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Under Cover:
When Lassiter is under cover, he is very obvious. That is why he is now pissed off at detective Juliet O'Hara. Juliet was currently working at a Casino in Vegas. Lassiter was stuck sitting next to Spencer and having to listen to him rattle off one of his idiotic "visions". Sometimes, life just sucks.
Sneaky:
Young Gus: Mr. Spencer, do you like shooting people?
Henry: Gus, why are you here?
Young Gus: I am thinking of being a police officer when I grow up!
Henry: Gus, you would never make it. Whenever anything happens that might be a little scary, you run off screaming like a little girl. (says a little louder) And, Shawn I told you to stop trying to sneak up on me. It never works. Gus would not come and talk to me alone if he wasn't helping you.
Young Shawn: Hey Dad! I just got home from school. Can I get some cookies?
Henry: Shawn, they call me the Human Lie Detector for a reason. Your voice always sounds higher when you are hiding something from me. Besides, you will get cavities if you keep eating this much sugar, Shawn!
Young Shawn: (Sighs), Can Gus at least stay for dinner please?
Henry: We are going to your Aunts house for dinner, Shawn. Gus is welcome to come if he wants, though.
Young Gus: (whispers to Shawn) The crazy Aunt?
Young Shawn: Yeah, the crazy one.
Young Gus: (To Henry) I think I should be getting home Mr. Spencer. I have homework to do. Thanks for inviting me, though. Bye Shawn!
Henry: (to Shawn) You never sneak up on someone from behind. You come at them from the side, just out of their view. Shawn, are you listening?
Young Shawn: Hmm?
Henry: (sighs) Whatever Shawn. When you need to sneak up on someone in a life or death situation, don't come crying to me when you get shot.
Young Shawn: When? You mean if! Also, how could I come crying to you if I get shot? Dead people don't cry!
Henry: Fine Shawn. If you want to play smart alec, spell every thing I said, leaving out all of the 'E' and the 'Y'.
Young Shawn: Umm... Umm... I don't feel so good... I think I'm going to be sick!
Young Shawn starts to run off, quickly.
Henry: (mutters to himself) Whatever. (calls after Shawn) Don't forget! If you are sick, there is no television or video games!
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