I Hate This Part

by Gamer300

It was nighttime and the dark figure checked to see if everyone was asleep at the neighbor’s house. After it saw that everyone was asleep, it busted in the door. There was screaming and gunshots was heard throughout the night.

3. Chapter 3

Okay, so after getting critiqued really bad by Lord Kevin, it inspired me to do better. So here's Chapter 3.

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Nova sat on her bed and stared out the window. It was twilight, her favorite part of the day. She always loved the colors, a beautiful purple, red and orange with a stripe of pink. She got up and took out her paint kit from her black drawer, taking a glimpse at the colors on the palette. She sat it down on top, and went to Lucky's room, which was across from her door. She banged really hard like she always did.

"What is it," Lucky groaned from the other side of the door.

"I need to use your T-Shirt," Nova hissed.

"What for," he argued.

"JUST OPEN THE DAMN DOOR," she scolded.

She could hear Lucky's footsteps as he approached the door. He opened it slightly.

"What do you want," Lucky asked again.

"I JUST TOLD YOU WHAT I WANTED," she snapped.

"Fine, but you have to say please," he taunted.

"I hate you," she muttered.

XOXO

"Someone moved," a familiar voice said as he saw a person removing the 'for sale' sign.

"Shadow, why would it matter if someone moved," Rouge questioned.

The suddenly saw a green hedgehog hurled from the roof of the house.

"NOVA! NOW WE GOTTA FIX THE ROOF," they both heard a high-pitched voice squealed.

The green hedgehog suddenly landed right in front of them. He groaned in agony as Shadow and Rouge walked up to him. He looked up, and then gave a nervous chuckle.

"Are you OK," Rouge plainly asked.

"Boooobiieeesss," Lucky slurred.

"No wonder he got hurled from the roof," Rouge thought.

"What's your name," Shadow demanded.

"Oh me? My name's Lucky," Lucky piped.

"Well you weren't so lucky today," Rouge joked.

"Until now," he grinned.

XOXO

From around the corner, a figure spied on the new neighbors.

"Target found," a robotic voice slurred.

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Gamer300: Ooohhhh what do you think is gonna happen next? Don't forget to R&R!

Nova: I bet I know ;)

Gamer300: Shhhhh! Don't tell them!