Here is chapter 1, now I know that the trailer said April 2014, but that's for the youtube video...I hope
Disclaimer: I do not own Final Destiation
In McKinley, Pennsylvania, Nick in sitting in the back seat of a car, looking out the window, he has a camera in his hand.
"So Nick, are you excited?" asked his mother, Margaret
"Yeah, I've been waiting for this photography seminar for weeks" said Nick
"I've been waiting for this just to get some alone time with you" said Leonie, Nick's girlfriend
"So have I" said Nick's sister, Megan
"Why? You're not coming" said Nick
"Because I get some time away from you" said Megan
Nick flashes the camera in her face.
"Nick, I've told you not to do that" said Margaret
"Sorry" said Nick
The car pulls up next to a subway.
"Ok, me and Leonie will take the subway from here, we'll see you in a week" said Nick
"Bye son" said Margaret
Nick and Leonie get out of the car and enter the subway.
The screen shows a box of cigarettes in someone's hand, it pans up to show a guy with dark hair and tanned skin smoking one of the cigarettes.
"Steve?" asked Nick
"Nick?" asked Steve
"Yeah, how are you?" asked Nick
"I'm great, what are you doing here?" asked Steve
"Me and Leonie are going to a photography seminar"
"Photography huh?"
"Yeah, my dream is to be a photographer"
"Cool" said Steve
A girl with a red hoodie, a ponytail and glasses enters the subway.
"No way, guys?" she asked
Leonie turns around and sees the girl
"Sarah, nice to see you" said Leonie
A motorbike stops outside the subway, 2 people get off the bike, one was a tall guy wearing a green jacket, the other was a french girl.
"Hello everybody" said the male as they entered the subway.
"Hey Mike, hey Maria" said Steve
"How have you 2 been?" asked Leonie
Maria shows everyone her hand, revealing a diamond ring.
"No way, you 2 are engaged?" asked Sarah
"Yes we are" said Mike
A train stops, the group enter it and see a girl with red hair and a blue turtle neck, applying her make-up.
"Oh, hey Louraine" said Nick
"Hey guys, long time no see" said Louraine
"Yeah it has, it really has been..." said Sarah before being cut off by Louraine
"I don't really care, was just trying to be nice" said Louraine
The train heads off, a girl with dark skin and blonde hair walks towards the group. She looks at Nick and Leonie with jealousy in her eyes. Nick notices her.
"Hi Tasha, it's been a while" said Nick
"Yeah it has" she said before sitting down.
"So Tasha, what's new?" asked Steve
"Nothing much, I'm a C.I.T now"
"A what?" asked Mike
"A councellour in training" said Tasha
At the next stop, a redneck and his wife enter the train, he glares at the group and sits next to Nick, a woman with 2 kids enters the train aswell.
The train heads off again, three stops ahead from where the train was, a football team enter the subway, one member tries to throw away a piece of trash, but he misses and it gets onto the tracks.
Two stops before that, no one gets off the train, but a guitarist gets on, he is singing the song 'There is someone walking behind you'
There is someone
Walking behind you
Turn around
Look at me
Nick feels a gust of wind and turns around, seeing a poster for a movie called '180 stories high'.
At the next stop, the guitarist got off the train, but no one else in the group did.
The next stop, the train rode over the trash the football player tried to throw away earlier, sending it backwards, when hit a rock, just slightly enough to move the rock towards one of the wheels.
The train heads off again, this time it shook a bit, but that didn't matter, later on, it reveals that the rock had scratched the train wheel, now, the tracks were begining to spark.
In the drivers section of the train, the train driver accidently spills a drink when the train shakes violently again, getting the controls soaked. The driver could use the train's breaks, unfortunately, a second train was driving on another section of tracks, timing was not on the driver's side as the second train hit the train and killed the driver.
With the group, they see the accident with the driver and ran to get out, the group were the only ones in the cart since they weren't very big, Lauraine was at the set of doors closer to the other carts.
"GUYS! LET'S TRY TO GET TO ANOTHER CART" yelled Louraine
At that moment, a wheel from the front of the train came bouncing into the cart and hit Louraine, knocking her right out of the train.
"LOURAINE" yelled Nick, he was still trying to get the door open when the train made a sharp turn causing the redneck to go face first into the window, eventually the window broke and the redneck was grinded against the wall.
"EDWARD" said his wife
Meanwhile, the mother had ran into another cart, this was a bad idea as the ruptured hydraulics has caused the cart she was in to break off, when it exploded and burned the mother to death.
The group were still trying to get out when Mike tried to run out of the cart, when he did, he ran through a group of scared people, he got up on a set of chairs, when he lost his footing and broke hit neck when he landed.
With the group, the train had made another sharp turn, launching Maria out of the train, causing her to break her back when she hit a wall.
Eventually, Nick got the door open and he, Leonie, Sarah and Steve got off the train, just as it came to a gentle stop, in the middle of more tracks. Tasha hadn't gotten out in time and another train came around and took out the cart, the crash caused a wheel to fly towards Steve and take his head off.
"Nooo!" yelled Nick
The impact of the crash had caused an explosion, burning Sarah, it also sent a piece of schrapnel towards Leonie and bisected her. The explosion had also launched Nick back and he landed flat on his back, he regained conscienceness just intime to notice that he had landed on train tracks, and his leg was stuck under rubble, he heard a bell and looked to his side to see a final train heading his way.
"AAAAAHHHHHH!" he screamed.
Before the train hit him, Nick snapped back into reality, he saw that his friends were still alive. He tightens his grip he had on Leonie's shoulder with his arm around her.
"Ow, hey, what gives Nick?" asked Leonie
"We got to get of this train" said Nick
"What?" asked Sarah
"We got to get off this train, there's going to be a hug crash, the hydraulics are going to rupture" said Nick
"Hey kid, that is not fucking funny" said Edward
"Yeah, can you hear yourself? 'The hydraulics, the train it's going to crash', all he's trying to do is get some attention" said Louraine
"You know Louraine, you really are a bitch, fuck you" said Leonie
"Fuck mois? Fuck you"
Louraine pushes Leonie into Nick, causing him to fall and accidently elbow the redneck in the face.
"Hey you bastard" said the redneck
The group get off the train with Nick freaking out. The redneck follows.
"Edward..." said hiss wife before he cut her off.
"STAY THERE" he yelled
The mother seemed curious and got off the train to see what was going on.
"Nick, what's wrong?" asked Steve
"I saw it, the hydraulics, the crash, the deaths" said Nick
"Crash?" asked Sarah
"Yeah a big crash killing all of us" said Nick
The redneck walks up to Nick.
"Hey kid, what you thinking, elbowing me in the face like that?" he asked
"I'm sorry, it was an accident" said Nick
"Hey, what's going on?" asked the mother
The train heads off.
"Great, we missed our fucking train and we were already on it" said Louraine
The 10 people that got off the train waited in that station waiting for the next train.
"Seriously Nick, what happened" asked Leonie
"I just saw it, I saw the train crash, I saw all of us die, I saw the explosion" said Nick
"What explosion" asked Mike
A big crash and explosion is heard.
"That explosion"
"No, no, no, MY WIFE WAS ON THAT TRAIN!" yelled the redneck
The redneck grabs Nick by the shirt collar and pushes him against the wall.
"WHAT DID YOU DO?" he asked
Finished with chapter 1, be sure to see the trailer for the movie version on Youtube
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