as well.
"Sorry, I wanted to ask you something but I had to wait for your dream to end, but you didn't see me when you first got up. So what's your favorite color and what kind of treats do you like?" Jaytee raised an eyebrow to this,
"Wait, you saw my dream? How is that possible?" Pinkie shook her head as she said.
"That's not important, what is important is I get things just right for your party. How else can we properly welcome you if we don't have things you like at the party, thats just weird."
"Says the weirdest being in the room."
Jaytee thought as he answered.
"Well, forest green is my favorite color and I love anything chocolate except strawberries and raisins. I do have one question though, why are you going through the trouble of throwing me a party in the first place?" It was this Pinkie Pie tilted her head, her face showing confusion.
"What do you mean? Party's aren't trouble at all. They make everypony feel good, especially the pony it's being thrown for." At that moment Jaytee hugged the pink mare tightly.
"Thanks Pinkie." He whispered as quietly as Fluttershy talks. It was then Fluttershy popped her head out of the kitchen to see two of her guess up.
"Jaytee, Pinkie Pie, good morning. How do you feel Jaytee... if you don't mind me asking." Fluttershy asked as she walked to them. Jaytee took a whiff of the air and smelt eggs, wait, did ponies eat eggs?
"I feel great, thanks for asking. do I smell eggs?" Jaytee asked sitting up.
"Well, yes. I hope you don't mind but after I finished your shots and cleaned your wounds I looked at your teeth so I could get an idea of what you eat." Jaytee looked to the ground, these ponies, they helped him, made him feel comfortable, hell one even wants to throw him a party.
"I don't mean to sound ungrateful, but, why are you all being so nice to me? I mean people in my world wouldn't have done half of the kind things you have without wanting something in return." Fluttershy looked as if she was about to cry after he said this. Pinkie just looked at him in disbelief. A yawn was heard coming from Twilight and Lyra as they finale woke up.
"good morning everypony. Fluttershy, what's wrong?" Twilight asked as she stood up. Fluttershy flew over to Twilight and told her what Jaytee had said.
"Jaytee... is that true?" Twilight asked horrified. Lyra might have not heard what Fluttershy said as she looked confused, Jaytee just looked to them and spoke.
"It is true, a lot of human beings don't care about others, even hell the only two people in my family who cared for me are gone. So I'm sorry if it's upsetting to ask but, I need to know, why are you being so kind to me?" he chocked out the last bit as his eyes stung, why was he like that? upsetting everyone he knows by telling the truth. He then felt something he didn't expect, they were hugging him tightly, he looked to see Twilight, Pinkie, Lyra and Fluttershy, all four were crying.
"Were doing this because we care about you. The only thing we want from you Jaytee is to be happy." Fluttershy whispered in his ear, Jaytee just held the mares around him and whispered
"Thank you... thank you so much."
With chapter 2 done more of the story is reveialed, I hope you all enjoyed this chapter, sorry if they seem a little OOC but the more I write the more that should be fixed. Anyways, I hope you comment and review, cause I would really like some input