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Chapter 13

Crimson Canopy

Dawn, Dusk, Roxanna, and Ray beamed into a canopy of trees and Dawn was wearing a costume that had a black and golden mask black on the right and gold on the left his shirt was replaced by a tight Black and Gold shirt and Black on the right and Gold on the left and in the middle of his shirt was a Gold and Black Heart gold inside the black and Black inside the Gold his pants were made of the same colors as his shirt Black on the right and Gold on the left his boots were black with gold on the tips and he still wore his crown necklace.

Dusk wore a Dark Blue Mask his shirt was black with a Blue X in the middle his pants were had a Dark Blue line going down the middle but the pants were black his Boots are black with Dark Blue X's on them he still had his shoulder plates but instead of a heartless symbol on it, it had a dark blue heart on it and he was sleeveless.

Roxanna wore a light pink mask her shirt was the same shade of pink as her mask and her tights were also pink and her boots were white with some light pink thrown on there. Ray wore a black shaped butterfly mask with a purple long-sleeved tight shirt with a black butterfly in the middle her pants bear a black and purple line going down to her shoes and her shoes were purple with black butterflies on them.

Ray looked at herself and said "I look good in tights what do you think fluffy how do I look"?

Dusk turned around to face her and said "you look good but this wardrobe is too tight I can hardly breathe" and he pulled at his collar.

Ray blushed and said "shut up Fluffy or else I'll kill you". Dusk said in a whatever tone" yeah, yeah, whatever".

Dusk turned to face Dawn and Roxanna but they were both snickering quietly.

Dusk rolled his eyes and said " where are we" Roxanna said " I don't know but this tight shirt is so tight my breasts cant breath" then she turned around and said " did I just say that aloud" and she started to blush.

Dawn said " whatever well looks like we're in some kind of Forest but Leon said this is where one of the Twilight Princesses live" and he put his hands behind his head and began swaying back and forth in a kid manor.

Then all of sudden a razor like sound was heard throughout the forest then Dawn turned and yelled "Dusk watch out" and Dusk did a back flip and summoned his Breaking Eclipse in midair and landed on top of the weird razor vehicle and then he jumped and sliced right through the vehicle in a single slash and it then exploded as it hit the ground and Dusk landed gracefully on to the mossy ground below.

Dawn looked at Dusk in awe and said "man you're getting better than before and dude how did you do that"? Dusk said "I guess I don't know my own strength" then he a red blonde blur passed right through them and it was followed by another razor vehicle.

Dawn said "that thing is in trouble come on guys we have to save it, they were about to take off when 3 Neo Shadows and 3 Midnights appeared and another organization member appeared this one wield a big blue shield and he had dirty blonde hair with emerald green eyes then Dawn declared "Dusk and Ray stay here and Roxy come with me okay".

Dawn and Roxanna ran after the razor machine and Dusk and Ray summoned their Key blades and charged forward Ray was the first to strike by jumping up and over Vexen and turned around to cut him but Vexen's shield thought fast and blocked the attack and then Vexen turned around and fired a Blizzard spell at Ray but she avoided it by diving to the side.

Dusk charged forward and collided into a midnight with his Breaking Eclipse and it disappeared into a puddle of blue blood and Dusk jumped back one to avoid the Neo Shadows swipe at him with its claws and then Dusk turned around and he rapidly fired two Nova Blasts at the Neo Shadow in front of him and the other locked on to the Midnight nearest to him and it and the Neo shadow never saw it coming.

Ray was now running up a tree with Vexen close behind her and she rebounded off of the trees trunk and when she was even with Vexen she moved her blade back and then brought it forward but Vexens Freeze Pride blocked it then Vexen turned around to kick Ray but she brought her unlocking of Hearts to block his kick this caused to daze him and she then kicked his Freeze Pride aside and it went soaring down to the ground and Vexen looked at his falling shield and then back to Ray who had a Devilish look on her face and she grabbed his neck and dug him in to the tree causing bark to rain to the ground below.

Ray then darkly said "so Vexen how would you like to die today"? and she shoved him deeper into the tree but Vexen didn't reply but glared at her and then she said "okay I like that one too" and she dug her Key blade into his stomach and he spat out blood and he started to bleed from his wound and his blood was dripping from Rays Key blade as she pulled it out and Vexen let out a disgusting gurgle sound then he fell to the ground while in the fading process.

Dusk appeared in front of the pair of Midnights and in a fast motion hacked them from the side and they exploded in darkness and then the Neo Shadow double teamed tried to scratch Dusk but he grabbed Vexens shield as it was about to hit the ground and he turned around and blocked the neo shadows attack with Freeze Pride and as it hit the shield it froze into a block of ice and it then exploded and he quickly turned around to cut the last Neo Shadow and it was a success and it disappeared in a black poof.

Ray landed next to Dusk as it started to rain and Dusk looked at Ray and said " good job for someone in tights" and Ray said while looking at Dusk " vice-versa" and they ran in the direction were Dawn and Roxy ran off too.

Dawn and Roxy were running at high speed in pursuit of the Red blur.

Roxanna said "these suits enhanced our running ability huh Dawn"? Dawn said " cool" and they started running faster eventually they caught up to the Razor Vehicle and Roxanna shot it down with a pure spell and it crashed down into the water below them. They then found the blur hiding behind a boulder and Roxy said "are you okay" while extending her hand and the boy grabbed it and said "y-yeah" Dawn said "what's your name"?

The boy said "my name is Dash what's yours"?

Roxanna said "my name is Roxanna or you could just call me Roxy" Dawn said "my name is Dawn" and crossed his arms.

