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Chapter 6

Nessie's Pov~

As Edward stared at me. Jacob and I were holding hands. I just notice that and I keep on holding onto his warm hand. Edward looks down still looking at that place. He looks up finally. "Dad, we don't need to discuss any damn thing." I clenched through my teeth to say.

He growled at Jacob and Jacob just looked down like no damn thing was happening. Edward looked at me and pulled me away from Jacob while he let go so we could talk for a few minutes. "What the hell do you want? Why the hell do you hate him? When he was over mom didn't care. But first thing she said about Jake he was irritating. Mom was lying wasn't she?" I asked.

Edward clenched his hand in a fist. "Renesmee, what I want is that if you don't want a discussion you have to stay away from that mutt. I hate him because for certain reason you do not need to know about. Your mom lied to you for me because I hate Jacob and the point is that I don't want him to hurt you. Did he say anything about that? That he could hurt you really badly." I nodded yea but I didn't care a bit. Goddamn it! "Stop with the language because I hate it with you saying it all the time." Edward hissed.

"Fine!" I yelled out. "We will have a discussion. But I am riding with Jake because I don't want to talk to you a bit at all anymore." I spate out at him. Jake comes down and he walks me to his car. He opens the door for me but I close it. He was so cute. He was literally hot. I mean both hot. The one where you are warm and the way you call someone handsome, I guess. No dad, I am not saying sorry for that.

"So..." He said turning on music. He didn't know what to say because he knew Edward would hear us.

"How good am I at kissing?" I asked wanting to know. "Tell me the truth." I said wanting to know if I was good. He shrugged. "Oh, you need to kiss me again." He smiled.

"I want an answer though. I want to know if I am good or bad." I said telling the truth.

"Maybe I need to kiss you again." He said maybe telling the truth. "I would but your dad would kill me." He said telling the truth. "So am I a good kisser?" He asked me. I thought of that answer for minutes. But I didn't answer because we got to my house. He stopped. Edward was waiting for us by the door.

"You should kiss me again." I say. He looks at me like I am crazy because my dad was right at the doorway. "Please." I beg to him. My dad looks at us and is watching us. He heard what we were talking about. "I will tell you if you're a good kisser." I keep urging him to do that.

"Not in front of Edward at least." He says and gets out of the car while I do the same and walk up to the door. My dad looks at me because I told Jake to kiss me.

I sit on the couch while Jacob sits on the chair that is next to the couch. "Jacob." Edward hissed. "Stop thinking about her like that." Then Edward growled at him. Bella comes down. "Bella, don't even say a word love." Edward says calm. Bella looks at him. 'Fine.' Edward mouths. "Only what you want to say."

"Hey Jacob." She says and hugs him. "Hello Nessie." I say hi back. Then she turns to Edward. "Why the hell is Nessie home? She haves to be at school. You know how I feel about her missing some of school. Let's let her ditch a class. Let's take her out of a class to go have a talk about something. I don't get why you would bring her here." Mom says in a loud tone at Dad which was pretty much funny.

"Oh, mom is we did that can it be history?" She looks at me stern so I shut up. Then Bella finally sits down when Edward tells her what is happening.

Jacob's Pov~

Damn. Nessie was so hot that now I wished I kissed her in the car. Edward told me to leave outside for a minute. I do. Nessie comes out and tells me her dad told me to go in. "Wait." She says when I was about to walk in. "Kiss me." She demanded. "Please." She says. I walk back to her. I leaned won while she leans forward. Almost her lips touching.

"Jacob!" I back away. She just waves while I go in. "Jacob, I swear if you kiss my daughter again I will kill you. You will not talk to her or touch her, kiss her, come in this house, and if you do I will kill you. So go to hell or go away." He says mean.

"I have one question." Edward nods. "Happens she wants it." I say and Edward looks at him like he was going to kill him. "I will take that as a no." I say and leave the house. Nessie tried to talk to me but I ignore like her father says.

Nessie's Pov~

I run in the house when Jake just ignores me. I go to my room and lock the door. I just sit there and cries then think. I opened my window for fresh air. I just cry. Warm arms touch me. I look up and see Jacob. "Why did you ignore me?" I ask him quick. I look out the window and see that it is night already. "Tell me." I wanted to know.

"Because you dad will kill me. I didn't want to die that minute." He says and I notice Jacob is shirtless. "So…" He says. He sits on my bed. I go closer to him. I look in the mirror that is next to me and my eyes are red and my makeup smeared. I get up and wash my makeup off and he just watches me. "Do you want to go somewhere where your dad can't?" I nod yea. "Get on my back." I did and he ran somewhere. We were at the La Push Beach.

He grabbed my hand and took me to the water. My feet didn't touch the water. "Kiss me." I say. He just leans down and I lean forward. Our lips touched. I kissed back. We let our tongues explore. I kiss him back. Soon we let go. He lay down in the sand I laid on top of him and I drifted to sleep.

I woke up in a room. Not my room. It was Saturday. I knew my dad would be mad so I didn't want to go home. I heard a lot of talking. I got up and went to the room. It was person I didn't know. "Oh my god! I am Seth and I seen you when you were born too." A guy named Seth said. "Hope we didn't wake you. Anyway won't your dad be mad you are gone?" Seth asks. He likes to talks a lot but I like him.

"Yea my dad will care. But I don't give crap what he thinks." I say and lean against the wall. There were 2 boys which were Embry and Quil. Then there were 2 other boys and one boy was looking at me. Who are you guys?" I ask them.

"Oh! Those people are Sam and Paul. Well we better head to Emily's for food." He said getting up. Everyone left the room to outside and then Seth came back. "Come on Nessie, coming or going home?" He asks. I ask where is it and he tells me in the woods which is in La Push. His phone starts ringing. He answers. "Na...Bella, Nessie okay and she thinks I am awesome." I laugh. "No! Edward she doesn't want to talk to you. I know because I am son of a bitch! Oh you better fucking shut up bloodsucker. Yes she is in front of me. Fine sorry for damn language." Then he hangs up. "I am going to fuck Edward!" He yells. "Sorry." He says.

Then he grabs me. Everyone left. "Dammit! Everyone left me!" He just grabs me on his shoulders and run to Emily's house and drops me. "Don't you hate it when people leave you when they don't want to leave out a person?" He goes in the house. "You guys are all son of bitches. Except you Emily and you Nessie." He says and sits down and grabs food. I smile.

"Hello Nessie. I met your mother. So are you coming to my wedding this summer." I ask and I shrugged. "You didn't tell her Jacob." She looks at Jacob.

"No. Why would I?" He says and Emily throws a vase at him. He catches it.

"I smell a vampire." Sam says alert.


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Do they smell Nessie or a vampire?

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