Sorry for the long paragraphs in this chapter! I think Fang thinks a lot though!! Anyway, I got 10 reviews!!!!! It honestly made my day. Sorry for not updating, but I just got home from LA the other day. I actually wrote most of this on the plane. I was going to make my cousins take me to Venice Beach because we all know who was there. You never know what fictional characters you might find there. But we were too busy. And as soon as I cam back, my internet wasn't working so I had no way to transport this chapter from my laptop to fan fiction. So SORRY FOR THE LONG WAIT!!!!!! Now for the replies…

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Disclaimer: If James Patterson wanted to write more Max Ride stories, they would be in a book, not on fan fiction. So he is not me and I am not him. I am also not Taylor Swift.

(Chapter 5)

Fang POV

I needed to think of who I would pick for truth or dare. Even though Angel was the one who made me do the toga thing to begin with, I couldn't see myself doing anything that bad to her. It would just be wrong, like kicking a dog. Although Total does get annoying.

Hey!

Angel, get out of my mind!!

Sorry, but I wanted to see who you were going to pick. Forgive me? She asked and sent me a mental picture of her doing bambi eyes. She knew I couldn't resist those.

Okay, just stay out of my mind please.

Sure Fang. Bye!!

I really didn't understand why she was saying bye. She was sitting in the room next to the one I was in. Oh well. Who would I get back? They all made me do that stupid thing. I'll try process of elimination. I already figured out that I can't do Angel, doing Gazzy would be fun, but there really isn't anything I can do to him that isn't too bad; same with Nudge. That leaves Max and Iggy. Oh, and Total. If I left him out even in my thoughts, he would know. That dog is freaky sometimes.

So, Max or Iggy, Max or Iggy? Who should I do? A stupid little game is so annoying!! If I did Max, well, I think we all know what I would do there. She has to have gotten the message by now. I kissed her like twice, and then there was that time on the beach after Ari had shredded me like a piece of meat.

But what could I do with Iggy? He can… wear a tutu. No, that's not good enough. And where would we get a tutu anyway? So that's out. He can wear Max's bra and Nudge's underwear or something. But then no one would see it. I know! He could wear them over his clothes! But then the flock would be the only one's seeing it. I think it would be a little too cruel if he had to go outside. But on the other hand, he made me wear that toga.

Since Ella and Dr. Martinez weren't home yet, he could answer the door when they arrive home… Yeah that was good. Everyone knew that he liked Ella, and she liked him too, but maybe not so much after this.

Although he would probably pick dare, I should have a truth ready anyway. I could just make him tell everyone about Ella. Of course Angel came down into my room then because she was listening.

"Fang, that is going to be so funny! Should I go get everyone?"

"Yeah, but don't tell anyone what I am going to do."

"Okay!" she screamed while running into the hallway to get everyone else.

I made my way down the hallway and sat on the couch in the living room. They all filed in and made their way over to the various couches and sat on the floor. I saw everyone come in except for Max.

As I was think in this she came waltzing in, but looking a little nervous. She probably thought that I was going to pick her. So she glanced around, saying, "I thought we were going to play. How are we if the Prince of Darkness isn't even here?"

For a second Angel looked confused, and I wondered why Max said that because obviously, I was sitting right here.

I thought that maybe I was sitting still for too long so I disappeared. So I got up and started walking around, but Max was still glaring angrily around the room, and she started to walk towards my bedroom. Before she could get too far, I screamed, "Max, I'm right here!" She swiveled towards the sound of my voice, but looked confused.

Max POV

I was so confused, but then I found a blurry, grey shape that roughly looked like the outline of Fang. Just then the voice started to talk to me.

No one else, in the flock or otherwise, can see him when he turns himself invisible now. His powers have progressed, but not your's. After time, you will be able to see him more clearly. It is up to you to find out why only you can see him.

That is so difficult! Why can't you just give me a straight answer for once in my life instead of giving me all of this stupid fortune cookie crap!

I only say these things because it will build you up to be a stronger leader. The more you can figure out, the better you can take care of the flock.

"Okay guys, the voice told me that Fang's powers have progressed. You all can't see him, but I can see the outline of him when he turns invisible. As time goes on, I'll will be able to see him clearer. The voice won't tell me why I can see him, I have to figure it out for myself to make myself a stronger leader."

"How do I turn this frickin' power off?!?" Fang scream/questioned.

Tell him to imagine himself visible again, and it will happen. That is how he turns it on. When you were on the ship, one of the crew members injected him with a special liquid that made him get this power at a programmed time. Now was this time.

Which crew member?

I am not going to mention anyone's name, but it was the person he spent the most time with.

Brigid!!!!! I knew I didn't like her!

But at the time. It was for different reasons, wasn't it?

No! She was just suspicious, and I need to take precautions on everything!

No, it was because she was spending a lot of time with Fang.

That didn't really bother me! Why would it?! He can spend time with whoever he likes!!! Now just GET OUT OF MY HEAD!!!

I must have said that last part out loud because everyone was looking at me; curiosity spreading across their faces. Well, in Iggy's case, his face was turned in my direction, and in Fang's case, curiosity was burning only in his eyes. That's when Nudge started.

"What didn't bother you? And why wouldn't it? Well, I really can't guess because it could have been at any time. Can you give me an estimated time period? And who can spend time with whoever they like? I obviously understood that last part because the only thing that could be in your head is the voice, right? And what else did it say?"

