Hey people, Spearhead here. I'm currently doing a rewrite of the Morra Empire and was hoping for your input. I don't like how I tried to rush it and how it's turned out. So PM or Review with anything you want me to correct in the rewrite.
The rewrite can either be a completely new story or I can just replace the chapters. The first few chapters won't be any different apart from minor changes or additions and changes to spelling or grammer.
So what do you want? I can have Lindy stay behind with Tony in the Marvel/Limitless Universe? I can include scenes from Ironman 3? I can expand more on S.H.I.E.L.D. and Eddie's relationship? So PM or Review with any suggestions you have and I'll see what I can do.
Sorry for all the false hope that this was a new Chapter, but I promise I'll do my best to make the upcoming updates will be brilliant!
Thanks for the patients and any help you can provide. I'm also sorry about the false hope, so here's what a part of the next chapter. Enjoy!
-Spearhead
"Bra'tak." Cam nodded.
"What brings you to Dakara?" The old Jaffa asked as he walked with them towards the temple's remains.
"We're here about the shipyard." Vala blurted out.
"Of course. I apologise for not informing you sooner, but I was sworn to secrecy by the council." Bra'tak said, regretful.
"What council? We were under the impression that the council fell during the Ori invasion." Daniel asked, confused.
"It did, a new council was formed for the process of selecting our new leader." Bra'tak nodded.
"Of course." Cam nodded.
"Please follow me." He'tar gestured. SG-1, He'tar and Bra'tak headed into the temple interior. No internal damage could be seen. The stone walls and red marble columns were pristine.
"You've certainly done well rebuilding." Daniel praised.
"Indeed, all thanks to the ancient technology." Bra'tak nodded.
"I thought the computer only gave you limited access?" Vala asked as they walked down a guarded hallway.
"That is partially true. The computer granted us use of the already finished technology with the yards. This included robots meant to build or repair." Bra'tak informed.
"Then how are you building new shipyards and ships?" Daniel asked, confused.
"While we can't order the machines to build ancient technologies, they appear to be capable of scanning less advanced technology and the computer has no problem with building it for us." Bra'tak explained.
"For the shipyard design, we used an automated example we liberated on Erebus." He'tar informed as they entered a guarded ring room.
"And now they're building them everywhere." Cam commented as they stepped inside the platform.
"Indeed." Teal'c nodded