This is my first proper chapter please R&R thanks
My characters POV
First encounter
It was turning dark under the canopy I couldn't tell if it was raining or not, the only thing I could hear was my breathing, and the person who was following me. I knew it couldn't be Riley, I'd seen him die so who was it? I hated Riley he was the man who wanted us to fight. I remembered what he'd said to me when I'd told him I didn't want to fight.
"Riley can I talk to you far a moment, please?" After I'd pocked my head around the door to his office. "yeah sure what can I do for you?" his tone was always nicer to me but I had a gift. He'd turned me into a vampire two days ago. So he thought. "I'd like to talk to you about the thing that's happening tommorow" I said. "what about it?" he seamed confused at this point. "I don't want to do it" I said as confident as I could. "what do you mean? Are you ok? Do you need more training? I'll train you myself" he really wasn't going to let me go by the tone of his voice. "I think it's wrong I mean she's just a girl it's not fair if we kill her, What happened to Victoria with james isn't her fault it's accturly james's"I told him. "who's james? And how do know Victoria's name?!" He growled at me he's never spoken to me that way before. "YOU DID OK! Now I'm not going to fight tommorow, ok I'm leaving right now and If you even try and stop me I will kill you Riley even if I don't want to I will"I growled back at him.
"But…" "No." "But…" "No! so goodbye"my tone was desperate now "Sugar" he said as gental as he could. And I walked out.
I was still listening, the follower had gone east. I waited for a couple of minutes. There was a funny smell coming from behind me, it was probebly just a animal. I'd been eaten animals now but I hadn't eaten in three weeks. It smelt so nice but I couldn't let my mind wonder at this point. I felt a cool brush of air on my neck. "Dammit" I wispered.