"Nothing was bothering me, and it happened a long time ago so you probably won't remember. Nothing that I just said concerns any of you. And yes, I was talking to the voice. It said that Fang can turn his power off by imagining him visible. That is how it is turned on and off. The reason that Fang got your power this time without imagining it is because when we were on the Wendy K, a crew member injected Fang with a liquid that made the power progress at a programmed time." I replied, answering all of her questions.

"Do we know who injected me?" Fang asked, becoming visible again.

"Yeah, it was Brigid." I said. How's that for Dr. Amazing?

Then I remembered Angel's abilities, and mentally said to her, Angel, do not say ANYTHING!!!!!

Okay! But it's still funny!!

Angel! I said in a warning tone.

Okay. I won't say anything.

Thank you. Now please get out of my head. I faintly felt her presence leave my head, and I knew I was free to think. But then I remembered Fang still had to dare Iggy.

Fang POV

I was surprisingly hurt when Max said Brigid. I thought she was my friend, and she was helping me out with what to say to Max. But of course I didn't show anything.

As I was thinking of all this, Max said, " Can we just get on with truth or dare?"

"Okay, I have what I'm gonna do."

Everyone looked anxiously in my direction.

"Iggy, truth or dare?" I asked. And as I predicted, he wanted to make himself more manly looking, so he said, "Dare."

He looked a little worried, but he tried to put on an impassive face like me.

"Okay. I dare you to put on Max's bra, and Nudge's underwear over your clothes. Then, when Ella and Dr. Martinez come home, you need to be at the door when they arrive home." I said. Just then I thought of something to make it even better. "And when they can see you, and are near you, you need to dance around them singing Love Story by Taylor Swift." Do not even ask why I know that song. Nudge loves it and was singing it a few days ago, so I guess it stuck in my head, waiting to reappear at the perfect time like this.

Everyone just looked at me in shock,, but then Max broke the silence by laughing, causing Nudge to laugh. Nudge's laugh was very contagious, so soon the whole flock was hysterical. Even Akila started to howl and make noises, while Total was rolling around beside her.

In between laughs, Max said, "Go *haha* do it *haha* now*haha*!" She was on the floor clutching her stomach; her hair around her face.

Iggy stomped up the stairs stopping in Nudge's room. He walked over to the dresser and started opening drawers while screaming at us, "You're all going to regret this!!!" It seemed as though he found a pair of underwear, because he walked out and continued walking to Max's room. He once again looked through drawers and came out wearing a pink and cheetah print thong, and holding a plain white bra with a blue bow on it.

"I don't know how to put this on. Can someone help me?" Iggy asked, waving the bra around.

Max stepped forward and took it from him, holding back laughter. She said, "Put your arms through these holes and turn around." He did it and she took both sides of the straps that were around his back. She clipped the thing together, and that's when she realized the underwear.

She turned to Nudge and said, "When did you buy these?!" She seemed like she was trying to not start yelling. "I got them when you were asleep from those lizard monster people. We went shopping and I bought leggings. And if you wear regular underwear with leggings, it looks stupid so I needed to buy the thong."

Max still looked angry, but Angel changed the subject before Nudge could get in trouble. Angel said, "Iggy, do you know all of the words to Love Story?"

He replied, " I think so. Do you want me to practice so you can see if I'm right?"

At this point, Total decided he needed to be heard because he screamed, "Of course!!!!!!" And when I say screamed, I mean SCREAMED!

So Iggy began to sing.

We were both young when I first saw you

I close my eyesAnd the flashback starts

I'm standing there

On a balcony of summer airSee the lights, See the party, the ball gownsI see you make your way through the crowdYou say helloLittle did I knowThat you were Romeo you were throwing pebblesAnd my daddy said stay away from JulietAnd I was crying on the staircaseBegging you please don't go, and I said:Romeo take me somewhere we can be aloneI'll be waiting all there's left to do is runYou'll be the prince and I'll be the princessIt's a love story baby just say yesSo I sneak out to the garden to see youWe keep quiet cause we're dead if they knowSo close your eyesEscape this town for a little whileCause you were Romeo I was a scarlet letterAnd my daddy said stay away from JulietBut you were everything to meAnd I was begging you please don't go and I said:Romeo take me somewhere we can be aloneI'll be waiting all there's left to do is runYou'll be the prince and I'll be the princessIt's a love story baby just say yesRomeo save me, they try to tell me how to feel

This love is difficult, but it's real, Don't be afraidWe'll make it out of this messIt's a love story baby just say yes, oh, I got tired of waitingWondering if you were ever coming aroundMy faith in you was fadingWhen I met you on the outskirts of town I said:Romeo save me I've been feeling so aloneI keep waiting for you but you never comeIs this in my head, I don't know what to thinkHe knelt to the ground and pulled out a ringAnd he said:Marry me Juliet you'll never have to be aloneI love you and that's all I really knowI talked to your dad you'll pick out a white dressIt's a love story baby just say yes

Oh, oh, ohOh, oh, oh, ohCause we were both young when I first saw you

And let me tell you, just because Iggy wasn't an 18 year old girl, didn't mean he couldn't sing this song amazingly. He was freaking me out, I never knew he could sing this well. I couldn't wait for Dr. Martinez and Ella to hear this; they would flip out!

Next is Iggy actually performing his dare!!! I promise!!!!! Once again, sorry for the looooooooooooong wait!!!! Keep the reviews, suggestions, and constructive criticism coming!

Peace, love, and Jonas

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(Alexandra)