Greetings my friends
I found that it would be appropriate to start the Eva arc soooo
Disclaimer:(Ya know the drill) No I do not own Negima thats KenAkamastu's property (Blah Blah Blah) How ever a few additional things...I do not own Zach Okochi either he is an OC that belongs to my good friend Tribladeofchaos who is letting me borrow him....also any music tracks I put in this fic belong to their respecful owners.....that is all.
Cue special theme: Boss theme-Sonic CD (US version)
(Grins evily)
Now I give you
A retelling of Negima
Episode 10
Nightmare on Sakura Lane
(evil laugh)
It was Nightfall at Mahora and it wasn't an ordinary night either. There was a slight eriee chill in the air as the wind blew on the street, the clouds were darting freaquently in front of the moon casting creepy shadows while the sakura petals blew freely in the chilling air. it was there that a lone girl was running back to the dorms.
This was not just any girl but a certain pink haired damsel that we have all have come to know as Makie Sasaki. Now Makie wasn't exactly the bravest student of clas 2-a but a night like this. Creepy as it was, it was not enough to match the look of fear on here face. No it was quite obvious the she was being chased
Her heart was pounding she was running so hard, but she knew if she slowed down the slightest It woud catch her. Makie kept running. She was one of the more athletic girls but even she had her limits but she had to keep running no matter what.
She could hear it only bearly but it was there something wizzing between the trees hunting her, like it was some clishe'd horror flick unfortunatly for Makie she happened to be the ditzy female of said flick
It happend in an instant she tripped on the path and fell. she quickly started to crawl backwards only to run up against a tree. She saw it the ragged cloak the long hair and pointed hat. she knew it was to late. The thing rushed at her full speed fangs bared.
AHHHHHHHHIIIIIIIIIIIIIEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
(The next morning)
"Chase-san...Chase-san?"
(mummble) "huh?" the ten year old mumbled to the voice
"It's time to get up"
"hmmmm five more minutes.." Chase really just wanted to sleep but yet the voice would not go away
"Chase-san we are going to be late if you don't wake up?"
"Hang on a sec Akira let me handle this." Another voice poped in
there was the rumaging around of stuff then the sound of something being set down than swithched on...then
"WELCOME TO MARIO KART!!!!!!!"
"AAAAHHHH" Chase practically leaped two meters in the air before coming to his senses. "W-w-whats going on" He had notced that what Yuna had done was moved the TV speakers by his fouton and then had started up MarioKart on their N64 to wake him up. He looked to see Yuna trying to suppress her laughter while Akira was just shaking her head.
"Yuna you know you didn't have to do that I could have woken him" Akira spoke
"But Akira were gonna be late and besides this is way more fun." Yuna said composing herself
Chase's brain processed this..."Wait we're Late!?" He said bolting from his bed to the bathroom which there after came various bathroom appliance sounds, followed shortly by Chase dashing back well groomed and in his black mahora boy's uniform "Okay lets go."
He started to march out of the dorm room when Akira stopped him "Hang on Chase-san Yuna said we were going to be late but seeing as your ready to go alredy how about brakfast." She suggested
Chase's stomach agreed to the idea "Yeah sounds good" as he sat down to eat
(Fast foward a few minutes)
The three were on the train now bound twords Mahora
"Oh yeah I can't belive it our third term this is gonna be awsome." Yuna shouted out so that the whole car could hear
"It's true a whole nother year already it seems like yesterday." Akira commented
"I can't wait cause Negi is going to be teaching." Chase was excited
The train finally arrived at the platform and so began the infamous Mahora Rush stampede to a new semester the now official 3-a class was abuzz as Chase, Yuna and Akira entered the room.
The three took their seats and shortly after Asuna and Konoka walked in followed shortly there after by Negi. Now instaed of the usuall stand and bow routine when Negi entered it was more of a riotous cheer as the majority shouted "GOOD MORNING NEGI SENSEI!!!!"
Negi steped up to his seat of power at the front of the room and quieted every body down "Good morning every one and welcome to the third term. I am Negi Spring feild and I will be the officail teacher of class 3-a from here on out." The class exploded in shouts of joy minus a few of the more mature students such as Chisame and Yue who only could think of how immature the calss was acting.
with that home room offically started Chase had noticed that Akira seemed to be looking for some thing "Um is something wrong Akira-san?"
"Oh it's nothing Chase-san I just don't see Makie or Ako yet but maybe they're just running a little late"
Negi spoke as he observed the class "Wow there are actually a lot of you I haven't even talked to yet I will try to make time for all of you." Negi suddenly then got a strange vibe comming from the back of the class room. He looked to the back of the room and saw a girl about Chase's age with long blonde hair and emerald eyes staring back at him.
