Here's a pretty decent chapter in size (1472 words, 3 pages). I will let you all know now that i'm going to continue writing this fanfiction until i get to the epilogue. so have no fear if you reach a chapter where i haven't uploaded within 5 days...I have a lot of stuff going on at school and some family issues. Just add this story to your favourites/subscription list, and it shall notify you of each new chapter i upload. I tried to add some funny parts to this chapter (example on the bus...dissing Twix bout being in love with Dash. she turns and rages at them)
Anyways. I hope you enjoy. After all i uploaded the first chapter on Saturday or Sunday (3 or 2 days ago of 13 March 2012) and already has over 50 views...Keep them coming guys! I'm hoping to get these published on Google Docs soon. Also if any of you guys would like to do readings please email me (it's just manners if you do).
Thanks and i really hope you enjoy this long chapter!
Also i think that you might be able to see the odd present tense to past tense moment but i'll tell you this! I am writing a novel, finishing off a clopfic (FOR A FRIEND AT SCHOOL!) and they are both in past tense...as well as the first fanfic (The Day I Woke Up In PonyVille)... I hope you enjoy...Don't forget to review!
As I sit on the bus thinking about how epic it would be to finally finish school I couldn't help myself but to think about Dash. I miss her. How sweet it would be if the bus suddenly stopped. I can see it now. Rainbow Dash holding one hoof up to the bus hinting the driver to stop and flying through the windscreen, walk up the isle to me and talk to me
"C'mon Matt, It's time we go back"
"Back to where? Look Dashie I have to finish school"
Then some kids on the bus who unfortunately being arseholes would try to embarrass me for talking to a horse with wings.
"MATT, SINCE WHEN WERE YOU INTERESTED IN HORSES?"
"SHUT UP," Dash would scream at them, "or I WILL COME OVER THERE AND FUCK YOU UP"
I would just giggle...Wait what?...What's happening? Since when does daydreaming about a bus stopping to a pony come real? I look up to see Rainbow Dash standing there with her hoof up in the sky... The driver in shock slammed on the brakes and was centimetres from her cyan face. She looked at the door then back to the driver hinting to open it...He got the idea. Is she? Oh no...Not now Dash...
"Sunflower Twix, c'mon we need to go back"
"Look Dash I know that you and Daybreak might miss me but I really need to finish school"
"Why does it matter? If you're going to be living with us..." I started to cry a little bit as she finished her sentence realizing what she was saying.
"I'm not going back Dash," It's extremely hard for me to say it but...I don't really want to go back just yet... "I'm not going back to PonyVille"
"Wha? Why not? What about Dayb..."
I turn around to see all the kids looking at me...why could they haven't been bronies?
"Guys, this is Rainbow Dash, she is...believe it or not...my fiancé"
"Twix, that's another reason I want you to come back...So we can finally have the wedding"
"MATT WHAT THE FUCK ARE YOU TALKING TO," Some kid in grade 9 yelled out "IS THAT A HORSE?"
"PISS OFF YA WANKER," I yell back at him and turning my attention to the four legged cyan figure that was standing in the isle next to my seat, "Look Dash I don't know about you, Bill, Derpy, MUM or Daybreak but I want to finish school. I have nothing else...I need SOME intelligence don't I?"
"Well...Yes...But..."
"But exactly...Look dash I only have one and a half more years of school to go, how do you know that that isn't going to help me? Even in PonyVille? I'm doing music for a subject so when I finish I can go work with Vinyl Scratch"
I don't know why Dash wants me to go back but I'm not going back...Not until she...
"Matthew Alan Chase, what is this," I hear the bus driver say walking up the isle "WHAT THE FUCK IS THIS?"
This bust driver isn't one that you want to mess with...He drilled some kid's head into the window last month cause he dropped a leaf by accident...I don't want to see him get mad in THIS way.
"Ummmmm... Yeah Dash I'm ready to go back for a quick sec...I miss the shack," I blurt out trying to avoid the bus driver's rage, "I MISS YOU! I MISS PONYVILLE!"
Dash just launches at me, throwing her legs around my waste and hits the button on her device which I see strapped to her neck...how handy.
We awake in PonyVille, back in the shack as usual.
"Ughhhh, Dashie I need to finish school... Please"
Just then Dash planted her lips on mine forcing my head into the ground. I don't know why she is. I only saw her a couple of months ago now.
"Wow i've missed your kisses Dashie," I say trying to get her face off of mine, "But I real...Oh," I groaned looking down to see four legs...again... "Why do I have to be a pony again? I kinda liked being a human again"
"Matt? MATT," I hear someone shouting...It's mum "MATT I MISSED YOU"
"Hi, mum...I'm not staying for long as I'm going back to school!"
