Did I surprise you with the last chapter? Yeah, I surprised me too. I never thought Bella was the killing type. For all you Edward lovers, he WILL be coming in the story soon. Swear! Don't hurt me if it's not in the next few chapters! I love seeing how many people are reading this story. Like I just posted "Chapter 4: I'm Sorry"... not even an hour ago (ish) and already 23 people have read it and I've gotten 4 reviews! That makes me SOOOO happy! Like I went to the park and danced around like a freak kinda happy! Which got awkward because I saw the dude I liked... that wasn't a fun conversation... And there were a lot of people who were kind of confused whether or not Mike was REALLY dead or not... Yes, he's dead as a doornail. Wow I've always wanted to say that. Anddd, I'm ranting.
Okay, sorry this is so late, (or early, I don't know when I'm going to get done) but it's not my fault, I was reading, what was probably the BEST unpublished writing I've ever seen. Like really. It's called "A May to December Romance" It's 130 something thousand words but I absolutely adored it. Here's the link of you want to read it - .net/s/6632226/1/A_May_to_December_Romance
Now WHY does it cut out the www. fanfiction part? That's annoying!I was REALLY disappointed with the lack of reviews.
I know that it was only one day but really... ONE?
So I'm going to put a poll in my profile. I think that's how it works? I don't know. But if I can figure it out, it'll be there. Check it out! (If you don't want Mike to be dead... I would reccomend checking it out)
Disclaimer: I aint own nuttin. Get over it.
When He Wakes Up
Bella POV
Last Chapter: I dropped the rock and backed away slowly. I couldn't stop staring at his lifeless body, laying in a pool of blood. Because of me. "I'm sorry Mike" I whispered.
Turning my head, I looked for clothes that weren't completely shredded.
Leaning over painfully, grabbing my dirty tee and jeans, tears poured down my face, but now it wasn't from fear, now it was out of guilt. What I had done could never be taken back.
Fazed I began doing the simple tasks of pulling my legs through my jeans, one at a time. Pulling the shirt over my head. Pushing my arms through the holes. The normality of it made me feel calmer.
"He's going to be mad when he wakes up." I whispered to myself. He'd hurt me so much more when he woke up. He'll be so angry.
I picked up the blood-covered rock, weighing it in my hands. Maybe if I hit him hard enough, then it would take him longer to get me.
I hobbled over to him and got on my knees, next to him. I thought about his mouth on my neck, and brought the sharp rock over my head. With a grunt, I brought it down to his neck. The crack of the bone snapping under the pressure gave me hope. A chance to get away.
I brought the rock on his shoulder, for when he grabbed mine. His ankle, for causing the pain in mine. His arms, grabbing me, hurting me. His hands, punching me. His feet, kicking me.
Finally, I smashed the rock into his manhood, for all the fear he had given me, and everything that he had made me do. But, it wasn't enough, I needed to be sure that he wouldn't be able to outrun me when he woke up. So I leaned over his leg and bit his ankle. Clenching my teeth together, until I felt blood. I did the same to the other.
I stood, slowly, my legs protesting. Looking at his mangled body, I smiled. It would be a lot harder for him to get me now.
I turned and walked out of the clearing, not looking back.
Anyone interested in betaing? I could use it. Just PM me and we can work something out.
Sorry it's so short. Will post a longer chapter tomorrow. Promise!
And if you've seen my summary (Obviously you have) you know that it's REALLY bad and doesn't explain anything. If anyone wants to help and rewrite it for me, they'd be my favorite person in the world.
Thanks for reading, and again... the review box is down there.
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