'Whoa the girl it the back kinda gives me the creeps' Negi thought as he pulled out his class roster to identify the girl 'Hmmm Evangelene A.K. Mcdowell' He looked at the additonal footnote that Takamichi had left 'Takamichi wrote that I should ask her advice if troubled' before he could look into this further Shizuna walked in. which in turn caused Akria to realize some thing.
She turned to Chase "Oh Chase-san I just remembered it's body mesurement day for us the girls so I think you should excuse your self." Chase got the gist of the message and raised his hand "Yes what is it Chase?"
"Um Negi-I mean Negi sensei may I be excused?"
Shizuna got the gist of the question but unfortunatly Negi didn't "Uh sure Chase go right ahead..." The teacher replied. Chase left the room in a hurry then Negi turned to Shizuna "What is it Shizuna Sempai?" Negi asked "It's body measurement day for class 3-a today so would you get your class ready immediatly."
Negi understood what he needed to do but the way he handled it, could have gone a lot better "Alright lady's listen up today is Body measurement day so uh get your bodies out to be measured." The class turned a shade of red and had looks of 'I can't belive he actually said that' then the class erupted yet again with a cheer of "YAY NEGI THE PERV IS BACK." at said person who had hightailed it out of the room saying "I DIDN"T MEAN IT THE WAY IT SOUNDED!!!"
A short while later Chase had rejoined Negi out side of the class room and were talking "So thats why you saked to be excused?" Negi asked
"yeah Akira-san told me and I thought it would be the smart thing to do." Chase answered
"Well I wasn't aware of it." Negi rethorted
Chase was kind of taken aback "I Thought you knew I mean you are the teacher after all."
"Well I'm only ten years old and it is a girls class." Negi countered
"But that doesn't mean you can go around saying hey get your body out for measurements." Chase countered countered
"Hey what happened to you being all shy Chase?" Negi shot back
"It's only around girls" Chase proudly anounnced "Honestly I thought you knew that and we've been freinds since we were what five?" Chase fired back.
Before the argument could continue any further Negi sensed something and was about to tell Chase when the two were interuppted by Ako Izumi who was running down the hall with a distessed look on her face "whats the matter Izumi-san?" Negi asked perplexed.
Ako took a sec to catch her breath then explained "It's horrible Sensei Makie is in the nurses office somethings happened to her!" This statement was promptly followed by a "WHAT?!" From the two boys as well as the door and windows of class 3-a flying open to reavel all the girls in bras and panties "What happened to Makie?!" Asuna exclaimed. The two boys went into a panic after seeng the sight of the scantily clad women with Negi screaming that he "Was not looking" and Chase letting out an inhumane scream before turning red and hiding his face.
(Nurses Office)
Makie was lying on a bed sleeping while Shizuna-sensai was tending to her. Joining Shizuna were Negi, Chase, Ako, Asuna, Konoka, Yuna and Akira.
"Apparently she was found unconcious on Sakura lane." Shizuna finished explaining. the group hovered over Makie "Sakura street?.." Negi was trying to think. "Isn't that the street that heads up to the dorms" Chase answered Negi Chase then turned to Akira who had breathed a sigh of relief "I'm just glad it wasn't anything to serious." The tall girl sounded relived. While at the same time Yuna had a crack explaination "Maybe she drank some Sake and y'know passed out." While this was going on Chase couldn't help but sense a hint of magical energy he thought nothing of it, until Negi flagged him over to Makies bed side
"What is it Negi?" Chase asked
"Shh I was going to ask if you sense magic on her even a little?" Negi whispered
"Well I just keep picking up a slight trace from around the room."
"Good so it's not just me I wanted to know if this was some thing magic related." Negi explained
"Wait you mean something on the lines of Magic could have happened to Makie." Chase asked
"Maybe but I wonder who else here besides us can use magic I haven't felt a pressence like this since Library Island." Negi said in a starwars esqe tone (A.N Sorry couldn't resist)
"Well I gusess but..." Chase stopped and immideatly paled as his eyes fell back on Makie. "Chase whats the matter?" Negi asked. "l-l-l-look are those bite marks on her neck?" Negi looked and to his surprise Chase was right. the Boy turned back to chase and whispered "Maybe this might have something to do with that vampire rumor?"
However before the two could delve any deeper Asuna butt in "Hey whats going on you two you guys are so quiet all of a sudden?"
