New World Chapter 4: The Shocker, a make it or break it fanfic

Disclaimer: I do not own Make It Or Break It, although if I did, I would make sure that this amazing show had more seasons to come. I am not sure if I will make up any new characters, so if I do, I own them but the normal characters are property of ABC Family.

Chapter 4:

May, 2012

First Day of Training

Olympic Training Center

Kim's Point of View:

Kim was anxious waiting for the girls to get back from training on their first day.

"Hey girls, how was training today?" she asked, practically attacking them as soon as they walked in the door. She noticed that each of them had expressions of surprise still on their faces, probably from learning that Emily was back and going to compete for a spot on the Olympic team with the three of them and Kelly.

"Geez Pay, your mom needs to relax a little bit, she almost ran me over coming to the door." said Lauren, completely ignoring Mrs. Keeler's question as she flopped down on her neon colored bedspread.

"Training was good." Kaylie said in her usual people pleaser, angelic tone.

"Did you know that Sasha and Marty were also coaching?" added Payson, as both she and Kaylie ignored Lauren's snarky comment.

Before she and the girls had left, Sasha and Kim had had a meeting discussing rules, among other things for the girls to follow and do while they were at the Training Center. She remembered Sasha mentioning that "this training center session is going to be unlike any other session before", but Kim just imagined he was talking about Emily coming back.

This didn't make any sense. Why wouldn't Sasha have mentioned that he was going to be at the Training Center to her? And more importantly, what was Sasha doing here, at the training Center?

Later That Night

Lauren, Payson, Kaylie, and Emily's Dorm room:

Emily's Point of View:

Emily looked around at the other girls. Each of them was primping themselves. That was weird. Even Payson was doing her hair and makeup. The Payson Keeler that she knew wouldn't ever do her makeup unless it was for a competition, in which case Lauren and Kaylie did it for her, because she didn't know how to do her own. Wow a lot sure has changed since I was last with them she thought.

"Hey do you guys want to go get dinner?" Emily asked, hoping it would serve as sort of an ice breaker.

"No! I have plans with Jake for tonight" Lauren immediately replied in a snarky sing-songy, flirtatious voice, bragging about her newest boy. ++After the first night running into him in the hallway, Lauren had been talking on the phone to him, texting him, and seeing him at every possible moment. She had barely been around the dorm++

Kaylie was probably getting ready for a date with Austin. Emily loved them as a couple. Kaylie had always been extremely nice to her and included her in all things "Rock" and she felt so badly about making Kaylie think that she ran away because Kaylie kissed Damon.

"Payson, where are you going?" she asked figuring that maybe she could tag- along with her, so that she wouldn't end up as a total loner tonight.

"Max wanted to get together with me tonight, and I think that I'm going to break up with him. But maybe we could hang out another time." replied Payson, catching onto what she, Emily, was trying to get at in asking Pay what was going on.

Wow! a lot sure has changed since she had hung out with these girls. Payson had a boyfriend? What the heck! Payson was the girl who everyone else could always rely upon to give them reasons for no dating and chastised them when they ignored her.

Maybe if she had remained close with these girls, things would be different. That was one of her main regrets. She had really missed these girls, even Lauren. Who wasn't always the nicest to her, but she hadn't always been the nicest to her. Lauren had a harder life. Her mother had abandoned her. Her father seemed more interested in what Lauren could do for his business as a lawyer than how she was developing as a human being.

Kaylie's Point of View:

Thank goodness that was over, she thought to herself as she closed the door to her dorm room. That was quite possible the most awkward encounter gymnastics had ever given witness to. She loved her friend Emily, but she needed to understand that she hadn't had any contact with these girls in over ten months. She knew that Payson and Lauren also loved their friend and felt for what she was going for, but there were going to definitely be some trust issues. This girl had taken off without any warning. The girls had collectively called her every day for almost a month after she had left. This is their teammate who had been such a good friend to them, she took the blame for them, she saved Kaylie's career, repaired Lauren and her self's relationship, helped Payson move on from gymnastics when that was the only possibility, and then helped Payson believe in herself enough to get back into gymnastics and conquer her fears. At least now she had her date with Austin to take her mind off things.

As soon as she entered tres bon, Austin saw her and immediately got up from his seat to greet her. A lot sure has changed in the past year, she thought to herself. Emily got pregnant and left the gymnastics world. Austin went from 'not knowing who she was' to becoming the best boyfriend she could have ever dreamt of. Payson had become the best artistic gymnast in the country and quite possibly the world. Yet somehow, things were working out just as they had been working for them to from the beginning. All four of them were at the Training Center and Olympic Trials were on their way, giving each of them one last chance to prove themselves before the ultimate task.

"Hey Kaylie, good to see you again." Austin greeted her. They hadn't been able to see each other in the past week because the boys came down before the girls and his training schedule conflicted with hers.

"Yeah, good to see you too." she replied, giving him a quick peck on the lips before they both sat down."

"Hey, I actually wanted to see you tonight because I wanted to tell you a few things." he said. This was kind of scary, but she wanted to tell him something too, so it was sort of a good start to their evening together.

"Ohhhh good! I wanted to tell you something too." she replied

"Let me go first" he replied

"Okayyyy" she said slowly, kind of hesitant because she wasn't sure what he was going to say.

"Kaylie I-

Author's Note: ++ means that it's not in anyone's point of view. so the words between the addition signs are written in third person. I just didn't know how to incorporate that so there you go! Hope you guys enjoyed this chapter, it was kind of hard to write. What do you think Austin's going to say?

Review Notices: Carla I totally forgot about that! I mentioned it in this chapter, just for you. To guest, thank you it really does mean a lot. iluvtwilight7 Thank you, I loved hearing that people enjoy reading my stories. Guest who said that this was their favorite fan fic, thank you so much. That was definitely one of the reviews that helped me keep going when I couldn't find inspiration. And as you can see in this chapter, yes zabini123 you guessed it! Emily is the roommate! You win a lifetime supply of virtual Sasha kisses…. I read that somewhere and thought it was sooo cute! so thank you for that whoever wrote it… and comment so I know to mention it in my notes for next year.

Viewers Decide: I just decided to add this to help you guys get the most out of the story. Do you want Kaylie to have a relapse of her Eating Disorder? Should I bring Damon into this? Are Kaylie and Austin going to break up or stay together? What is Austin going to say? What else do you guys want in the upcoming chapters? Just leave a review so I know what to include.

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