Hey people!! I am so extremely sorry that I haven't updated in so long. My computer has been really weird, and my teachers have given me so much work, I am ready to go insane. For one class I have 6 shortish packets, a 90-question packet, a lab report (those are long in my school), and 3 chapter homeworks, which are like 40 questions each. And that's only for ONE teacher!!!! SO you can see my dilemma. I only got 5 reviews, and I don't understand why, because the first chapter, I got 11. Is my writing getting bad? Or are the chapters just too short?
Let me just thank the people that did review:
xxPSxxIxxLUVxxUxx, Midnightwings4159, sparkleglitz01, and FANGANDEDWARDrockMYsoxLOL: Thank you guys so much! It makes me happy that I get at least a few reviews!!!! Oh and FANGANDEDWARDrockMYsoxLOL, I love your penname!!
NadiaC: Thank you so much for the constructive critisizm! I will try to work on that so you won't get confused.
Recap:
"What happened?" I asked, also looking around me for the first time since I woke up. "And where are we?"
"Just relax." He replied.
Disclaimer: I do not own Maximum Ride, although I wish I did. I do in my dreams sometimes though.
I am dedicating this chapter to xxPSxxIxxLUVxxUxx and sparkleglitz01, because they have each reviewed for EVERY CHAPTER!!! How about a round of applause!
(Chapter 4)
Max POVI started to relax, but then remembered that I hadn't seen the flock since I woke up, much less heard them. I tensed, and of course Fang knew what I was thinking. "They're fine. I sent them to the grocery store with Iggy to get food for dinner." He said. I was about to ask where we were again when I heard Iggy's booming laugh, and Nudge's constant chatter. Angel ran over to me first, and Nudge and Gazzy where following right behind her.
"Max! You're finally up!" Angel yelled.
"Guys, be quiet, she still needs to relax," Fang said.
Than I finally caught on to what Angel said. "Wait, what do you mean 'I'm finally up'? How long was I out?" I demanded.
"Oh, maybe about three days. And it was so boring too because Iggy and Fang wouldn't let us do anything! We were barely allowed to fly! The only time we could was when Iggy had to go to the store or wanted to go outside for a little. And Fang didn't move at all, and didn't even go flying at all. I would be so bored and annoyed if I didn't go flying for three days. All he did was sit here and watch you. Which isn't fun if you ask me, no offence Max, but when you are sleeping, it's really boring!! Omj, and then the Jonas brothers had a concert yesterday, and if we flew in close enough, we could hear them singing! They are even better in person! And I could even see Joe a little bit!!!"
"Nudge, be quiet for a little bit please. I still have a headache. And I was out for three days! You didn't try to wake me or anything?"
"Max we did try to wake you, but you didn't even move. Dr. Martinez said that those things put a sleeping thing in you." Total replied, coming into the room.
"Wait, Mom is here?" I asked.
"She should be, it's her house," Iggy said laughing along with Gazzy.
I finally looked around better, getting a good look at the room. I felt so stupid not noticing before that we were in the guest room. "Oh. Well where are her and Ella?"
"Ella's at school and Dr. Martinez is at the office. There was some sort of dog- pantyhose emergency." Gazzy said.
Dog and pantyhose? That is interesting.
Jeb, what a pleasant surprise! What is it this time? I asked, letting all the sarcasm and venom and ice I could muster up leak into the thought.
I just wanted to see how you were doing. Are you recovering?
I am doing fine. As you can see from being IN MY HEAD!
I'll ignore that comment. Well, now that you are at your mother's house, you can enroll in school just like I told you to do when you were playing that game.
Once again, Angel cut off my voice, about the same topic. "Yay! Max I forgot, when are we going to start?"
Since everyone else seemed confused, I said, "Angel, I don't know if we are even going to enroll in school at all."
Nudge seemed upset, as did Angel and Gazzy. Iggy and Fang just looked relieved that we might not even go at all.
Then Nudge remembered that last time school was mentioned, we were playing truth or dare. "Ma-ax! Can we pleeeeaaaaassssse play truth or dare again?! I know that last time it didn't end up so well, but Ella and your mom won't be home for a while and I am so bored!!"
"Sure, Fang's turn" I replied.
Everyone looked up in shock and horror. What was he going to do to get us back?
Fang might know what he's gonna do, but I need some help on that. Please give me suggestions in a review!! Please! Pretty please with sprinkles and whipped cream and chocolate fudge and a cherry on top. I'll even force my slaves Fang and Iggy to give you hugs!!!!