"well uh um.." Chase shyly stuttered but Negi backed him up "Don't worry about Makie s'probably Anemia um look don't hold dinner for me tonight I will be out late."
Asuna was just puzzled by this remark...
After that class proceeded as normal Negi had asked Chase to meet him outside of the dorms that evening " I'm here Negi but why did you want me to grab Excaliber?" Chase asked dressed in more casuall attire.
"Well if we are dealing with a Vampire I thought Excalibur could help ward it off some how." Negi explained
"But Uh Negi I don't even know how to tap into it's holy power yet." Chase countered
"True but still the two of us are Mages adn we should be able to handle one vampire." Negi insisted, But chase countered "Uh hello if you have forgotten I still haven't gaduated Mage Knight school I don't even have an activation key yet!"
"Your right I'm sorry Chase." Negi apologized. He added rather optimistaclly "Hopfully this is just some stray magic and we won't run into a vampire."
Chase sighed "Yeah I guess your right but I'm still nevious...Its times like this that I wish Mister Zach was here he would know how to approach this"
"Yeah Zach nii-san he's really cool." Negi agreed as he pulled a photo of the Merdina accadamy graduation party. The picture showed Negi Chase and Anya in the front row with Nekene and a teen boy who appeared to be around the age of sixteen with long silver hair and blue eyes wearing an out fit that consited of a white long sleeved button up shirt with a black vest over the top of it and black pants.
Chase moved over to look at the photo "Heh Mister Zach would definetly know what to do Him and his friend hunt down vampires as a job now is that cool or what."
"Yeah say Chase can I ask you something?" "Was Zach nii-san there when you left for Japan?" Negi asked
Chase answered. "No but he did send a letter to me the night before wishing us both luck and to say that he couldn't make it."
"Oh..." Negi seemed upset but then changed the subject "Well it looks like it's getting dark Lets start investigating remember Chase use light based spells to fend it off because...
"Because Vampires hate sunlight seriously Negi you don't need to tell me I remember they taught us this in beginers DADA class." Chase finished (A.N. 2000 pints to who can get the reference in that sentance)
(Sponge bob narrator: Meanwhile)
Night fall had encompassed Mahora yet again and yet again the night had a some what ominous feel to it
Asuna was walking home from her after school club along with Konoka and the library trio. Asuna was still pondering about every thing that was going on that morning. Rumors of a vampire attacking Makie, Negi's and Chase's reactions when they saw Makie, sure she wasn't the smartest student but based on everthing that had happened since Negi arrived the whole idea of a Vampire was not to far fetched.
"Brrr it got cold all of a sudden. Are you chilly Asuna....Asuna?"
"Huh-wha!" Asuna snapped out of her train of thought after hearing Haruna. "Whats up Haruna?" the red head asked. But unfortunatly The short Indigo heared Yue caught on."Asuna don't tell me that your actually beliveing this whole foolish vampire rumor."
Asuna was tkaen aback by this "What me ha ha yeah right why would there be some thing so stupid." She said dodging a mental bullet thankfully for her Nodoka spoke up.
"Um guys I'm going to head home first." to which the group parted ways. "Hey do you think Honya-chan will be alright by her self?" Asuna asked to which Konoka reassured her that it would be fine.
Nodoka on the other hand had begun walking down Sakura lane unaware that she was being watched.
"Wow that sure is an eriee wind." The shy girl commented but she wasn't scared at least not yet. Cause it was just a short walk to the dorms they were in plain sight. Until Nodoka heard some thing rustling behind her "Huh!" Her heart jumped into her throught as turned around and saw...absoulutly nothing.
She breathed a sigh of relief. "Why hello little one." only to spin around lose all color in her face as her gaze fell upon the vampire of Sakura lane standing on a nearby lamp post drenched in a bloody cloak, ragged hat and, long flowing hair. It's Eys glowed green sending the message "It's your time to die"
Nodoka was frozen stiff she only wished she could faint at this point but it was like her whole body shut down. The Vampire spoke again "Ah number twenty seven Myazaki Nodoka eh you know Books and Blood have a lot in comman THERE BOTH RED!!!" The creature leaped from to lamp and glided rapidley tword her.
She wanted to move but she couldn't she wanted to wake up from this nightmare but that wasn't happening either she was trying to find something her voice her legs anything that could help her. until finnally when Vampire was less that two feet away she let out an earpericing scream so loud that several people over heard it before she started to pass out the last thing she felt was something sharp peircing her neck.
