I'm so sorry for not updating yesterday, my Dad convinced me to go and help him clean out the pool, and it took hours. Fortunately, it was warm out, but still…
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Chapter 15- Mazes
I looked around at my family, and saw that they all looked ready to do something fun, real. Something to get our blood pumping- ok, well, we didn't exactly have real blood, so Bella's blood pumping, which wasn't that hard, whenever Edward just looked at her, oh god, never mind…
I looked at the next item on the list, number 14- Organize some of the merchandise into a maze, and stand at the end, congratulating anyone who makes it out. Ooh, that could be fun.
I quickly read it out loud to everyone, and they all perked up instantly, especially Emmett. This was going to be fun.
We quickly decided on a plan. "Emmett, Jasper, you guys go and get some of the bigger item in the store, sofa's, shelves, just big stuff, and bring it to that big isle in the middle of the store." I instructed. "Oh, and if anyone asks what you are doing, say that you are trying to decide if you want to buy it or not, or come up with a better excuse." I finished, they both nodded.
"Wait, how come I don't get to pick up the bigger stuff too?" Edward said. He was joking though, I could tell from the glint in his eye. I smiled.
"Don't complain, or I will make you go clean toilets, did you here me soldier." I said. He stared at me for a moment, before saying in a quiet voice.
"Alice, we aren't in the army, you know." I rolled my eyes, I knew that, of course I did, Anywho…
"Alright, Bella, you and Rosalie go and start clearing the area of people, and make sure no one knows what's going on, once I give you the signal, you are to instruct them into the maze, any questions?" I said. They took off without a backward glance, man; I would be an awesome leader of something… Maybe I could start the new A team…
"Alice?" Edward was waving a hand at me. Now I know that starting the new A team might be fun, but can we finish the first idea that you roped us into first, please?" He asked me, a little laugh in his voice. I stuck my tongue out at him. He was just jealous he didn't come up with all of these ideas first.
Edward rolled his eyes at me. "Fine, you and I are going to design the course, and find some of the smaller items we will need." I said. Edward nodded.
And in a matter of minutes, the design was set; all we needed now was to complete it…
"Thank you for completing the course, it is appreciated, her is your free coupon for twenty dollars off your Wal Mart purchase." I said brightly, a smile on my face as I handed out the coupons.
After we had set up the obstacle course, I had gone to the front and bought a huge book of Mal Mart coupons, and was giving them out as a reward. We were doing quite well; actually, there had been over twenty people through our maze so far. And no one who worked here had even come up to us yet.
Another small group of people made their way through the maze, laughing as I handed them their coupons. I didn't see what was so funny, hadn't these people ever seen a maze in the middle of a Wal Mart, made up of different items before, honestly?
Though, I was kind of getting tired of handing out coupons. I looked at the next item, and smiled. We had to do that, now. Plus I saw Tag coming up, and he didn't look happy.
"Come on guys!" I called, and we took off, laughing. This was getting interesting.
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First, thank you guys for your impute, I think that I am going to keep it between 25 and 30 chapters.
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