Hey guys! This is chapter 2. I tried to make it longer and I think I succeeded. I'd like to thank Katie again, she's now my official editor. Again, I was listening to the halo 3 main theme over and over while writing this. Katie said she couldn't stop hnnnnnging so tell me what you think!


Fluttershy stared up at Big Mac with a stricken face. She gathered herself and stood up to walk past the colt in complete and utter embarrassment. Big Mac followed her with his gaze, confused.

He shrugged off the incident and continued walking. He stopped to see Rarity, greeting him with a graceful smile spread across her face.

"Why hello there, Miss Rarity," He said with a small grin across his face.

"Why helloooooo there, Monsieur Big Mac~" She said with a lustful look in her eyes.

Big Mac being himself didn't notice the look in her eyes, he just continued to put on a half-smile for the filly.

"How are ya' doin' today, ma'am?" His deep voice nearly made Rarity shiver. Her response was one that seemed to catch his attention.

"Oh, I'm doing…swellllll." She said as she ran her flank against his.

Big Mac didn't see the gesture as sexual, just odd. He stood there with his smile still in place and his gaze forward.

Rarity huffed.

"Fine, I'll just be on my way then…" She trotted off with her nose in the air, her mane bouncing with each step.

Mac blinked, confused, and continued through the town.

Fluttershy bolted to her house once she was out of viewing distance from Ponyville. She shut her door and slumped down to the floor in front of her doorstep.

She wasn't usually this emotional about something so simple, so she headed to her bed, thinking she was just tired.

As she closed her eyes, the image of her smacking into Big Mac shot through her mind. She jumped out of bed, yelling. "I have to apologize!"

She ran to her door and opened it gingerly, and then started floating towards the town.

Big Mac had gotten his daily walk through town in and decided to head back home to check if Granny Smith needed any help around the house.

He turned to start walking home when he saw the same yellow filly headed towards him. He braced himself for another collision, but relaxed when the filly landed in front of him, staring into his eyes with her sky blue crystals.

"B-Big Mac..?" She said, ever so softly.

"Eeyup?" He answered with his bold voice.

She began with a small shy voice. "I-I'm quite sorry for…running into you earlier…"

Her face was pointed to the ground.

A wider smile spread across Mac's face.

"It's quite alright, ma'am. Just…be carefu-"

CRASH

A speeding Pinkie rushed straight into them. She appeared to have a blindfold over her eyes.

"Pinkie Pie?" Flutter whisper-shouted.

"Oh, I'm sorry guys! I was playing pin the tail on the pony and I got too excited cause I was winning and I guess I got lost. You guys should !"

Big Mac blinked.

As did Fluttershy.

"Oops! Better get back to the party! Can't keep the others waiting~" She trotted off joyfully.

Fluttershy realized that she was on top of Big Mac, her body spread over his. She quickly jumped off and started apologizing repeatedly.

"It's alright ma'am. No harm done." He said as he slowly got up himself.

He dusted himself off and put the smile back on his face.

"Let me treat ya to some lunch to apologize for the trouble." He said to her in his usual deep voice.

"O-okay…" She replied.


Oh god. cant. stop. hnnnnnnging.