Among those who heard the scream were two figures
"You hear that?" one figure spoke nerviously
"Yeah sounds like trouble" the other one spoke
"Well our job just got alot more excting" the second figure spoke again loading a gun
"Yeah but well it could be dangerous." The first figure spoke up again
"Well it beats sitting around all day now grab your swords and lets go." The second argued
the first seemed convinced "Alright this is our job after all lets go then" the firsts silver hair gleamed in the dim night light
the two took off
Esle where Asuna got a weird feeling in her gut "Um I'm gonna go back and check on Honya Chan." She turned around "Wait Asuna-chan let me come with you." Konoka followed her
(Else where again) the vampire was holding the unconcious Nodoka "ha ha passing out only makes it eaiser for me to take your blood which is a bit on tangy side."
"HEY WHAT DO YOU THINK YOUR DOING TO MY STUDENT!" A voiced boomed at the other end of the street then there emerged from the shadows two figures, and no not the ones that were mentioned earlier.
Negi came zooming at high speed on his wand with Chase standing on the back. the two both began prepping spells for a counter attack. Chase went first "Practi bigunar saggica magica III series lumes!" Three bursts of Light magical enery shot out from Chase's training wand and shot twords the vampire who had st down Nodoka and took a defensive stance.
The Vampire mused to itself "Hmmm I wonder if he noticed my reflection" As the vampire threw up two vials. The beams impacted on what appeared to be an invisible barrier. Chase was shocked "H hey Negi It's got a barrier!" Negi was planning then he had an idea "Chase try again to distract it whil I grab Miyazaki-san." Chase was unsure but the boy agreed "Okay here goes." Chase leaped off of Negis wand and shot another trio of Magic arrow's at the creature this time how ever Excalibur which as at chase's side glowed, and unbeknownenst to his added a lot more punch to the sagicca Magica.
The vampire also was unaware of this fact "Try as you might kid that won't wor-" The beams impacted the barrier and Shattered it. "What? My barrier." The vampire was shocked however it did not have time to react to what came next "Rastil Maskir Saggica Magica VII series Lumis!" Negi shouted out from the other side of the Vampire while hanging on to Nodoka.
"ARRRGHH!" The dark creature was struck with the magic blasts blowing off its hat while pushing it back a few feet. "Did we get it?" Chased asked hopfully. The vampire laughed. 'Uh I take that as a no then' Chase thought.
"Ha ha ha ha such power my you must truely be his son." The smoke cleared and both Negi and Chase had a good veiw of the Vampires face, and it goes without saying that the boys were shocked.
Negi was the first to speak "Wait your Evangeline-san from my class!"
The blonde haired emerald eyed girl spoke "Ha correct Negi springfeild You did say you wanted to talk with more of us so...consider this our first chat." She licked the blood off her finger
(To Be Continued....) (Right Now!) Cue music theme-Death ruins-Shadow the hedgehog
Chase was slightly puzzled "So wait what was that about Are you a Mage aren't all Mage's supposed to be good?"
Eva mearly sneered "Feh well then I'll make it easy for you two there are good widzards and bad widzards." She pulled out two vials "GUESS WHICH ONE I AM Freezing Expermando!" she incanted as she threw the vials which exploded and sent out a freezing Shockwave.
"Deflexio!" Shouted both Negi and Chase putting up barriers. Chase was fortunent that he was far enough away from the spell so his bairrer absorbed the balst only covering chase with a fine layer of frost. Negi on the other end was closer so his barrier took the brunt of the expermando but lost the slevee of his shirt. However Nodoka's unconcious form took the full blast leaving...Well lets just say not leaving much to the imagination.
"Hmph putting up a barrier I thought as much." Eva mused.
"Nodoka-san are yo-OH MY GOSH!" Negi saw the damage that was done and looked at Chase who had facepalmed and was shaking his head. "Oh boy at least thngs can't get much worse." and as we all know they did this time in the form of a Red head and Brunette that need no introduction.
"Negi what....THE HELL!?" Said Asuna very shocked at the position of Negi and Nodoka
"Wait is Negi-Kun the vampire?" asked Konoka very confused
"Negi bouzu you better have a really good expalination for this!" Spoke Asuna who looked lke she was boarderlining homicidal until Chase noticed Eva starting to run. "Hey Negi she's getting away!"
Negi the shot in to action "Asuna-san,Konoka-san Chase-kun! Look afetr Miyazaki I'm going after the one responsible!" and before anyone could object Negi activated his accelerat spell and speed off. "Wow Negi-kuns fast..." Stated Konoka. not even a second later Chase started running after Negi. "Hey Negi you can't take a vampire on alone!"