"Dad?"
"DAYBREAK," I yelled running over to him and face planting...damn four legs "HOW ARE YA?"
"Well, I have been kinda depressed lately, but now seeing you face plant there I have to admit I feel a hell of a lot better"
I look up to see him...Nearly as big as me...And who has to walk in behind him?
"Hello," I hear the mysterious voice call from the shadow of the curtain "I haven't seen you in a long time"
"Who...Who are you?"
"Dad, this is my girlfriend"
"WHAT? That was quick"
"Well, yeah I do kinda tend to make ponies fall in love at first sight... I think I learned that trait from you," He said smiling to Dash who was nodding to herself.
"And what is your name," I ask to which it just walks further into the shadow not revealing his or her face...please be her, please be a her...
"I'm your worst nightmare"
I couldn't work out who it was until it clicked in my brain. Who was the one that said that about a year ago? SCOOTALOO!
"SCOOTALOO," I yell at her and she comes running from out of the darkness and gives me a hug nearly knocking me over again "WAI...WHA?"
"TWIX! I have missed you...oh...umm...This is awkward," Scootaloo is starting to shake, I think it's nerves of kinda meeting your boyfriends father.
"It's ok Scootaloo, I know that neither of you will disappoint each other."
"Haha, Thanks dad"
"Thank you Twix"
I notice how tall they are...Nearly as tall as me and Dash.
"Holy shit you guys are big"
"Well, what did I say?"
"I dunno, what DID you say?"
"We mature faster"
"But even Scoots is taller"
"Yeah she is only a couple of years older than me"
"Ok, Where's Bill and Derpy?"
"Twixy, I have something to tell you," Dash finally starts to talk again.
"Oh?"
"Well...Bill was kinda...Ummmm..."
"What?"
"He went back to Earth"
"So? Maybe him and Der...OH NO! DERPY'S ON EARTH?"
Dash nods
"HOLY SHIT! SHE WOULD BLOW UP THE ENTIRE UNIVERSE"
"Yeah, that's the main thing I wanted you to come back, so I could tell you"
"WAIT! I don't care, I'm not going back to Earth anymore"
"Wha...I thought you wanted to finish school!"
"Not really now that I'm back here, I just wish that I could've gotten a chance to say bye to Bill and Derpy...I always wanted to meet Derpy"
"Why?"
"I don't really know...She actually seemed like a nice pony"
"A nice pony?"
"NOT AS NICE AS YOU DASH!"
"Yeah, that's what I thought"
All the ponies in the shack just giggled at Dash's minor jealous episode.
"So Matty and Dash, have you guys thought of a date for the wedding yet?" Mum asks as she walks out from the kitchen, we both give each other another hug and kiss.
"Well, Twix I was thinking, how about two weeks from now?"
"TWO WEEKS! HELL IS THAT EVEN ENOUGH TIME FOR YOU TO PICK THE VENUE"
"Oh c'mon Twix! I already have got a wedding gown, Pinkie DID offer to through the party, and you...ummm...i'll just get you a suit tomorrow."
"What about bridmans dresses?"
"Bridesmaids?"
"Yeah, I'm only on my final few weeks of year eleven! How would I know anything about weddings?"
"Cause, I do and I have only been to flight school"
"And medical school?"
"Yeah"
I look over towards the couch to see Scootaloo and Daybreak sucking on each other's faces. Bawwwwwww...So...Cute...He's only...wait! How old is he? Should I ask? Fuck it I'll go for it!
"Daybreak, how old are you again?"
"I'm 10 years old dad, you should know that"
"SAY WHAT?"
"I said that I'm 10"
"I'm 16 ! How do you explain that?"
"Because dad, you're a human and I'm a hor...pony"
"Did you really just get confused then?"
"No, I have always wanted to say that"
"Dash how old are you?"
"Well, I'm 20"
"WHAT THE HELL? ARE YOU TELLING ME THAT I SCREWED A 20 YEAR OLD HORSE WITH WINGS? AND HAD A BABY FOAL WHICH IS NEARLY AS OLD AS ME?"
"Well...yeah"
"Sweet," It really doesn't bother me that everything was all bundled up but I'm happy. I wish that I could've just finished school. But, I guess that I don't need to anymore.
"Look Twix, I really have missed you"
"Dash, I won't lie. I have missed you, in fact I cried at school every day I was there"
Truth is I did! I cried every lunch time and every lesson. I missed her.