Hey guys! Just thought I would add an extra chapter to do review replies, even though so far I've only gotten one! I was so pleased when I saw someone had reviewed, especially since how bad I thought it was! It actually made my day, I started squealing in my room, haha! I just thought you deserved a reply, I would've felt ignorant otherwise

mozzi-girl,

Thank you so much for saying that, I completely agree with you, it didn't flow very well, I guess it's because it was really rushed. Anyways, i'm really happy that you thought it was good! And your right, fluff is FLUFFY! I think you are an amazing writer, your stories are well thought through, realistic, funny, and not cliche like alot of stories, the first story of yours I've read was 'capital holiday' which is actually one of the best stories I have ever read on Fanfiction! So thank you so much for the constructive criticism, it means alot coming from such an excellent writer (Bet you think I'm a kiss-up, heh?).