Asuna was very confused now so she just flatout decided to go with her gut instinct "Konoka please keep an eye on Honya-chan I just have to see whats up." "Hai" came Konoka's reply and then Asuna took off after Chase.
Else where the two mystery figures from eairler were also giving chase. "Damn the target is fast I getting tired." Mentioned the silverhaired one whose face and blue eyes were claerly visble in the moonlight.
"Geez and your supposed to be the mage out of the two of us Come on Zach." The second one encouraged he was sporting medium length blue hair with blood red tipped bangs and had green eyes and wore a hat simmilar to indiana jones.
"Well sorry Rigel." the silver haired one shot back "I still don't get how come you have such stamina and yet your a mundane."
"Adept Zach Adept Now lets move." the two continued their pursuit.
"Valkyre clones of light assult thine enemy!" Negi incanted as clones of himself each holding a diferent weapon closed in on the fleeing Evangeline.
"Heh nice try Boya but that is a futle attept." She taunted him as she lept of the over pass and started gliding on the wind.
'Wow just what is she she is'nt even useing a broom to fly.' Negi thought he then shouted "Evangeline-san why are you doing this please stop."
"Oh but you don't want to stop me you want to know about him your fater." Eva shot back while dodging another spell aimed at her
"Wait what do you know about my father." Negi began prepping another spell.
"Hmm How about you stop me and I will tell you." Eva threw up several more frezzing vial's and stopped the Light Valkyre assult.
"Saggica Magica VII seires lumis!" Negi blasted anther magic shot at Eva which was deflected quickly by another potion. 'Just as I thought no incantation she isn't a full on mage her defenses realy soley on Magical crutches.' Negi quck ly thought up a plan
"Whats wrong Boya give up?" Eva was floating over the dorms to which Negi replied "Not on your life! Saggica magica!"
"Won't work.." She threw up another barrier "Guess again!" Negi's voice came from behind her.
"WHAT!?" "Flans Expermando!" Negi struck Eva with the dissarmament spell disentigrating her cloak of darkness leaving her in a rather short night gown.
"Heh good one Boya!" She hissed Negi was covering his face "So thats it Evangeline san I won now tell me about my father."
"Oh your father you mean the man of 1000 spells?" this news hit negi like a ton of bricks. "The legendary Mage! what are you talking about?"
"Sadly I don't feel like giving up that info yet that was just the first round." She spoke as a second figure decended on to the roof. 'Great she has an accomplace better finish this quick.' he began incanting when the second figure appeared right in front of him. "HUH BLLLEAHHHH." And procceded to pull his face cheeks.(A.N. You never know someone could misunderstand that)
The figure then returned to Eva's side "Meet my partener seat# 10 Chachamaru Kurikiri."
"Huh Chachamaru-san Your in this also?" to which the silent student replied "Forgive me for these are my masters orders." The greenhaired girl Blasted forward and struck Negi in the solarplexis which would have knocked him out had he not been a mage. "Oooogh." then Chachamaru proceeded to grab Negi in a choke hold
"NNngh Why are you doing this Evangeline-san." Negi weakly spoke out. "Well it's simple Boya you see now that I have you I can finally remove the curse your father put on me." Negi could only struggle as she contunued monolouging
"You see it futle to escape. Selecting a partner in magic isn't just some fairy tale way to find a mate. No It is actually finding some one capable enough to protect the wizard from on coming attack because as you've seen with Chachamaru you can't get a single incantation off."
She stopped in front of Negi "So in other words since you find yourself without a much needed partener your clearly at my mercy." She grined sinisterly
Donkey: And I suppose thats good
Chase:What your leaving it on a cliffhanger but things were starting to get good
Donkey: that is the beauty of writing Chase
Chase: Hmm I suppose so
Kurazaki: Sir preparations on the custom Knightmare frames are complete
Donkey: Thankyou Ensign Vandyke (whoo boy we all have a tough fight ahead of us.)
Kurazaki: Is something wrong sir?
Donkey: Huh no actually Ensign why don't you do the final word
Kurazaki: But uh sir that is such a high honer
Donkey: No no I insist
Kurazaki: Very well Donkey would like to apologize for the delay for this chapter but he also appreciates your continued support so please with all do respect Rate and Review.
Donkey: At ease Kurazaki you don't have to be so uptight about this
Kurazaki:(Salutes) Sorry sir
Donkey: Anywho I am so evil for leaving this on a cliff hanger but I promise episode 11 Explainations is on the way
DK75m OUT!