*Alala's POV*

"OKAY! Let's go Melody-chii! I wanna meet Midnight Cross-chan!" I yelled at the platinum pearl mermaid princess

"ALALA SHUT UP! We'll make sure... What was her name again Lady Bat?" Fuku asked Lady Bat

"Melody."

"We'll make sure Melody takes you to see Midnight Cross-chan If you just SHUT UP!"

"Okay Fuku-kun!" YAY I'M GONNA GO MEET MIDNIGHT CROSS!

*Lady Bat's POV*

Thank God Alala shut up but unfortunately we all had to tag along with the squealing Alala, the majorly annoyed Melody, The silent Michal, and the sleeping Fuku. Then we actually got there

"Wow, That's huge are you sure this is a recording studio? Melody you listening?"

"Yes it is My Step-Mom works here and I help out too."

"Step-Mom?"

"Yeah. Step Mom Why?"

"No reason. Didn't mean to offend you Mel."

"You didn't offend me. No one really knows her. I bet you guys don't." Why did she say that with a smirk? Oh well I bet one of us will ask... Um never mind I think I will...

"Umm Melody... Who is your Mum?" Crap she's laughing

"Aqua Regina-sama." CRAP Aqua Regina is her mother we're in trouble if we get caught. She was laughing so hard and we were all freaking out.

"Guys don't worry I don't talk to her she hardly part of my life I spend most of my time on land anyway so who cares?" Why is she so carefree? I need to get to know her.

*Normal POV*

As they walked into the building many heads turned and greeted the bleach blonde girl.

"Good Morning Midnight-sama!"

"SAY WHAT!"

*Alala's POV*

"You're My Idol?"

"Yup"

"WHY DIDN'T YOU TELL ALALA!"

"Didn't feel like it." She's so carefree and she's one of the best pop stars EVER! How is that?

Ashley: aha I was little lazy with this one but still at least I finished!

Lady Bat: Any Reviews this time?

Ashley: Yup actually there was and it was from Awesome Rapidash here it is!

Well I am curious where this is all going to lead! Please do take time to develop Melody. Most OCs suffer the pit falls of being underdeveloped or become Mary Sues.

Watch your punctuation and capitalization's. You have these errors in both chapters.

It's Lanhua, NOT Ranfa! I don't care what it says in the character list here on , it's wrong! I'm a big fan of Lanhua and I dislike it when her name is misspelled! I used the English translation of the Manga as my reference for the correct spelling of her name.

One thing, please don't write out every word of the songs. Most readers will skip over it anyway. So keep it short and instead, add to the story itself. I'm interested in what will happen next.

Ashley: um thanks for that review it took awhile but Melody is developing and I'm sorry I watched the anime and the subs said Ranfa so that's what I got into saying. I will say Lanhua from now on in the story just so I don't get any more reviews getting mad at for calling her Ranfa. And for the songs my mother told me that too so from now on I won't I even got bored with it. T_T I'm 13 and don't have very good grammar while typing or writing any story that's why I have my mom as my editor.

Lady bat: okay then R&R plz

Melody: I'm poorly developed I know.

Lanhua: Is my name harder to type now

Ashley: Yup -_-'