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Bella's POV

I was on my way to forks, to stay with my father, Charlie. He my mother separated when I was about five. I lived with my mother, Renee, and went to stay with Charlie almost every summer. One year I didn't go and haven't gone since. When Phil came into my mother's life she was happiest she's ever been. That's when I decided to stay with Charlie. My mom protested and tried to convince me to stay, but under her protest I could tell she was glad to see me leave. I was only a reminder of Charlie to her. Nothing more, nothing less.

I was getting off the plane when some one grabbed me from behind. In seconds I was out cold. When I woke up I was in a dark alley. I looked around trying to remember what happened. I focused my eyes and saw a figure standing over me. He smiled and grabbed me. I looked into his eyes wondering what had I done to deserve this. He stared at me with blood red eyes and a grin only the devil would wear. He looked at me and put his mouth next to my ear. I shivered as I felt his breathe on my face.

The last thing I heard was him saying "Now you're mine forever…"

I screamed as I felt his teeth tear through my flesh.

Then nothing but darkness, pain and an untamable fire through out my whole being… he truly was the devil… and now I knew I was in hell…

I felt the burning through out my whole body. I held in my screams not wanting to give him the satisfaction of what he did. But what did he do? I tried to concentrate on the voices and sounds around me, anything to get my mind off the pain. I heard the wind rushing past me. The burning intensified, I felt my heart try and fight the fire. It was a loosing battle with each beat the heat increased. Until finally after what felt like years of struggle, with a final heartbeat, my heart stopped. The burning decreased and was focused completely on my throat. I opened my eyes and saw the devil staring at me. Instantly I was ten feet away crouched and ready. What just happened I thought. I straightened up still keeping a wary eye on the man across from. I looked around everything was in perspective and clear. It was in, itself beautiful.

"Hello Bella," said the man.

"Who are you? How do you know me?" I asked growling. Wait did I just growl.

"My name is James. I've been watching you Bella," he said with a sicking sweet tone.

"What did you do to me?" I snarled. Damm it now i'm snarling too.

"I turned you." He said taking a step towards me. I immediately took a step back.

"What do you mean turned me?" I asked in a confused tone.

"You're a vampire now," he said smiling. I shivered.

"No that's not possible! They don't exist. I'm not…" I said shakily.

"You are a vampire. My venom is in you. You belong to me. I'm all you have now," he said coming closer to me. I didn't react I couldn't. Before I knew it he was next to me. He pinned me to a tree. I didn't fight him. I was still trying to comprehend everything.

He smirked, " good girl. Come on you must be thirsty," as he said this the burning in my throat intensified. My hand clutched my throat. He turned and grabbed my hand taking him with him. I noted that if I were still human, I would never keep up with his pace. We ran for a few seconds, as I breathed in the air I could smell everything. As I inhaled deeply, a scent caught my attention. I snapped my hand away from James and ran in the direction of the scent. As I ran I noticed I was being followed. I followed the scent to a small clearing. My instincts took over and I lunged. I snapped its neck and sucked the blood dry. I got up looking at what I had done.

The bear was lying on the floor motionless. I felt so guilty looking at the lifeless carcass.

"Hmm. You're a natural." James said looking at me with a glint in his eye.

"I'm a monster." I whispered.

"We're not monsters, we're gods." He said. Wow his ego is way up his ass. I looked at the bear and decided to bury the poor creature. It took me seconds to bury him. When I was done James grabbed my hand pulling me in the direction we had originally had headed.

"If you thought smelled good wait until you smell this." He said smiling. I hated that smile.

As he towed me toward the unknown direction, we came across what I recognized as a mountain trail. A smell suddenly hit me. I gagged at the revolting scent. James turned to look at me.

"What's wrong with you?" he said.

"That smell, its revolting" I yelled trying not to breathe.

He stared at me like I was from a different planet. He ran towards the woods and before I could understand what had happened he was back with a man over his shoulders.

"Is this the scent?" he asked me.

I smelled him and started gagging, nodding my head. He looked angry for a second then took the man and drank him dry.

"Lets go," he growled. I followed him back into the woods.


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