Dash then told them the whole story about why he was here.

Dawn said "let's go rescue your parents and your sister then".

Dusk and Ray were clearing a path as they ran and they saw Dawn and Roxanna sneaking up behind a guard and snapping his neck. Dusk said "that must be them and that's probably were the princesses is".

Ray said "yeah" and they walked up to Dawn and Roxanna and Dawn said " hey guys" then Dash appeared from behind a bush and said " who are these guys" Roxanna said " these are our friends Dusk and Ray" and they both waved at him.

They then made it into Syndromes base on their way to Syndromes quarters they had to stop and fight some guards and heartless. Dash said "this way" and he motioned with his black gloved hand and Dawn and company followed him into Syndromes quarters they then saw Elastic Girl, Violet, and Mr. Incredible being held captive Dawn also noticed a boy about his age talking Violet and a short white man that must be Syndrome.

Dash then ran forward towards the boy and the boy summoned his Katana and in a blink of an eye he slashed Dash and he fell right in front of the boy's feet.

The boy then kicked dash aside and said "pleasure to meet you all my name is Zeke" he then summoned his Bringer of Death and said "whoever is cut by this sword immediately dies" while holding it up and examining it.

Zeke then said " it's called Bringer of Death" he started running towards Dawn who summoned his Twilight Seeker in one quick motion to block Zeke's Fatal Slash attack Dawn then pushed the blade away with his Key blade causing Zeke to jump back he was now eyeing Dawns Twilight Seeker and said in trance " So that's a Key blade" Dawn then jumped up to slash Zeke but Zeke grabbed his blade with his Artificial arm and threw him to the ground Dawn then quickly got up to avoid being cut but tripped on his foot and stumbled back and fell again.

Dusk was about to jump in but Zeke raised his arm causing a barrier to appear and Dusk stopped in mid air and Roxanna yelled " come on Dawn get him" Zeke then mockingly said " yeah Dawn come on try to get me" and he kicked Dawn causing him to fly back then Dawn then found himself back on his feet and charged at Zeke but Zeke moved to the side without hesitating and turned around and hit Dawn on the head with his hilt and Dawn fell to the floor again and Zeke said " this is supposed to be the son of Sora he nothing but a weakling your father would be ashamed of you" and he bent down to grab Dawn by his collar and brought him close to his face and said " aww its Sora junior" and shoved him into the nearest wall and Dawn hunged their limped.

Ray said "why isn't he fighting"?

then Zeke grabbed Dawn by the head and threw him to the other side of the room and Dawn collided with the other wall and then Zeke said " I
was expecting more from you Dawn" and he charged forward with Bringer of Death in hand he was about to stab Dawn but Dawn moved to the

side and grabbed Bringer of Death and shoved it into the wall Zeke said " please don't kill me" then Dawn brought his Twilight Seeker to the side

of his head ready to strike down Zeke but before he can even move Zeke kicked him upward on his Chin and Dawn rocketed upward hitting the

concrete ceiling and Zeke said " Just kidding" and pulled out his blade from the wall and he stuck his artificial arm up at Dawns bruised and

bleeding body and then he said " cursed beams" and red beams began to fire from his steel blood red claws up at Dawn and Dawn just took them

ripping his clothes entirely and then Dawn fell to ground but Zeke caught him by the head and turned to face Roxanna and said " any last words

to your brother before I put him out of his misery" and Roxanna looked at Dawn with tears in her eyes and all she could was stick out her hand

and Dawn did the same but it was too late Zeke had stabbed Dawn in the chest and he let his dead body fall to the ground and Zeke said " now

if you excuse I have some unintended business to take care of and he walked back to Violet with his Bringer of Death in hand and said " syndrome give me the girl now I took out the boy" and he looked up at Violet Syndrome said " yes of coarse" and walked to a control panel and

pressed a button releasing Violet from her prison and She fell into Zekes arms Bridal style Zeke then opened a Dark Corridor and before he

walked in he turned to face a lifeless Dawn and he said " Pathetic the key blade deserves someone with better power it shouldn't be with you at

all your too weak" he then turned around and walked through the Dark Corridor and at that the barrier broke and Roxanna ran to her lifeless

brother and she began crying and she said " you can't die you idiot you can't were on a mission remember" and she started hitting his chest but
all she got was blood on her hands.

Dusk walked over and covered his mouth as he sobbed softly and Ray walked up to him and hugged him and he hugged her back.

Then Dawn Started to fade and then he completely disappeared in light leaving little trails of light floating into the sky. But then Dusk, Ray , and Roxanna turned around and summoned their Key blades and charged Syndrome but he vanished Dusk then ran to the control panel and pressed a couple of buttons and then Mr. Incredible and Elastic girl fell to the ground. Then Mr. Incredible said "where's my little girl"? Ray said "she got captured by that bastard with metal arm".

Mr. incredible fell to the floor and said "I promised her she wasn't going to get hurt but I failed her". Dusk then turned his attention back to Mr. Incredible and placed his hand on his shoulder and said " got to pull it together you're a super hero remember" Elastic girl said " where did Syndrome go" Dash then got up and said " he vanished" and at that the building started shaking and Mr. Incredible said " we must get to the jet" and they started running to the jet and once they were all in they took off and Ray said " look" and they saw a rocket fly towards the city and Roxanna told Mr. Incredible to follow it. Mr. incredible started following it. The rocket then dropped the Omni-Droid in the city Mr. incredible then landed the jet.

So sad i know but dont worry im sure he'll be okay. Wink, Wink.

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