Hey guys! Sorry I haven't updated in a while, I am not writing the Christmas chapter now, I might wait until later to write that chapter. I hope you guys like it!
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Previously on the Great Escape:
At Portocini's*
Jack's POV:
I was waiting for Erin in front of Portocini's, yeah I know what you are thinking, 'You're waiting for someone outside with a sprained ankle?' but the true is, it doesn't hurt that bad.
Jus t then Erin covers my eyes.
"Guess who?" She said in a sweet voice, and I smile and remove her hands.
"Hey Angel, you look beautiful." I say, Erin was wearing a light blue dress with white flats, simple, but very beautiful on her.
"Thank you." She says and we walk in hand in hand.
"Hello Erin." My mom says when she sees us.
"Hello." Erin replies.
"Hello Erin, you look nice." My dad says.
"Thank you Erin says with a smile and we sit down at our table and order.
"Jack, how did you end up in the hospital?" My mom asks when we start eating our food.
"Well, I was crossing the street, but I forgot to look and there was a car flying towards me and Jack pushed me out of the way." Erin says giving me a smile that said 'Thank you'.
"Wow, you must have had a guardian angel there with you." My dad says.
"I don't need a guardian angel; I already have one right here." I say and look at Erin with a smile.
She smiles and kisses me, and my parents smile, I'm glad they love Erin as much as I do, then again, how could they not?
Erin is so full of life, she is always happy; she's funny, outgoing, confident, and godly.
I thank God everyday for her, I love her so much, and I do believe God has given me an Angel.
Chapter 23: Merry Christmas!
Erin's POV:
It was Christmas morning and Kim and I were in the kitchen singing to Christmas sings and making cookies, Milton and uncle Rudy were decorating outside, and Jerry was dancing to whatever song came on.
"Don't even think about it." I say, knowing that Jack was probably trying to sneak cookies.
"I'm not doing anything." Jack says, and I turn around to see cookies in his hands.
"Oh really? Then what's in your hands?" I ask Jack, he just looks down at his hands and takes off running and I chase after him playfully and he stops under a mistletoe, I smile and kiss him passionately, and we pull away smiling and head back to the kitchen.
I hear a knock on the door and I go to open it, no one was there, but there was a newborn baby with a pink blanket, in a basket, with a note pinned to the blanket.
The note said:
To whomever this letter may concern,
I left this baby on your doorstep because I can't care for her, I hope you take good care of her and treat her as your own.
She was born today, so please have her middle name be Holly, as in holly berries for me.
God Bless.
I bend down to pick up the baby and take her inside.
"Who is this?" Uncle Rudy asked looking at the baby.
"I don't know, someone just left her on the doorstep, she was born today." I say, and uncle Rudy just nods.
"I want to keep her, to take care of her." I say.
"What? Erin, you are just 16, you can't take care of a baby." Uncle Rudy says.
"Well, why don't you adopt her? And we can take care of her, right guys?" I ask, and everyone starts nodding and saying 'please'.
"Ok, ok. What's her name going to be?" Uncle Rudy asked.
"Mirabella Holly." I say.
"Ok. Mirabella Holly it is." Uncle Rudy says with a smile, and there is another knock on the door.
"I'll get it." I say and Jack takes Mirabella from me. I go to the door to see Jonah.
"Hi Jonah." I say when I open the door.
"Hi, is Kim here?" He asks.
"Yeah, come in." I say and he comes in and goes up to Kim and kisses her on the cheek.
"Would you like to go out with me?" He asks.
"Sure." Kim says.
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