Hi everyone!! Thank you so much for all the reviews! I couldn't believe that I got 11. I was hoping for at most like 5, and I did not even consider the fact that I could get more than 10!!! I didn't have enough time to reply to everyone's reviews, so I am going to do so right now!
I think I replied to:
FAXfan, Bellagail, xxPSxxIxxLUVxxUxx, sparkleglitz01, and maximumridekid97. If I added you on there, or missed any of you, then I just wanted to thank you guys again for reviewing!!! It means a lot that I can get so many reviews for my first story!!
And for those of you who I didn't reply to:
Xcaaiitttlllliiiiinnnnnnx, birdkidwithwings, Bubblesswimmer, nikki, and FlyingFree137: Thank you guys so much for replying!! It really encouraged me to write another chapter!!
Nadia C: Thank you for all the input. I didn't want to have all of the clichés, and I was thinking as I started writing the story and came up with a title that I would make it more about the consequences that come with playing the game. I was actually thinking about how it would all tie into a bigger story like you said as I was writing it. So thanks for all the constructive criticism. It really helped me!!
Before I forget, here's the disclaimer.
Disclaimer: I do not own Maximum Ride. You would probably stop reading the book after the first chapter of MR1 if I was writing it. So, I'm happy it belongs to James Patterson.
Now on with the story!!
(Chapter 2)
Fang POV
I cannot believe that Max is actually making me do this!! I mean, I could deal with running around, but in a white toga?!?!?! Ithought as I made my way to mine and Max's room. Yeah, you heard me right; me and Max are sharing a room. Personally, I think it is Angel's doing; if she hadn't wanted a room so badly with Nudge, then we wouldn't be in this situation. Or at least she told us that she wanted a room with Nudge. I will never understand how anyone can take that much talking! I know I am more of the silent type, but that is way too much for any normal person to handle. I guess I really can't say normal person, because technically we are far from normal, but even her talking is a bit excessive for even us bird- kids. She was talking about chickens for like 5 minutes before. Anyway, as I came back into the room with the rest of the flock, and Total were, with the white, non black sheet, everyone stared at me, except for Iggy who looking in my general direction.
"Guys, I really don't know how to put this on." I said.
"Come here, I'll help you. I have a general idea I think. Angel sent me some pictures through our minds." Max replied.
I stepped forward and realized that since my shirt was black, I would need to take it off. I threw the sheet at Max and started to take the shirt off. I took it off and put it on the nearest bed, then I glanced up and saw Max looking at me with a glazed, confused look on her face.
Max POV
Fang threw the sheet at me and slowly began to take his shirt off. What in the world is he doing? I asked myself. And of course having a 6-year-old mind reader/controller present, she had to answer.
He thought that he would need to take it off because you would see the black. That made a lot more sense, but I was sure that he saw the look of confusion on my face as he turned his head toward mine. I wrapped the toga around his waist, and brought it around his back so it would hide his wings. Since it was a thick material, you couldn't really see the solid black through the sheet. "Ready?" I asked.
I heard a chorus of yes, yeah, and yups from different places in the room.
"You do not even know how much I wish I had a camera right now! You look like… like Julius Caesar!!" Total exclaimed.
"Who?" Angel asked.
"Are you kidding? You went to school for a while and you didn't even learn who Caesar is? You kids would be better off in school. He has had plays written about him, he is one of the most famous people, like, ever!!!!!!" Total shouted. This dog is so crazy today.
We walked to the lobby, using the stairs of course. Next time I should ask for a room on the first floor, since we were obviously not going to walk down a bunch of flights of stairs all the time. The girl at the front desk was looking at him really weirdly, but as soon as she caught sight of his half bare chest she blushed and looked away. I clenched my fists in annoyance, remembering the red haired wonder back in Virginia. Fang seemed to notice this and smirked at me. "Just go already!" I screamed, already angry. He started to run around the lobby, chanting "TOGA, TOGA, TOGA!!" It was even funnier than I could ever imagine. Briefly I wondered what he would do to get us back, but that thought left my mind as quickly as it had come as I saw Fang trip over the edge of the carpet and the sheet pull back, exposing his black wings.
I know this was an evil cliffie, But it seemed like the right time to stop it. I know it's super- mega- ninja short, but the more reviews I get, the faster it will be updated.
