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Louraine was in her house applying her make up, she had plans to go to the disco with her friends Kasandra, Nikki and Desmond. When her friends arrived, she grabbed her purse and they headed off.
==Nick's room==
Nick was in his room, a gust of wind entered through the open window, knocking over a pile of photos and a sharp knife he used to cut paper, the knife landed on a photo sticking out, Nick picked up both the knife and the photo, it was a picture of Louraine wearing disco clothing, doing a disco pose and there was a silver thing in the background, but the picture was faded so the silver thing looked like it was coming down.
==Disco==
At the disco, Louraine and her friends were sitting down having a drink, Louraine looked at another table and saw a man wearing a T-Shirt that said 'IT ALL COMES CRASHING DOWN'
"Hey Louraine, let's dance" said Kasandra
"Ok"
Louraine and her friends got on the dance floor and started dancing, on the ceiling, the discoball's rope was starting to come undone, but no one noticed.
Louraine and her friends were still dancing while the rope was still coming closer to snapping.
The song was almost over when Louraine felt a gust of wind, when the song ended, Louraine did the same disco pose that she did in the photo of her, at that exact moment, the rope that held the disco ball up had snapped and landed on Louraine, many people screamed and ran away to the exits, Louraine's friends pushed the disco ball away, revealing nothing but a big pile of blood...and bits of skin.
==Later that week==
It was the day of Louraine's funeral. Leonie, Steve, Mike, Sarah, Maria and Tasha were all in the crowd.
"And as we remember Miss Louraine Maximillion, who's end came at a young age...we must know that death has a plan for all of us, everything we say and do is part of that plan...the steps we take, the stuff we make, the houses we enter...or the vechiles we exit...everything is part of that design." said the priest
Nick was standing away from the crowd, leaning against a tree, he heard what the priest said and realised that he was right...Death has a plan for everything...but has that plan been altered?
Finished with Louraine's death.
Note that in the future, I will be writing more FD stories, these are some of them:
A version of FD1 where the order is followed
A version of FD2 where death didn't go backwards
A version of FD3 where someone else has the premonition
A version of TFD where the order is altered
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