[A/N] First off, i would like to say that some (or one person in particular) took my little 'rant' out of text.
i was simply saying it was a little disappointing to have about 150 people have me on story alert etc and only get the reviews i do.
I was NOT saying that writing this was a waste of my time, because i enjoy writing a lot and would probably continue to write even if i was getting one review per chapter (don't get any idea's)
I have a lot of stress in my life, and writing is my outlet.
And to the person that gave me my first negative comment, fuck you. Im not immature for being disappointed, its called being human.
Now that I've cleared that up, or at least i think i have, i shall get on with the chapter.
Hostile Bella Has Come To Say Hi, Everyone. :P
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Chapter 13 - The Little Bitch.
Bella Pov.
As soon as she spotted us, she started walking towards us, great. For a vampire.. she wasn't very pretty. Her brown hair was cut and all different levels which made it look jagged instead of sophisticated like she hoped, it cascaded down her back roughly and had no shine to it which just made it look dirty and unwashed. Her eyes were crimson red, which meant the bitch fed on humans, i swear if she ate one on my watch, she would not see the light of tomorrow.. she would be dead in a split second. Her tall, thin, frame only made all these features stick out and the clothes she wore probably made Alice want to hit her. Green pants and a tatty brown shirt. It looked downright repulsive.
If she was trying to look human, she was doing it.. and then some. Not only did she look human, she looked like a poor human with absolutely no fashion sense what so ever.. Even I wouldn't wear that.. or anything even close. I wonder if she can actually be pretty... she'd need A LOT of help by the looks of her though. Ha! if she was this ugly now.. imagine her as an actual Human. I started to giggle and everyone stared at me like i was an insane person running around with a litter of kittens and throwing them at people. The girl walked to us and then stopped a few feet away from us.
"The Cullens, Right?" She asked. She knew who we were.... good.
"Yeah" Emmett answered, he was always the one to answer.. probably because he looked the most intimidating.
"Alice, Rosalie, Emmett, Jasper And Edward, right?" Ha! so she leaves me out.
"And Bella" Edward corrected. Good boy, i thought to myself. His grip around my waist tightened and he pulled me closer and kiss my cheek. I grinned wickedly and turned my head and kissed him on the lips. I hadn't bothered looking in her head yet, so i decided now was a good a time as any. I tried, but she had a shield in place. I started laughing, out loud.. which just made everyone look at me weirdly again.. except for Edward and who ever this chick was. Edward obviously didn't look at me weirdly because he could read her thoughts now, so he knew what i was doing.. although he was probably confused as to why i was laughing. The girl didn't look at me weirdly, because she was glaring at me. It was probably more of a death glare, or what she thought was one anyway, but it only seemed to make me laugh even more.
"Thought you could keep me out, eh?" I asked, not exactly expecting an answer.
"Get the fuck out of my head, skank" She said to me in what she thought was a menacing voice, it only made me laugh even more. Now people that were walking past were looking at me weirdly as well.
"Don't call Bella a skank, bitch, or i will tear you apart" Emmett threw back at her. Over the past week, Em was really like a big brother to me. We even had cute nicknames, brother Bear and Little Bear. If i was human, i would be pissing myself i was laughing so hard and i couldn't even stop laughing, thanx to the funny 'glares' this stupid girl was shooting me.
Fuck Edward is HOT! Im going to have to get rid of this Bella.. make this god MINE. She doesn't even deserve his, she just some fucking whore.
i hope he leaves her sorry ass. And who the fuck does this oaf think he is, calling me a bitch. Ha! i should make him fall in love with Bella so that i can have Edward.
Or maybe i should just make Edward fall in love with me, use my power to have him stop loving Bella and start loving me.
Why would he even love her? Look at her. She's just some ugly piece of shit.
She thought. That was it, i was officially fed up with her shit, and she was on my last nerve.
"AH! YOU FUCKING COW!" She screamed at me when i pulled back my arm after punching her square in the face. Obviously with more force than even Em could punch her. Maybe now she'd get her shit together, but seriously.. what are the chances of that happening. What's the bet she'll try hit me in 3... 2... 1... She lunged at me. I dodged, and she almost fell over. Not very smart for a vampire, she really did not help the whole 'Vampire's are terrifying and they'll kill you without mercy' thing that the humans had going. Ha! a human could probably kill her. She must've been one ugly, clumsy, poor fashion sensed, stupid, weak Human.
"Come on honey, As much as I'd LOVE to fuck you right here just to shove it in this whore's face, we do have class.. and i don't particularly want to be late on the account of this pathetic excuse for a vampire." I told Edward before walking towards class with the gang following, laughing their heads off.
[A/N] Nasty Bella, ouch. lol.
Do you guys like this side of Bella.. or is she supposed to be all innocent and sweet and helpless?
Review if you liked it.
And review if you hated it
I would like to know.
What happens next... mysterious. haha.
theme park tommorrow! woo!
and just to let ya'll know... the flavour 'apriocot mango peach' yoghurt is really yum. :P and you should definitely review if you agree... haha
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